FF: A story of hearts part 9 pg47 (23/02) - Page 24

Originally posted by: hansa2

it so wonderful i like it love it the way gopi did not forgive ahem and she think about sanju wow lovely come soon wil wait for next please pm me for next it will be beter

Thank you hansa😃 I'll pm for the next update

Originally posted by: _Precious_

woww,Kristin you are a wonderful writer. I can't stop appreciating you after you gave us such a fabulous story. Ahem is a hypocryte, after all this happend he did not try to ask forgiveness, but rather blaming Gopi for not informing him of her pregnancy. He is still stubborn to accuse her of his mom's accident. Gopi should not go with him so soon, he has to suffer and repent truly. Otherwise, there will be no justice served for Gopi for the pain and insult she suffered.

I somehow missed your last 2 updates and caught them up today and read all in one go. So could you please pm me when you update next. I don't want to miss any update anymore. Thanks.

Thank you so much Precious!!!!

Yes Ahem just doesn't know what would be an appropriate behaviour. He is such a klutz if it comes to emotional things.

I will pm you for my next update!!!

Omg that heart wrenching and absolutely beautiful , their reunion was so emotional ,amazingly well staged , a better scene than that is hard to imagine , it was perfect . I love how u described their emotions and their first reaction to each other without the doubts and recrimations , it was intense passion for each other which got blocked of with the memories of the past. You made their reunion first abt them (two ppl in inlove ) , then abt the product of that love ,their baby girl , that was so wonderful . I can't wait to see how these two broken ppl start the healing , will it be their little angel who will be the balm they need to mend their hurt? I can't wait for ur next chapter ,this one was outta this world ,far exceeded my expectations . It would be interesting to see if u can top this wud the father / daughter reunion chapter .

Originally posted by: taniks

Omg that heart wrenching and absolutely beautiful , their reunion was so emotional ,amazingly well staged , a better scene than that is hard to imagine , it was perfect . I love how u described their emotions and their first reaction to each other without the doubts and recrimations , it was intense passion for each other which got blocked of with the memories of the past. You made their reunion first abt them (two ppl in inlove ) , then abt the product of that love ,their baby girl , that was so wonderful . I can't wait to see how these two broken ppl start the healing , will it be their little angel who will be the balm they need to mend their hurt? I can't wait for ur next chapter ,this one was outta this world ,far exceeded my expectations . It would be interesting to see if u can top this wud the father / daughter reunion chapter .

☺️ Thanks so much taniks!!!!

I am really glad you liked it so much but you got me worried as well. How can the next chapter not be an disappointment to you? I have already started it but now I am worried 😆

Yes there is passion between them but at least Gopi didn't lose her head there. Mothers always thing about their children first, right?😉

Really Nice FF..

Originally posted by: aspatel2

Really Nice FF..

pls cont soon.

Axita

Thank you dear 😊 I already started the next part

Thank you for the PM.. 😃 and luved the update.. and glad to know that their love holds the strong passion..even after long separation 😊 and ahem.. he had just taken full advantage of gopi, so now to get her, to win her again it is fair enough to suffer a bit..overall good update.. 👍🏼

Thank you again all for the lovely comments!!!

This update isn't as long as the last one but I either make it a bit shorter or really long to get the storylines together and I decided to do it the easier ways for me 😛 sorry
Also I used a German child's program figure from the show "Unser Sandmaennchen", which comes every evening since over 50 years and is about the Sandmann visiting children and making them tired with his magic sand. Inbetween some short stories are shown and Pittiplatsch the one used belongs to one of the most love short story serial (okay enough obsession here) here is a link top an episode so you can have a look and tell me what you think https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BSabPqAaZ8Q

Okay an now please enjoy😃

Part 7 ' Confusion

Hearts are bleeding in agony, in resentment and love. They are too bewildered to understand their own pain and the pain of the other; being far apart and yet so close at the same time. Confusion spreading within.

After some time Gopi got back to her senses. She couldn't stay here like a picture of misery. 'Sanju will wonder where I have run off to and we still need to roll out the dough and make the cookies. Come on Gopi get a grip!!' Gopi thought to herself sternly and got slowly up. Her legs were feeling wobbly because of the awkward position they had stayed in for quite awhile. Therefore Gopi used one hand to keep herself upright. Gradually she made her way up the stairs and back into the kitchen. Picking up the dishcloth to dry up the last utensils she turned around because she heard someone come in. "What happened Gopi? Who called and why did you run outside so quic.. Did you cry? You did, didn't you? Who made you cry? Tell me Gopi, tell me. I will make them sorry for it I swear" Julia was ranting in an amazing speed while stepping towards Gopi and holding her by the shoulders. "Please stop it Julia. I will tell you everything later. But now tell me where is Sanju? Why hasn't she stormed back in the kitchen yet? Don't tell me she has learned patience in such a short while" Gopi said trying to lighten up the mood and trying a shaky smile on Julia. But the other woman was not convinced by it at all. However Julia knew Gopi very well and could see that she wouldn't get anything out of her until after Sanju went to bed. 'If she wants to put up an act for the cheeky monkey I better help her. She can't pull it off herself for sure.' Julia thought with a sigh. "Okay, okay. Off you go to the bathroom. Wash your face, take some deep breath and then come back in the kitchen. If Sanju sees you like this she will know something was up but she won't be as nice as me and lay off so easily." She said in her most arrogant voice and snapped with one of her fingers in the direction of the bathroom. A small laugh escaped Gopi's lips. Walking past Julia she told her "Thanks Julia".

