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thank you guys for loving my ff and for your loving coments and for like it im happy for that , hope you will like this part also let me know your point of view .😊
prev ; they return in the cottage again .
part 9

they enter in the cottage ,gopi go directly in the kitchen to keep the stuff in there place ahem open window live a little space to let little air enter in . it started raining worst the weather became more worst . it good we have already arrive before it come worst gopi said. yes we save from it .then ahem take the bags to keep in the room . when he come down gopi say you know ahem when it is raining what is good to eat . i think some snakes because when i was in abroad whenever its was raining i do some snakes . yes you are right lets do some pacorrey . ok you prepare the paste i will fry ok yah . then they did the snakes with the chatni and tea .

they were eating gopi dont you afraid to be alone with me for two or three days . why should i ahem when i trust you , i know you will never do some thing which will hurt me . so you have so much faith on me gopi im impress what if i do something to you then what will you do . ahem if you wanted you could do it last night when i was in your arms , i know you ahem you are not that type of man who will take advantage of a girl , because you know how to respect them . thx gopi for trusting me and have faith on me .your welcome .

ahem i notice since we have come here you dont seen relax why what the matter . it nothing gopi i was just thinking about anil what he will think about us or you will he trust you or not . he is not like this ahem he love me and care , he also trust me . gopi any man would never believe that a man and a woman stay in a cottage for two or three days and nothing happen between them that impossible .why not ahem if they know how to behave with each ever then it can happen like us . oh that means even you could not believe it right . no you are wrong i told you i will trust and have faith on her because in love we must know to trust and have faith in each ever .

gopi what if some one tell you he has fall in love with you then what will you do . i dont know what i will do accept his love or deny it , it all depend who is he and if i also love him , till now nobody has hit my heart like my first lover . what about anil then you are going to be engage to him and you dont love him gopi . it not that i dont love him i do but i never feel the love which i have feel it before . ahem fall in love and to be love it different , you know we live one time , we die one time and we he cut and say we fall in love one time also . yes ahem we cant never fall in love twice in life , i have already fall in love with some one before it will never happen again , since i know what is love it only him i have love nobody else . you are just like me gopi since i got to know what is love it was only her no one else .

ahem call his mom to inform her that they arrive safety , and they are ok . later they were sitting on the coach they were talking laughing and they slept on each coach while talking . lter ahem wake up he saw gopi sleeping he bring a drape he cover her ,and he went to take a shower . after fifteen mins he come down he did not see gopi he call her no response , he get tense he look every where he dont see her . then he went in her room he call her she dont answer he call her name again then she answer . ahem feel relax after hear her voice . he was going when gopi come out from the bathroom . he turn his face to not look at her , gopi call him and say why you were calling me . he said i did not see you when i came down that why , im going down .

he was in the kichen gopi enter in and say what are you doing ahem . im starting to prepare food why , it not your job to do it i will do it you just leave from here . why should i , i will help you in cutting the veg and dont say no . ok if you want cut it i will the onions it will not be good t see tears in you eyes ahem . when they were cutting gopi mob ring she saw anil , she went in the hall to talk . hello , hello gopi how are you ,im fine and you , im fine also i saw in the tv there is cyclone there . yes there is the weather is going worst , even roads are closed . did you reach mm before it , no we return on the midway . what that means you are going to be alone with ahem for two or three days gopi . yes anil why do you have any problem in it , gopi what if he ,he what anil you think he can do any thing to me , i will do something to hi or we can do something wrong is that you think anil . no gopi you get me wrong i did not wanted to say it but you know . anil if he wanted he could do any thing with me from last night , but he take care of me and you are disgusting anil you dont trust me , nor even have faith on me that why you are thinking like that .

if im here today it because of him and you dare to thing wrong on him i never think you will think like this . gopi i love you i care for you that why im afraid for you try to understand me at least . ahem was looking at gopi when she was talking and he notice the tension was going on the mob he was not looking where he is cutting the veg and he cut his finger . when gopi was talking she heard ahem shout , she go she keep her mob on the table on recv .

ahem what happen , how did you cut you , why are you cutting the onion i tell you i will cut i na see how you are losing blood . gopi you are not let me answer ,it nothing it just little cut . tell me where is the box aid , it in the draw of your right . she take it she clean the blood , see the blood is not stopping . then she apply the med awouch it bruning yaar . let me blow it then you will be relax , she blow on it . ahem was looking at her .

