Gopi hurt os last part updated page 2

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just as gopi freed Rashi n the goon came after her, rashi hit him over the head then she grabbed gopi to run, Rashi saw jigar standing across the road looking out to see if he could see anything, Rashi lets go of gopis hand n just runs, Aham watches her n then he sees the goon behind Gopi he tells gopi to watch out gopi steps on a pipe which hits the goon in between his legs aham laughs n the goon stumbles against some scaffolding then all of sudden a brick comes down then the roof comes down gopi screams , aham screams gopi. jigar hears this n runs up n rashi is coming towards him she goes to hug him jigar ji i was so lost n scared without you, jigar looks at her and in a stern voices says not now my brother n bhabi need me, Aham is frantically taking of the bricks n wood n plaster there was so much of it then he sees a bit of gopi sari, Aham now frantic gopi gopi gopi, jigar comes n says bhai aham has tears he says help me jigar get all of this off gopi, he finally see gopis face she is still breathing but unconcious, Aham lifts her up n runs jigar runs after him making sure that goons were not behind him, jigar had already called the police when he saw rashi he heard the sirens, they all get out of the building the inspector comes up to them as they are running out Aham shouts inspector my wife is injured we have to get her to the hospital, rashi is no where to be seen Jigar looks round, then he gets a phone call that rashi has arrived at the house safe n sound. Thats when jigar says get to the hospital bhabi has been injured badly, Aham sits in the inspectors car n then they drive fast to the hospital.
The emergency team were already on standby as the inspector called as they driving, Aham runs with gopi n puts on the bed the doctor say oh my god this is serious n they wheel gopi away to the emergency room.
The family arrive kokila is now crying n screaming should never have sent gopi vahu, the nurse comes out n aham ask how is Gopi? sir she has a lot of internal bleeding the situation is extremely bad i warn u she may not make it, Aham shocked so is the family.
Rashi n her mother come in Aham looks at her n starts to shout you left your sister in there n now she is fighting for her life, you n your mother have made her life hell n now you are making our lives hell i dont want you anywhere near my wife or family again, jigar also starts to shout, then the whole family go against rashi.
it was 24 hours later the doctors came out of the emergency room n they say they were successful in saving Mrs gopis life, Aham has tears n then he goes to hug jigar bhai dont worry bhabi will be ok. kokila also now smiling dikra gopi vahu is a fighter as always we will be lost without her n she knows it. The doctors say gopi is concious n shes asking for Aham, Aham goes in, Gopi sees him n starts to cry, Aham wipes her tears n then he cries n says i thought i lost you, Aham ji i am fine how is rashi? he looks at her she is fine but i dont want her near you, she left you n that goon could have killed you, Gopi looks at him n say no he didnt i am fine ahamji, The whole family walks in n gives gopi blessing they were all crying with happiness, then rashi walks in n then gopi has a flash back how rashi let go of her arm, the family walk out as the nurse tells them too many people, Rashi says gopi i thought you were behind me, Gopi looks at Rashi you thought you let go of my hand n ran when you saw devar ji, Rashiben i will not tell the family as i dont want to break your marriage, but i will help you again in any matter. Rashi says if you dont want to break my marriage then why are you saying it infront of aham jiju, gopi looks at her because ahamji will not repeat what i have said, Aham looks at Gopi, Gopi i was angry earlier n the family already knows, Rashi leaves.
Aham grew a beard jigar had to bring clothes for aham in the hospital n food as Aham refused to leave gopi alone for one minute he made sure when he went for a shower or to change clothes that someone was with gopi.
Hetal n kokila always in the mandir praying that aham n gopi always stay happy.