Ahem on the other hand was still sitting behind the steering wheel rooted to the spot unable to move and get over the shock of Gopi refusing him. 'How can she say no?' he asked himself in shock mixed with anger. 'Why should she say yes?' another voiced asked him within. 'She has no reason to trust you after all you did to her. All you ever did was hurt her!' it went on reproaching him. "Enough" he shouted out loud gripping his head with both hands and sitting up in his seat. His voice was echoing in the small space of the car making him realise how broken his voice sounded. Still he shook his head a few times and then started the car and drove back to the hotel for now. However Mr. Ahem Modi was not ready to admit the full truth to himself. It was only his fault that all this happened and Gopi had nothing to do with it. But before he will admit this to himself the situation will get much worse more hearts will break and tears will be shed, angry words will be exchanged and hopes shattered.

As Gopi came back out of the bathroom she could hear Sanju laughing and squealing in the kitchen. Also a male voice was laughing. Gopi wondered for a second, who that could be until she remembered that Sanju had just invited Toni to bake with them yesterday, when he had come into Julia's atelier yet again as Julia had put it. He was a nice chap as far as Gopi was concerned, who liked to make Sanju laugh and Julia angry. 'I think he likes her and even though she doesn't show it so does too' Gopi thought to herself and chuckled until she remembered her own situation right now. 'What should I do? I still love him so much. But I can't trust him not only because of me but because of Sanju as well.' Just then new tears were starting too built up behind her closed eyelids. 'Stop it Gopi!!! Not now!!' Gopi scolded herself and gave herself a small slap on the cheek. Then she moved on and went into the kitchen.

Tiered from the strain of the travelling and emotional meeting with Gopi Ahem stepped into his hotel room and sank tiredly on the sofa. He loosened his tie and looked out the window over Passau with its many warm Christmas lights. He still felt Gopi's warm body pressed to his and thought that still a taste of her lips lingered on his. Now that he had been so close to her again Ahem remembered what he has missed all these years. Before that dreadful incident he had falling asleep with his beautiful wife snuggled in his arms, feeling her warm body next to his and feeling her steady hard beat and her sweet breath on his skin but then he had sent her away. Now he knew why he had not found any sleep since then, why his bed has always seemed like an unknown and cold place for him since then. It was because she hasn't been there anymore. Groaning he told himself to stop thinking about the past and concentrate on what to do about the situation. 'How can I show her that she can trust me, that I will never hurt our daughter?' he asked himself for the hundreds of times but then anger rose within him. "How can she dare to keep my daughter from me? I have a right to meet her, to get to know her and to have her living with me" Ahem muttered now pacing the room agitated.

Just then his mobile was ringing. Brought out of his dark thoughts he walked back to the sofa and picked up his mobile. Looking at the display first he picked up the call and unable to hide his state of mind he snapped annoyed "what do you want Jigar?" The younger brother let out a heartfelt sigh and thought 'So it didn't go well.' "What are you planning to do now bhai?", he therefore asked without inquiring about the happenings in Germany. "I don't know" Ahem shouted back not able to control himself at all. "I don't know" he whispered then again and closed his eyes. Jigar could hear the hurt in his bhai's voice and thought what he could do for him. "Tell me exactly what happened" he said then. So Ahem did tell him all what happened since he was in Passau. How he went into Gopi's shop and spoke with the saleswoman, how he had went to Obernzell and watched his daughter and Gopi through the windows, how he had called Gopi, how she had spotted him standing outside in front of her house and how she had run to him as well as what then happened. Jigar got a little embarrassed when Ahem went into a detail description of the kiss and the feel of Gopi's body close to his and he even had to interrupt his bhai, who seemed to have forgotten that he was telling all this to someone else. Then it had been Ahem's turn to be embarrassed but he covered it by being brusque towards Jigar. "Why do you want to know all this?" he asked with his rudest voice. Jigar was not far from just replying 'I didn't want to know all this about kisses and bodies hugging' but he stopped himself just in time. It was not very likely that his bhai would be able to kill him through the phone but he wasn't taking any chances here. So he answered "I can't help you, if I don't know what happened bhai. You always tell me to first get all the information available before starting the planning of a new project, don't you? And that is also true for this situation." And before Ahem was able to interrupt him again he went on saying "At least what you told me proves that bhabi still loves you dearly, which means that she hasn't moved on y...". However Ahem interrupted him before he was able to finish his sentence. "Move on? She is my b***** wife and she always will be!!!! She cannot move on!!" the older brother screamed into the receiver. The possibility of Gopi moving on never crossed his mind and the mere thought of something like this happening made his blood boil in rage. Jigar's ears were ringing and he held the receiver in front of his face and called "Bhai calm down. I just said she didn't." Just then Kokila had walked into the room with tea for Jigar. "Are you talking to Ahem dikra Jigar?" she asked and walked forward putting the tea on a table and holding her hand out to take the phone. Jigar just nodded his hand in yes and passed the phone on to Kokila.

