OS: Redemptions (Thank you Page 4) - Page 2

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Yay! Me first again! Loved how Kokila explained it to Aham and Rashi, and made them understand what to do, how to repair their relationships :)

Really sweet OS! Completely enjoyed reading this.

Cheers!
Naina

read both the updates and loved them both
wow they are asolutely brilliant👏 amazing
jigar and koki teaming up to make rashi and ahem realize...hope that happens in serial
and loved how jigar made rashi realize how she was wrong...
just loved the os

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Wow shilpa another wonderful update. Loved it. koki and jigar rocked the way they made rashi and jigar repent on their mistakes. And lastly until rashi left her mother she can't try to change genuinely so loved it that she told off her mother clearly not to interfere in her life. Loved the whole update😃

Loved the whole story!!!
Keep it up

shilpa just read part 1... it's already 1:00 a.m US central time 😆 reading ur awesome and fabulous OS...

Wow brilliantly done , shilpa I really enjoyed how jigar was able to identify that only his kaki was not blinded by rashi .thank you for keeping goki relationship stronger than ever by showing koki s real distress was for her vahus feelings and not her own insecurities that is wot a mother is putting your children feelings first. Very cleverly executed , well done now if the cvs were just a little bit more creative they will give us some similar

Shilpa? How perfect was that. Loved your OS so much. That was sooo nice. Thank you. X xx

👏 wonderful.. Ahem and Koki conversation was up to the point.. Jigar...😃 No other words

I totally loved this OS of yours Shilpa!!!!! 😃

It was simply awesome especially that you made Jigar the focus of intention so much and that you let the kids work it out mainly on their own. You know I love Koki to bits but I agree that the kids are married couples now and have to lear to deal with their own problems themselves. It is great to see that you took Koki's changing behaviour since the hospital track as being caused by her fear for Gopi. I do have the feeling that she is very happy to see GoHem closer but also knows that there is still something missing, which is why this relationship could still end in heartbreak. That Hetal learnt from her past mistakes and that Koki spilled the beans about rashi is very good to see as well. also Rashi change is made believable by you and I just found your idea of switching of her mobile as a starting step simply brilliant. You also showed Ahem's and Jigar's feeling especially good. All in all I really loved it very much!!!!