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shruti aggarwal

@shruts18

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: sks21
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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Just read all three parts ... great to see him realising his love for her but he has an uphill task ahead of him. How will he make her accept him as she is maintaining her distance?

But you have ended on a cliffhanger ... what will happen next to them? Update very soon.

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..Naina..

@..Naina..

Alumni

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Very interesting story you have here! I really enjoyed reading this :) Can't wait to see more such tender moments between Aham and Gopi.

Cheers!
Naina

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navyab

@navyab

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Hey Shruti...liked both the parts...Ahem realised his mistake & now is on a mission to woo his wife ...& Gopi is far from knowing...What will be his next step???

Did the accident actually happen ?

Edited by navyab - 13 years ago

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Loved it , this is wot I like to see in sns where he is doing all the running . I am so taken by ur naughty and flirting ahem . You ended with a cliff hanger I am most eager to read ur next update. Well written shruti

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-JollyJabeen-

@-JollyJabeen-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Shruti!😃

First of all,YOU ROCK!!!!😛

The best thng about your SS is you added Tejas,you added Tejas,have i emhasised it enough!?,you ADDED TEJAS!!!!!😃😃😛

Im so happy,Gohem were fantastic but more importantly TEJAS!!!!!!!!!!😛😃😉

Thanks sooo much!🤗

A big hug,thanks for the PM,update soon and once again TEJAS!!!!😃

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Sandy914

@Sandy914

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Hm Shruthi.. brilliant update.. Stroy is very Cute and Sweet after all it is Ahemji started caring his wife, why it wouldn't be?

He took her out for shopping!!.. Kash.. Someting can happen in our serial also right??

Thank you for wonderfull story.. waiting for next one!!

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Aish3003

@Aish3003

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Very nice.Loved the pallu scene and the shopping thing. Both could happen in the real show I feel.

And the accident...I was on edge when I read that part. Please update soon. Could you PM me when you do?

Aish

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Hey Shruti, thanks for the PM, I just read all the parts, I really love your story.

My favorite line:And if one would look at him, he actually looked as nervous as a straight man in a gay bar. I couldn't help but laugh because this is exactly how I would picture him, as a matter of fact we have seen this look on him lately.

Please update soon, can't wait to read what happens next.

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Jammona

@Jammona

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

love it to bits pls update soon

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