FF: A story of hearts part 9 pg47 (23/02) - Page 21

fantastic update...wow both gopi and ahem r emotional and so am i...waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: faayey

Wooow that was very emotional and beautifully written..😍

I have a feeling that Gopi might give ahem a chance,

but she might do it the hard way...

Great updateee loved it..😃

"ich liebe" hehehe

xx

Thank you faayey!!!!😃
Well she might forgive him or she might not. I won't tell you yet😆
Good German as well!!!

Originally posted by: varshu27

fantastic update...wow both gopi and ahem r emotional and so am i...waiting for the next part

Thank you varshu 😊
I am glad the emotion came out well in your opinion it gave me a real head ache writing it😆

Oh Kristin I loved this!!

Originally posted by: NazmaJ

Oh Kristin I loved this!!

The heartbreak from both of them, Ahem's despair and Gopi's inabality to trust him especially for Sanjana's sake!!!

Ahem has a lot to make up for and I can't wait to see how you make him make up for all the hurt he caused!!

Thank you Nazma 😃

But your comment has me worried 😕 how the .. am I going to make Ahem make it up to Gopi and Sanju? Oh gosh I don't like writing heavy emotional stuff like this 😆 but I brought myself in this position and therefore have no one else to blame for it

Originally posted by: d-luna88

Thank you Nazma 😃

But your comment has me worried 😕 how the .. am I going to make Ahem make it up to Gopi and Sanju? Oh gosh I don't like writing heavy emotional stuff like this 😆 but I brought myself in this position and therefore have no one else to blame for it

RESERVED! oh my, that was so emotional! that was an amazing update...u have me lost on how to respond...so am jus gunna say this story and this update was FANTASTIC..gopi and ahem are going through a lot of pain...how will ahem win his love back? , luved sanju as well, so naughty, and the song was really nice, a nice change to the usual...continue soon...LOVED IT...

im really into this story...it really gripped my attention...

Originally posted by: NazmaJ

Don't worry too much about it!! It'll come to you when you need it!!

I find the emotional heart wrenching stuff easier than the romance!! But Ayesha's requested an OS from me for her Birthday so am trying to make it a little light and romantic.

😆 good luck with that!!!
and yes I will manage somehow

Originally posted by: famzii05

RESERVED! oh my, that was so emotional! that was an amazing update...u have me lost on how to respond...so am jus gunna say this story and this update was FANTASTIC..gopi and ahem are going through a lot of pain...how will ahem win his love back? , luved sanju as well, so naughty, and the song was really nice, a nice change to the usual...continue soon...LOVED IT...

im really into this story...it really gripped my attention...

Aww thank you Fahima 😳

Glad you like it that much😃 I love Sanju as well and made sure to give her some space in this update. There was actually a lot more planned for it but it got so long already that I decided to end it there and put everything else in the next update

Amazing update, I'm glad that Gopi didn't immediately go with Ahem, he needs to earn her trust, so I'm very curious to see where you take this story