anil who was listen he was shocked to hear the tone of gopi she never use this type of tone with him there was an affection in it . he do an illusion how she is holding ahem hand and was blowing on the wound , ahem with smile was touching her hand they were looking at each ever . he come out of his illusion when he heard ahem said gopi thx a lot . ahem you are saying thx to me when i thx you for saving my life you said i friendship there is no sorry no thank you . ahem you are taking care of me and i cant do for you im not so self fish . gopi actually you are on my responsibility to brought you home safety . not only me ahem you too we will return home safety dont you worry .

anil feel bad how he could think bad of ahem and gopi , he was just doing what he has promise , and he doubt them gopi will not forgive him , she will not talk to him now , i know when the cyclone will go i will give her surprise then he cut . gopi say i will finish preparing the food now then after a while she finish it was already time to have dinner . they were about to eat when the light go , ohh no not now ahem said . gopi are you alright , yes ahem im fine . i wil go to do the generator work ok , wait ahem why you should do it now let have a candlelight dinner we will never get this chance like this again . gopi you want to have a candle light dinner with me ,you know we have a candlelight dinner with some one special . yes ahem i know that why im asking you because you are special for me . ok then ahem light the candle he sit opposite of her they get eye look they talk smile laughing there were some thing happening at that time what was that they dont know but they were comfortable with each ever . they were feeling strange but did not let other know . then after dinner ahem say i will go to make the generator work , gopi say i will come with you too . they go with a candle ahem was in front gopi back when ahem was about to on the generator gopi slip she was falling when ahem hold her they both slip gopi fall on the top of ahem . ahem his arm around gopi waist gopi her hand on ahem shoulder , ahem take out her hair from her face they were looking at each ever the light has come . then ahem say gopi if i stay laying here im going to get pain on my back ,he laugh , gopi feel shy and say sorry she stand up and give give her hand to ahem then he can stand . he stand then ahem say it time to to sleep let go in the room . and they say good night to each ever they close the door .

here i stop hope you will like it . do comments 😊

part 10 pg 10
Edited by hana_y - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update. Loved their interaction.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thx guys for loving it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was a lovely update.

The growing relationship of caring and enjoying each others company was very well told.

Looking forward to the next update.
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thank you yes im happy that you like it and i asure you the next part will also nice
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hana wow lovely update they are having fun to be together i just hope they can recall there childhood
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thx hansa for loving it i have your support in it thx yaar
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part 10

day two morning

ahem wake up he go down he saw gopi in the kitchen , good morning he said . she reply good morning , so what are you preparing , l have prepared some pancake may be you will like it . wow when i was in aboard in the breakfast i always eat pancake , but you know right now i will have only tea after the swim i will eat . swim are you mad ahem to go in beach when you know how is the weather . im not going in the beach gopi but in our swimming pool , we have here . you have swimming pool here you did not show me , i will show you when we will go to swim then we can have our breakfast after the swim . ahem i did not brought swimming costume , how im going to swim . no problem about it we are alone here you can wear a t shirt of mine and with one of your slim trouser ok . woh ahem actually i dont know how to swim .

ho dont you worry im here i will teach you if you want then . of cause i will just give me t shirt then i will join you , ok he go take a t shirt of him and he give it to her she wear it then she join him down . they go near the swimming pool wow it so big are you sure i will be able to swim , of cause gopi you will . then he enter in the water then he put his hand forward gopi she can hold then she enter in with afraid she close her eyes . ahem start teaching her but he dont let without support .

in mm

jigar im getting bore we dont have anything to do rashi said . im also getting bore but what to do i dont know . let see a movie yes let call every one ok she said ,yes call them will have fun . later all was in the hall waiting for the movie start , then jigar say actually i will not put a movie but our childhood cd . oh bhai i was about to ask you to play that cd thx bhai , your welcome . he start the cd where it show children are playing , then they ask to rashi do you know whom is ahem and who is jigar . she reply the red looking so cute im sure it ahem , and in blue clothes and gole gole is jigar and the one who look like an angle is our kinjal , im right . yes rashi you are right hetal reply . they saw how they having fun , play , swim , on her birthday how they were dancing all there memory was in it . koki was with tears hetal also then kinjal start crying . koki ask her why she is crying she said she will miss them a lot . hetal and koki hugs her and said we will also miss you beta but we will not be so far when ever you want you will be able come to meet us na .yes maa kaki i know that ok now stop crying lets see the cd they all laugh .

