Imagining the unexpected! Part 6 updated Pg.16 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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pm me as well when you update. It's got my interest.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was brilliant😛

Love t so far,the Gohem moment,awww Ahem's pic on Gopi's phone😊 and poor Koki😲 I wonder who it was?,maybe Kurmila the karela😆

Thanks for the pm and update soon👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was good dear!! I loved the little Ahem phone background pic bit😳 so cute of her and his reaction was also cute😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow i loved the start it's very interesting... please continue it fast

by the way is it Paragji trying to hide from kokiji LOL 😆 (just kidding ) ... aadat se majbor hoon yaar😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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verry nice...lovely start!! love ahems drooling...and who was in the house?!?! continue soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was very interesting...who was that??
very curious to know...continue soon
it was wonderful
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice , please continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great start Kavya ,pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you friends for the support.😊
Hope you all like this part too.
Please hit the Like button if you like it.
All comments are welcome😊



Part-2
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Raji's Room: Rashi is deep in thought. Jigar comes out of washroom and sees Rashi not reacting to his arrival. He silently goes to the sofa and lies down. He watches Rashi still dwelling in her thoughts.
He calls out "Rashi...Rashi.."
"Jigarji?"
"Switch off the lights".
Rashi switches off the lights. She feels thirsty and looks for the water jug on the table nearby. In her deep thoughts, she has forgotten to bring it to the room. So she goes to the kitchen and while bringing back the jug, she hears some murmuring sound. She wonders who that would be and moves towards the direction of the voice. There she saw someone elaborating the things happened in MM. We could see her shocked face on seeing who it is.(But I'm not revealing it now).
In the morning, Gopi is strolling around her room. As she is not allowed to do any work, she feels too bored , keeps walking and has a view of their room. Immediately a bulb glows in her mind. She decides to dust their room (I think she got this idea from Rashi😆). While dusting, her eyes rest on their marriage photo hanging in the wall.
Koki is praying in the mandir, "Hey Krishna bhagvan, save my family from all evils". Ahem and Jigar comes back from walking and notice Koki in mandir.Jigar says, "Bhai, Kaki is really worried about yesterday's incidents. Only you can reassure her. Better you talk to her". Ahem nods and goes to speak to Koki. Koki doesn't want to worry others in MM. So she acts naturally by asking Ahem to get ready for office.
Ahem comes to his room and sees Gopi dusting his face in their marriage photo lovingly😳. A small smile dawned in his face. But then he realised that she was standing over a small footstool. "Gopi...".She, frightened by Ahem's voice,slips from the stool. But Ahem caught her in his hands. He was holding her by her waist. She becomes uncomfortable. But Ahem is lost in seeing her(lala lala ). Ahem knows where he was holding Gopi.☺️His inner feeings are fighting among themselves. "Ahemji...Ouch Ahemji...". Gopi's voice had pain in it. Ahem, then, notices that he was holding Gopi's injured right hand with his left. He immediately moves his left hand towards her shoulder and makes her sit on the bed. He gives her water. She apologises for doing work. Still his feelings are fighting hard that he didn't say anything to Gopi...just nodded and went to get ready to office.
Rashi comes to kitchen and asks if she could help them. Koki ,who is making tea, assigns her some work. Both Koki and Rashi are not concentrating in their work. Rashi is actually thinking whether to say Koki about whom she saw or not. Hetal comes there and sees that the milk is
gonna flow over the brim. Rashi turns off the gas at the right time. Hetal understands that Koki's not in her right state and asks her to leave the works to her. Koki says that she's ok and tells Hetal that Rashi's also helping her. 😲Rashi's conscience pricked her.


P.S. Apologies for repitition or mistakes.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
great start... plz update soon!

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