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Hey guys,i've made an OS because of our beloved IF member who's a new Goldie just like me,Kristin😳,this is my first OS that needs a part 2😆,so please don't throw chappals and stuff,thanks😊,why not listen to this song of Gohem,im sure you guys will remember it as it put tears in everyone's eye's,http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ol4R-DjVG58
😳

Gopi leaned against the wall for support,she was about to fall.

"Gopi,be careful"

"Ji Ahemji"

The goon stopped walking as he heard the girl speak.

"Hey who are you talking to?,oi tell me the truth who are you speaking to"

Gopi was shocked,she tried to speak but was tongue-tied. Oh no!

"Gopi,calm down,relax,just say you weren't talking to anyone"

"Ji voh,no one"

"Chup hurry up and climb kid" (I guess the good found out Gopi's a teen🤣)

Gopi and the goon came up with Ahem secretly following them, It was an old room and the goons quickly got the money off Gopi and ran to the next room.

"Raashi ben"

"Gopi,save me"

Gopi immediately started untying Raashi,she was mid-way when suddenly a goon tugged her and pushed her threathening to attack her with hs bare hands. Gopi was frightened!,meanwhile Raashi quickly got a brick from the dirty area and threw it on the goon's head

"AAAH" screamed the goon.

Hearing the noise,the other goons run out,Raashi was pulling Gopi and were about to exit when suddenly Gopi's leg got stuck between a piece of wood.

"Raashi ben,you quickly go,Im coming"

"Gopi.."

"Raashi ben,you GO!"

Raash quickly left and found Jigar outside,she ran to him screaming Jigarji and hugged him mmeidately meanwhile Ahem saw Gopi trying to get her foot out,he ran towards her when suddenly a goon came towards her and dragged her forward. The goon never realised but hit a stick which hit his face.

Shocked and scared,Gopi immediately stepped back to ht herself on pillars which all of a sudden came crushing down on top of her.

"AAAH"

"GOPIII" SHOUTED AHEM HOLDING HIS HAND FOR HER.

Time stood still,what had just happened?,what was going on.

______________________END OF EPISODE_____________________________

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks so much dear!! I really loved it 😳 Can't wait for the second part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: d-luna88

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Thanks so much dear!! I really loved it 😳 Can't wait for the second part


Pleasure is mine🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nicely done Chika!!!
Can you imagine if that's exactly what happens tomorrow?!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: NazmaJ

Nicely done Chika!!!

Can you imagine if that's exactly what happens tomorrow?!

I'll be over the moon Najma!😆
Edited by CHIKA784 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sks21

nicely written chika...loved it


Thank you😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Don't get offended but i want the next part...Please...I think this is exactly how cvs will unfold the story today..so am desperate for more...But you have nicely written the OS...Do write more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: gohem123

Don't get offended but i want the next part...Please...I think this is exactly how cvs will unfold the story today..so am desperate for more...But you have nicely written the OS...Do write more...


Awww so sweeet!,i would never be offended,don't be silly,okay specially for you i'll do the lat and final part okay😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2

Ahem threw the pillars off to reveal an injured Gopi bleeding from her head being bruised, he immediately picked her up and got out of the building,his heart was beating so fast and he was scared.
"Gopi,Gopi you'll be okay"
"JIGAR" shouted Ahem and Jigar came running followed by Raashi. Raashi gasped
"GOPI😲"
"Jigar drive the car,hurry up,take Gopi to the hospital now"
On the way to the hospital Jigar had informed the Modi family about what happened and they were on there way to the hospital to.Ahem was worried about Gopi and in anger..
"Raashi how can you be so irresponsible,how could you leave Gopi in there all alone and run out yourself?"
"But Ahem jiju"
"I saw everything,don't waste your time explaining me,f anything happens to my Gopi,i will not spare you"
"Raashi" called a stern voice from behind.
It was Kokila and the Modi family,they heard everything and came running to Ahem.
"Ahem my Gopi vahu,what happened?,how is she?"
Ahem explained everything,what had happened and how Gopi was injured. They were shocked!
"Raashi,maare dikri😊"
Urmila ran to Raashi and hugged her
"Mummy"
"How are you my dikri,i was so worried,i've been in such a horrible state"
"Yes Urmila ben,you both have been in a bad state yet you haven't inquired about the one who saved your dikri Gopi,while she's in here fighting for her life,you both are here. Chii, Raashi if anything happens to Gopi i will never forgive you,go from here now"
Urmila and Raashi were shocked at the bitter and steness escaping from Kokila's mouth,she was MAD😡
Urshi ran off with Jitu bai still standing in the hospital.
The whole Modi family were anxious and waiting for the doctor to come out,Hetal and Koki were praying to kanhaji when suddenly the doctor came out.
"Doctor what happened?,is Gopi alright?" screamed Ahem
"Yes your wife is fne Miss Modi but she's badly injured,she can do no work and needs complete bed rest for atleast a month"
"Can we meet her?"
"Only 1 person at a time please,we don't want to give her too much stress"
Ahem was most eager so he was the first one to enter,Gopi was lying down,her bandages on her face and she was in a weak state.
"How are you now Gopi?,your okay arn't you,your not doing any housework,your just gong to sleep on the bed"
"Ahemji.."Gopi said weakly.
she tried puttng on her pallu when Ahem stopped her and told her she needless wear that anymore. They have an eyelock and soon after 2 days of caring for Gopi,they go home. Gopi needs help with bandages and Ahem helps her with that,we have cute Gohem scenes,Ahem calling home and askng Gopi whether she ate and stuff,really cute stuff.

The end😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice os , I wait eagerly for your next part

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