FF: A story of hearts part 9 pg47 (23/02) - Page 26

wonderful goki scenes to come but i am sure even kokila will not be able to bring Gopi back because if anything happens again she is back to square one, let ahams suffer he needs to

Kirstin...loved the part...

Originally posted by: uamaz

Great update... poor jigar, he didn't know what he was letting himself in for when he asked his bhai to tell him everything that happened with his Gopi bhabhi ... let's just hope This idiotic Ahem does not reveal to Gopi about his exchange of their meeting to Jigar or else I do not think the poor girl will ever go back with him ☺️ how would she face her lovely BIL and he too will remember his brothers rant about kisses and bodies hugging ... OMG poor Jigar 😳

Thanks so much uamaz!!!!😃

The first time Jigar will meet Gopi after this will be really embarrassing for him that is for sure.😆

Originally posted by: sks21

that was a wonderful update...
loved it..
ahem he will never learn...when will he realise its his fault...
and so happy that koki has come to bring gopi back
now it will be very exciting...

Thank you Kavya😃

Yeah Ahem is an idiot, it might not be fair for me to say that, because I made him that well but what ever that was the plan.
and of course my all time fav Koki has to save the situation yet again 😆

Originally posted by: rsk16

gosh really loved the updates.ahem still won't change .he really needs to understand his wife .hope he does that soon.loved it.

Thanks dear😊

well Ahem is quite slow in the emotional department and I am just making it worse

Originally posted by: Nihira-fan

very nice update!!looking forward for gopi/koki reunion!!!waiting eagerly!!!

Thank you dear😊

Yes Goki is going to be in the next chapter I am so excited!!! Just love this pairing

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

loved the update kristin... hope ahem doesn't spoil anything with his anger... good thing kokiji is here t sort out...

but this time i wished ahem to convince gopi on his own without his mom's intervention...
i thought he should first think about his family and work every way to bring the family back together all by himself... his decision, his talks, his convincing... but no he is Ahem always takes MOMs help

Thank you munnni!!!😃

Lets be fair I just wanted to get on with the story and couldn't think of anything how I could show Ahem begging (okay convincing) Gopi to come back to him without changing the charakter. Also you know how much I adore Koki so she has to come and sort it out not that Ahem had a chance to refuse Koki's help.
But lets see what the anger of his will do, I did gave a hint about it😉

Originally posted by: Bloem123

AMazing Update loved it thanks for the pm kristin~!

Thank you dear 😃 glad you liked it!!!

Originally posted by: indu_shah

emotional update!!...loved it

Thanks😊 I am happy you liked it!!!

Originally posted by: suk19

wonderful goki scenes to come but i am sure even kokila will not be able to bring Gopi back because if anything happens again she is back to square one, let ahams suffer he needs to

Thanks Suk!!!!😃

Yeah Goki moments to come and some great Koki moments as well. Can't wait to write about it I just love the pairing. I agree let Ahem suffer some more😉

Originally posted by: dekhiki

whee progress! i am totally in favour of short updates if it helps get the story out faster. also they are easier to read, and build more expectation...

i hope ahem won't get the wrong idea about tony being in gopi's house if he ever sees him there? i was really amused by his reaction to jigar talking about gopi moving on :)

Thanks dear!!!

Yeah there was not much progress in the story, if I think about it I pent out one chapter and now I have already made two parts out of it and will make one more😆 I just had to much new ideas inbetween for short scenes within. Glad you don't have a problem with shorter updates!!!

Well lets see about Toni and Ahem.

You dint send me a pm kristin!! I missed it. Oki going to read now.

Finished reading it. It was too good. Very cute. I hate your ahem coz he s too full of himself. He thinks tat gopi has no right to move on? And its his right to c his daughter? Very self obsessed. Oki i want more of jigar in the coming updates with raji romance as well. Am glad koki is back. And more of passionate gohem moments also

Originally posted by: navyab

Kirstin...loved the part...

Ahem as usual wants things to flow as per his schedule...he cannot handle his own feelings & thats the reason he likes things his way because it goes unquestioned...

But it is people...his dearest wife & daughter whom he has gone to ask them comeback into his life...so what will it be...will his emotions still be unanswered !!!! And even now he is taking help of his mom to get his wife & daughter back...thts a shame on Ahem 😕

Wo...wo...now with Koki in Germany...are we heading to a showdown between ur darling Koki & ur latest entrant Julia...both a strong & protect the ones they love...Though Koki did disappoint me...if she did love Gopi so much she would have searched for her come what...if it was Ahem or Kinjle she would have done that but since Gopi was her DIL she did not do that !!!! and she is coming to meet Gopi as a MIL not as a mother !!!!!!!

Thanks so much navyab!!!😃

Well yes Ahem is selffish in his own well. Emotions are not his cup of tea and he tries to cover his uncertainities with barsh behaviour, which brings more trouble then it helps. Well lets see how much help he is going to take from koki. But in the moment I feel that he needs the help of her to calm down otherwise he would storm into Gopi's sorry Julia's house and order her to come with him adn properly would blame her some more. And I don't want that to happen, because that would be unforgivable for me

Well Koki did search for Gopi but she searched in India and didn't think that Gopi would have left the country all together. She truly loves her and has decided to go to Germany to prevent her idiot son for ruining her chance to get her daughter and granddaughter back (gosh and here I am back to defending my koki 😆) That was properly not that clear in this update so I will try to bring out her feelings and reasons in the next.