"You two stop this nonsense. It is enough now" Julia just called out as Gopi stepped into the kitchen. "Maa" Sanju called out; "Gopi" Toni called out and both came running towards her and then passed her to hide behind her back, which wasn't an easy feat for Toni because of his height. "Wir haben nichts gemacht (We didn't do anything)" they were both telling Gopi while Julia screamed "Luegt nicht (Don't lie) Ihr habt eine riesige Schweinerei veranstaltet (You have created a big mess)." "Haben wir gar nicht (We didn't do that honest)" the answer came back immediately. Because the screaming was starting to hurt Gopi's ears she said "Bas" raising her hands. Then she told the two people hiding behind her to stop the nonsense and tell her what exactly happened. The thought 'I shouldn't have done that' went through her mind a split second later as all three of them started their screaming again. But at least she could make out that Julia had decided to start preparing the icing to decorate the cookies while Toni and Sanju were moulding and backing the first cookies. However the other two had wanted to help her as well or better they wanted to nibble on the icing and so the chaos had started again. They had spilled the icing everywhere and had touched everything with their dirty sticky hands making a big mess and pissing Julia off majorly. But Gopi wasn't fooled; if she had been here Julia would have belonged to the trouble makers. However because she didn't want to take more arguments this evening she just told all of them off and made them get on with the baking.

"Look Maa Look. I love this one, which looks like Pittiplatsch" Sanju said and while pulling on Gopi's sleeve. Gopi bent down picking her daughter up and let her show her the biscuit cutter (no idea if that is what I mean) properly. "Yes he is very nice" she said smiling and kissed Sanju and the cheek. Sanju giggled and hugged her Maa tight whispering I love you in her ear. Happiness was spreading inside Gopi again and made her feel better after the meeting with Ahem. "Und was sagt der Pitti immer? (And what does Pitti (short for Pittiplatsch) always say?)" Toni asked. "Ach du meine Nase (Deary me my nose (well it sounds much better in German))" "Potzblitz (okay there is no translation for this it is something Pitti says in surprise)" Sanju and Julia called out. All of them laughed and Julia looked at Toni warmly. But as Toni was grinning back at her she noticed what she was doing and gave him a good glare. However this just made him laugh and so there little bickering started again. Gopi and Sanju concentrated on making the cookies and with a lot of laughter and much more mess making the cookies where moulded, backed and decorated by the four.

Ahem on the other hand just told his mum what happen, whereby he cut the kissing and hugging part as short as possible. "I don't know what to do mum. She doesn't listen to me and refused to come back with me to India. I wasn't even able to see my daughter" he told her angrily. "Well it is no wonder Gopi vahu doesn't trust you in the moment, Ahem dikra. You have to work on her trust." "But mum I can't stay here for long. I have to get back to India and my work as well. Why doesn't she understand that?" Kokila was getting incredulous with her son's behaviour. 'How can he expect her to do his bidding just like this after all he did? I mean Gopi vahu made herself and Sanjana a space over there in Germany and she won't give that up for a future, which she feels is shaky due to her past experiences.' But she didn't say that, knowing that this would make Ahem only angrier. However she couldn't let him go to Gopi in this state of mind. He surely would ruin his and their last chance to get their family back together. "Suno Ahem dikra. Give Gopi some time before you are doing something else. She was properly shocked to see you and didn't think her decision over properly. Also I will come there as well and speak to her, too. After all I am her sasumaa and she used to listen to me too. Let us try it together the next time." Kokila said quickly. She didn't ask for his opinion on her decision but just expected him to do as she told him but that was just like her. Ahem had no other choice but to agree with his mother and wait for her to come to Germany. The next day Kokila Modi flew to Germany and was picked up from the airport by her son, who had decided to use his rented car to get his mother, thinking that the long drive might help to calm his emotion but he had little success with it.

Will anger take over and ruin the last chance of reuniting the split family or will Kokila be able to keep Ahem calm and convince her bahu to come back home? Read it in the next update

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So I hope you liked the update😃

Part 8 on page 37 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/saath-nibhaana-saathiya/2131437/ff-a-story-of-hearts-part-9-pg47-23-02?pn=37

Right as far as I can tell, there was a party that finished? And someone had forgotten 3 sausages. So thye decided to wait and see if anyone claimed them, if not then they would share them. The dog used disguises to get the sausages - at one point claimed he had tooth ache which was why he was wearing a bandada across his mouth, he pretended to be an old lasy and took one of the sausages. The other two figured it out and ate the remaining sausages. The dog came again and saw the sausages were finished and decided to go to sleep?