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NazmaJ thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Brilliant as usual Suk!!
Can't wait for the next part!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So cute,loved it Suk😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww...such a beautiful OS...i was hoping someone could come up with nice a story and you did it!! amazing work!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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whn ya updt dis..updt ur title too so tht we knw tht u updated
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Brilliant !! I loved it.. I am sure at least most part of you have said will happen... hahaha... 😃.. Great job ! I loved this part "Rashiben i will not tell the family as i dont want to break your marriage, but i will help you again in any matter. Rashi says if you dont want to break my marriage then why are you saying it infront of aham jiju, gopi looks at her because ahamji will not repeat what i have said, Aham looks at Gopi, Gopi i was angry earlier n the family already knows, Rashi leaves" Awww ... Gopi bholi bhali... haha... after so mauch happened.. her heart will melt like ice.. haha
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part 2
Gopi was dismissed from the hospital after 10 days, Aham was so attentive in the hospital, even when the nurse was wheeling Gopi out to the car, Aham kept saying to her slow down as he found the nurse walking to fast, she looked at him n said at this rate we will not get to the car until next diwali, Aham the looked at her angry, Gopi just giggled.
Even when driving home Aham was driving so slow that when the cars passed they were shouting n beebing but did aham car every two minutes Aham would ask Gopi if she was alright. At home everyone was waiting Aham pulls up the car, he gets out n then goes to help Gopi out of the car, she was weak from the accident, she found it hard to walk Aham lifts her up n walks up to the door where kokila n hetal were waiting for them with the puja thali. Jigar also came to the door n starts teasing bhai if i am ever sick will you pick me up if i am sick, Aham looks at him wait let me show you how i will pick you up, n then he smiles, Gopi blushes. kokila says Aham dikra bring in Gopi n let her sit on the couch for a short while, he bed is being made n also the nurse has arrived to help gopi with changing her bandages n also looking after her, she is just fixing your bedroom you will sleep in the guest bedroom, Aham looks at kokila no mom i will sleep with Gopi if i need the nurse i will call her, but Aham u will have to work n doing this will also disturb u whilst your working, Mom i have arrange to take off two weeks i will be working at home n jigar is quite capable of looking after the site visit i will be there to help with Gopi. kokila looked at him n says she understands.
Aham takes Gopi upstairs the nurse is waiting with changing of bandages, Aham lies Gopi down on the bed, n the nurse tells him he can go, he looks at her n says no i will stay n watch, Gopi looks at him Aham ji plse its ok, i will be alright, then she says i dont want you to , then aham goes up to Gopi when i was injured after that fight you attended to me not once but twice so let me help, Gopi looks down ji, The nurse takes of the bandages from her arm then from her waist Gopi is wincing in pain aham holds her hand, she looks at him he smiles n closes n opens his eyes as if to say i am here for you, after the nurse finished she tells him that the bandages have to be changed every 4 hours as not to get infection n antibiotics put on, Aham then gets a pen n writes everything down which medicines pain killers which have to be given, also gopi must eat a little before eating the medicine. Aham listened, then the nurse says Mr modi i will be here he looks at her Nurse i will not disturb you in the night i will get it done, the nurse looks at him baffled. Gopi tries to protest but aham tells her shhh he will take care of her. Gopi found it hard to lie down flat on the bed she found it easier sleeping sitting up Aham also slept on the bed so gopi had support her head on his shoulder. he had put the timer on half an hour before gopi was due her medicine he went downstairs n got gopi some kridgree warmed it up n gave it too her then slowly he changed all the bandages. Gopi just stared at him for her all her pain was gone. The next morning Gopi needed to bathe the nurse said she would give her a sponge bath Aham agreed to that but left with a smirk, kokila had brought gopi some plain saris so that the embrodiery did not hurt gopi, she walked in n asked the nurse how was gopi last night, The nurse replied Mrs Modi i did not come last night Mr modi was the one who changed the bandgages n assisted to Mrs modi, Gopi says maji plse aham ji will get tired i will be ok, Gopi vahu if aham is doing this why are you protesting i will not tell him what to do or not to do. kokila smiled n left, Gopi asked if she could go downstairs as she wanted to go to the mandir just then Aham walks in, come Gopi i will take you he lifts her up n they both look at each eyes, Aham slowly walks down with Gopi, Jigar gets a chair for gopi to sit on. Hetal n kokila do the puja then kokila looks at gopi Gopi vahu u have forgotten to put sindoor on, Aham looks at her he goes over to the puja thali gets sindoor n puts it on gopis forehead, Gopi starts to cry Aham looks at her what happened, gopi cries n shakes her head. Kokila n Hetal also have tears as all remember the two times that aham refused to put sindoor on gopis forehead, Aham is confused he kneels down Gopi crying is not good for you now you promised you would not cry so whats this. kokila n hetal smile they both go into the kitchen then jigar comes in with a wheel chair, Bhabi i have rented this for you so that it will be easy for you to be with the family instead of being in one place and also it will help with bhai back, Gopi starts to giggle n jigar runs with aham after him bhai i am only joking its not like i have called you a buddha look we have two of them already, parag comes up to him buddha hoga thera baap then chirag goes after parag the family was laugghing n joking, kokila n hetal both smile kanaji let happiness like this stay in our family its been a long time jigar is back to normal.
Two weeks passed Gopi got stronger by the day, Aham did not stop he even bathe her a few times 😳 helped her put on sari, n coming down the stairs he would hold her n gaze into her eyes each night Gopi would go to sleep on aham shoulder this time lying down n when gopi tried to move Aham would wake up n ask if she was ok her reply was Aham i am fine but to have my head on your shoulder must be uncomfortable, Aham looks at her am i complaining when you move i get worried so plse stay here i want you next to me.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww this was amazingly beautiful - it's like you took the desire deep from our hearts when you wrote this!!!

Gorgeous interactions between GoHem of course, but I also enjoyed the Ahem - Jigar parts too!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely os enjoyable reading
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww Suk that was wonderful!😆

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