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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update but was short...
the update was wonderful😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You stopped just on the best part, I want to see what Aham is going to do with Gopi in the room, remember he said what are you made of Jigar's Bhabhi...well please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great update...im loving the way the story is developing...gopi already has the whole household in love with her...lets see how long ahem holds out...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing Update Loved it
Thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
ahem and humming...this will be become another wonder of the worlds..i guess jigar calling her bhabhi must be becoz he is getting married to rashi ..who is gopi's sister...even before gopi is married to ahem...she will be jigar's bhabhi isnt it relation wise...i am very poor at arriving relationships..hope i am correct...watever u just stopped at the crucial moment...pls update sooon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ahem stops at the door and watches GOPI unpacking suitcase,she finds his wallet and shouts at her,"why are touching my suitcase"gopi drops wallet and replies that maji has instructed her to unpack his things,and gopi looks down.well i dont think she said touch my wallet,what did u think u will take some money out without me been aware?listen girl u may have won my family over but i know the likes of u,dont try it with me okay he shouted.I dont understand mom bring an idiot and a thief in the house. Ahemji i was onlyand before gopi could continue he said quite absolutely quiet, so u have a voice too dont use it on me complete unpacking and get out from from room.if mum has employed u to apparently take care of me ,do it but avoid showing me your face please,gopi could not understand so he stared at her,whats your promblem dont u understand me,ahemji u spoke in english and i am uneducated so i dont understand.AHEM LOOKED at her disgusted,u a illertrate,so he repeated himself in hindi and also stated dont touch anything on my table they all my work stuff.Gopi replied that she understood him very well and will do whatever he wants and left room silently.Ahem watched her go and thought how will she help me put her in her place from the very begining so no complication and smiles to himself.HE opens his wardrobe and was shocked everything immaculate,every suit had a matching shirt and tie and very good combinations,it seemed like there was plenty space in wardrobes, he was happy that mum never forgets to suprise him,Koki enters room and says u like it ,gopi did it and that shocked him.thats why she here to make life easy for u,i know u dont like gawaars but this girl is different ,have patience ahem and u will see her true worth.Gopi is very timid so i request ahem dont frighten her with your shouting and tantrums.U going to see annita today drop gopi by rajpal nagar ,rashis mother requested she needs to come as gopi is needed for something,but mom cant she take the taxi,ahem she is young child and to go so late could be danderous for her and pick her up on sunday night .So i am now her taxi,no ahem u not but this is my request.ok mom ahem replies.Just then a lot of noise heard from downstais kingal has arrived and surpried the family.Kingal a bubbly young girl humble, modern and full of love for her family.Kingal introduced to gopi and instantly hugged her and said jigar gopi bhabi is fabulous,Ahem looks at jigar so this was dicussed with kingal too.Sorry guys to break up this discussion but this gawaar is the servant.bhai she is your servant but our bhabi ,she is not part of your life but is ablessing to us replied Jigar.Kingal i secound that bhai,we are going to be great friends.Ahem looks at gopi,gopis head bent down aand covered with pallu.i told her i dont want to see her face so palu on ,very quick learner but unknown to him that ther was another reason for her pallu,her mami and rashi.They always said to gopi that she was ugly and had a manoos face,whereever she goes she brings bad luck ,so its better that people dont see her entire face,but some members of the modis have seen part of it.Gopi also worries about that and prays daily for their wellbeing to kahna.After dinner that evening gopi leaves with ahem,gopi sitting in the back and ahem glancing at her through the reveiw mirror ,and thinking i wonder what her whole face looks like,and becomes cross for thinking about her.Gopi sits silently and looking at interior of car and is fasinated,ahem questions her that has she ever being in a car before and she simply replies no,i always took a walk,he further questions u have money from working why u dont take taxi,her reply was she has certain commitments to furfill and thats most important,then ahem notices her ,darned clothing old clothes.old sandals banles that lost colour,but she smells of peaches.He drops gopi at rajpal nagar and leaves ,driving fast as anitha will be mad for being late already,he does not noticed another speeding yruck heading straigth for him and he hears gopis voice ahemji he looks up and in times moves his car on pavement.Ahem absolutely shocked gets out of car and talks to himself why did i hear her voice?And a voice answered ,"thats because" and he turn around to see whos voice it was..
too continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg please don't stop there, you've got to tell us who it was...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing Update Loved ot
How can ahem ask her too not show her face its not he own her he is realy a jerk
Realy like you story. I am very curious who it is
Cant wait to. Read the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing update😊...loved it
plz continue soon
very curious to know who it was...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ahem is not different from the SNS character...so waiting to see how he transforms !!!

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