OS: I Missed You! (Thank you note page 4)

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Kristin

@Ichangedit

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

that was truly brilliant Shilpa!!!

I loved how you showed us what ahem thinks and how he misses her. Also like the fact very much that he realised that he was an idiot for screaming at the poor girl, which doesn't call him because she is worried that she will disturb him in his important work. I really love the whole OS😃

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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

wonderful update.loved the way ahem expressed himself .great os.

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Mandy

@Mandy20

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

hey shilpa... fabulous OS.. do continue

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Maham

@Allbut1

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Shilpa, you should really make FF writing a full time job! Seriously it would make all of us so happy! Every time I see a new FF/OS by you, I get so excited, and I honestly feel that I can read your work multiple times without getting bored at all! It's so beautifully written, and you have such a wonderful concept of what we want to see in the GoHem relationship in your work that they are truly a pleasure to read!
The ending of this one had me smiling like a maniac, seriously it was so sweet! What wouldn't we give for a scene like this, but with the pace we're going at, I think it would take another year for Ahem to say the words, I miss you! But really, fantastic job!

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hk01

@hk01

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Shilpa, I have to agree with everyone, your style of writing and imagination is outdstanding. As I am sure you are aware I am fairly new to the forum but I do tend to silently read alot of the comments, ff's, OS etc.

I didn't initially notice that the OS was written by you as it was the title that grabbed me. It was only after I finished reading it that I went back to see who had written it.

Alhough there are some fantastic creative writers on the forum (being an avid reader of romantic fiction since the last 15 years), very few are on par with yourself. Your style of writing, your grasp of the english language, your ability to make the story flow are all the qualities of a budding Mills and Boon writer.

Please continue to write just as brilliantly.

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Dhabu89

@Dhabu89

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

absolutely lovely...How sweet they missed each other. When are we going to get to see these type of scenes on screen? waiting impatiently!!!

Wonderful FF. Looking forward to the next chapter...please post soon

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kavya

@Kavya.S

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

that was so sweet...it was a wonderful os
i loved it...

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ANJ4

@ANJ4

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Awww that was so nice. lovely.

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shruthi2010

@shruthi2010

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

wow super os shilpa. lovely. aham really needs to be away from gopi to know that he misses her and finally to realize he loves her.

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Munni

@munnihyderabad

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

wow shilpa what a sweet and warm os... so over well written,,,, i want the same thing to happen in SNS...

but hell no the CVs love Rashi so much so will have more of her scenes...😕

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