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ANJ4

@ANJ4

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

part 1 was great ... Love the way ahem took charge .

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shruti aggarwal

@shruts18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: ANJ4
part 1 was great ... Love the way ahem took charge .

Thanks a lot Anju😊

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shruti aggarwal

@shruts18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: tina_1234
veryy nyc part

Thank you Tina😊

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shruti aggarwal

@shruts18

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: swasthi
That was just a fabulous update Shruthi.

Ahem has transformed into a lovable, caring husband. All it takes is one bad moment when the best things are nearly snatched away from you.

You had a super scene between mother and son, keeping Kokila so similar to the show but Ahem speaking his heart out to her.This is want we need to see happening in the show.

This holiday they are going on sounds so romantic - a cruise to Mauritius. There are lots to do on board and at the destination.

Looking forward to the next update.

Thank you very much Swasthi...great that you liked it😊

Yeah my Ahem would always be loving and caring, just the way in the show but a bit more expressive😊

And I am looking forward to their great holiday and feel and enjoy what they don't do in the show and maybe do in coming times!

Will update soon.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Thank you Shruti for this wonderful treat. It was so perfect. I loved how you brought Ahem to his realization. The man is very intelligent and came up with a perfect plan to help her heal and gain confidence. Can't wait to see what he does to put her at ease. Pictures were brilliant.

@VM anytime Shruti, no problem. That is one of my favorite also.

Thanks for the PM, I can't wait for the next update.

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Nandita / Tina

@5cents

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Shruti, abs mind-blowing with audio visuals👏. Perfect use of Shilpa's VM to complete your story👍🏼. 2 weeks in Mauritius, Koki agreed ...wo!! Great going! Can I be the official photographer pretty please with cherry on top😳

My dear what would those sparkling attributes be😉?? Hmmm are you planning to take us on a world tour of tools 😛 . Anyway whatever you'll write we'll find it very interesting😉. Waiting for a update from Mauritius 😍😳

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shruti aggarwal

@shruts18

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Ahemji
Loved it.It was great.

Thanks you Ahemji😉...our Ahemji and Gopi are just so good!😛

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shruti aggarwal

@shruts18

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: sbp1971
Thank you Shruti for this wonderful treat. It was so perfect. I loved how you brought Ahem to his realization. The man is very intelligent and came up with a perfect plan to help her heal and gain confidence. Can't wait to see what he does to put her at ease. Pictures were brilliant.

@VM anytime Shruti, no problem. That is one of my favorite also.

Thanks for the PM, I can't wait for the next update.

Thanks Shilpa for loving it so much😊

Just trying to write it the perfect way just the way Ahem in the show is and hope I can do justice even 50%😊

So, I will using your VMs in my stories...is it fine😛

I'll PM next when I'll update😊

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shruti aggarwal

@shruts18

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: 5cents
Shruti, abs mind-blowing with audio visuals👏. Perfect use of Shilpa's VM to complete your story👍🏼. 2 weeks in Mauritius, Koki agreed ...wo!! Great going! Can I be the official photographer pretty please with cherry on top😳
My dear what would those sparkling attributes be😉?? Hmmm are you planning to take us on a world tour of tools 😛 . Anyway whatever you'll write we'll find it very interesting😉. Waiting for a update from Mauritius 😍😳

Thank you so much Tina😊

So these guys will have fun in Mauritius and I believe they would have the time of their life and we here would have seeing them having it😛

Yeah you can be their photographer but I bet you won't be able to do so!😆

Will try to do the update ASAP and hope you find it interesting and go into your fantasyland!😊

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navyab

@navyab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#80

Loved the update Shruti...it is wonderful 😊

Ahem has finally realised what Gopi means to him in life & what will his life be without her !!! He taking care of her shows that he can go to whatever extent to keep her safe !!!

He also realising that they need time to move ahead in life & discussing it with the next important person in his life his mom...liked it how he put her at peace saying Jigar will handle it...

So he is all set, but in the next one week how will the others react...especially Rashi & Urmilla...

And how will they spend time getting ready for the vacation !!!