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Posted: 13 years ago
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Parchai

" Haan mami, I will go to save Rashi ben"

The words rung in Aham's ears. When his mother had offered to go, he had outright refused. There was no way he was going to let mom or his kaki go anywhere those gundas. Not if he had anything to say about it.

Thankfully, both of them agreed.

But Gopi, when her mami had asked her for help, obviously she did not say no.

If he was truthful, he knew that it would be Gopi who would go from the minute the kidnappers asked for a woman to bring the money. He knew that Gopi would not be in peace until she saw her Rashi ben safe and sound. Her tears wouldn't dry up until Rashi got home.

And so he did not stop her.

No he was not surprised. Gopi was like that - she went out of her way for everybody. She never thought wrong of anyone, and if people she considered family needed a huge sacrifice from her, she would do it without blinking.

" Are you sure, Gopi?"

She nodded, tears streaming down her eyes.

But that did not mean she would let her go alone. Not when he was there. If it had to be this way, he would go with her, he would remain by her side, and if those gundas so much as lifted their eyes towards her then -

A warmth spread over his chest and remained there. It was a little ball of fire in his chest, slowly burning brighter and brighter. His decision was made.

" Fine. I'll let you go. But on the condition that I am coming with you. I'll always be with you, like your shadow. Even if you cannot see me, i'll always be with you" he said meaning every syllable he uttered, his heart beating rapidly.

He knew this was dangerous, but he had never been so sure about anything else before. Gopi was in danger, and he would protect her. He would step in front of any danger that looked her way.

Wherever she went, he went.

Even in darkness.

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Yea, a little something on today's episode! Needless to say I loved it !! :) At the moment it is an OS, but I might add more to this on the coming up episodes!! :)

PS - Kudos to the dialogue writer on today's dialogues!! Loved Aham calling himself Gopi's 'Parchai'! 😃




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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it!! Thanks for writing 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really...it sounded like a soothing balm...Honestly I myself felt a lalal land feel😆!!
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Originally posted by: d-luna88

Loved it!! Thanks for writing 😊


Thank you!! :) I just loved the scene so much that this little piece lodged itself into my head and I HAD to write it!! :)

Thanks for reading.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: binataadhar

Really...it sounded like a soothing balm...Honestly I myself felt a lalal land feel😆!!


Did it, wow - thanks!! :)

The episode or that scene in itself was a little lala land scene, wasn't it. Cannot wait for the actual action!!! When those things fall on Gopi, and Aham yells out for her *rubs hands in glee*

Guess that little promo gave us writers a hell a lot of to write about!!! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was very good...i loved it...
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luved the os its reali nice u explaind the scenes tht ws reali nice great job...










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Posted: 13 years ago
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An excellent OS that belnds perfectly with the episode!!!
Great Work!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sks21

that was very good...i loved it...


Thank you! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arnisha

luved the os its reali nice u explaind the scenes tht ws reali nice great job...


Thank you Arnisha! 😊

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