in the swimming pool

i must say you learn quickly , of cause if the couch is like you she said silently . what you said , im saying that yes i learn every thing quickly . oh ok hen let have a race what you said , a race now ahem how can i just learn and you want to do a race . yes i want to see if you have learn well or not , ok then let have it she said .they did and enjoy swimming moment they were in there wold forget about every thing . then later they decide to enter in side , ahem say wait gopi let me first go out and give you towel hen you come out ok , she look at him how respect and know what she would feel if she come out without wrap her in the towel , he give her the towel and they enter in they went in there room to change .


in the room ahem heard gopi shout loudly he run fast and enter in her room she run to him and hug him so tightly . he ask what happen , woh cockroach on the wall im afraid of it . he laugh and say you are afraid of a small cockroach gopi see he has already left with your loud voice he got afraid see open your eyes . no you are laying to me , do you think i can lie to you . she open her eyes and did not see anything she open her arms around him . bye the way what did you say i have a load voice han she hit him on his chest , ouf you hurt me .really you got hurt ahem im sorry show me he smile and say in a teasing mode if you want to see where i got hurt i will have to take my shirt off . youuu she run after him i will not spare you today , whom want you to spare he said while he was running . then gopi was about to hit him they fall on the bed , she was on his top her hand on his shoulder , his hand on her waist they were so close they can hear the beating of each ever heart how it was beating so loud . they stay like his looking at each ever eyes they were feeling a strange feeling around them .gopi come in her sense and say im hungry can we go to have our breakfast . oh ahem say sorry he stand up looking at another place he was feeling ashamed .

they went down having the breakfast silently them ahem say thx to gopi about the candle light dinner . for me it was the first candle light dinner but im sure not for you gopi . infact for me also was the first time i have it , what you and anil has never been in a candle light dinner . no when ever we do to a plan to have it , we always has some thing to stop it , but see i never do any plan and i got a candle light dinner hat to with you . she was thinking all the thing she wanted to do with some one special it was happening with ahem why why him but not anil . do you love mango juice ahem ask her , no and you i love it if the weather was good i could go and plug some reap mango and do some juice and im sure you would like it , you know when i was kid my mom always do it for me even now when come the season or went i went in my nani place . i think i left my mod near the pool i go to take it .


gopi saw the weather was clear she went out plug some reap mango she was taking her step back when she get hurt with some wood it enter in her foot , she shout ahem was coming in the hall and hear her he saw her outside in the yard . he run to her and saw her with tears crying and he saw the wood in he foot , he pick her and carry her in side , he make her lay on the coach then he took the aids box to her . he scold her why was the necessary for you to go out gopi what if you got more hurt then , what would happen did you think of that , he was taking out the small woods in her foot . im sorry ahem i just wanted to plug some mango for you
stop crying now im sorry also i scold you you know i cant see you in pain or tears it hurt and he stop . while putting the med he blow on it as it was hurting her they get eyes lock . then his mod ring it was koki hello ahem i wanted to tell you that the weather is ok now you can return at home tommorow , yes mom will be there tommorow bye . why tommorow not today she ask ,because will will not be able to walk today that why i said tommorow or you want to return today tell me , what ever you think aouch ,what happen show me your hand she show him her hand it was hurt also . he clean it with lots love and feeling , she was just looking at him her heart say he is the right person for her he has all affection , love tendress respect , feeling support all what a person want to have he has all the quality i him .

at night he make her eat the meal then take her in her room to sleep he was going gopi call him and ask if he dont mind to sit to talk . he said no then he went on the couch he sit then they start talking . he saw her tembling she said she is feeling cold ,ahem take out cuiete and cover her but still she was feeling cold . then she ask ahem if he can wrap her in his arms she is sure she will be fine ,are sure you want you want to be in my arms gopi ,yes ahem . he enter under the cuiete and he wrap her in his arms he carasse her fore head and kiss her and he said her to sleep , they felt sleep .

next day gopi open her eyes and look at ahem and she talk i her heart , how happy she felt in this two days she felt the same as she was spend with his friend . ahem i wish if i could always when i wake up i saw me in your arms but i know this will never happen , my heart is telling that it could be you my friend my love because i feel the same feeling when i was in your arms and when we spend time together and she close her eyes again .

ahem open his eyes he also said the same thing in his heart he wish if he could wake up on seeing gopi face everyday but he know that will never happen . he is happy for two days he spend with her he can feel her love for him , his heart is telling that she is the friend of him , i just want to see you happy gopi .

they leave the cottage to the home the drive was silent until they reach in front of mm . gopi thx ahem for being there for her , and say this was the dream which she always wanted to have with his friend . she will never forget that she kiss him on his cheek . ahem say the same thing to her what ever he wanted was happen in this two days all his wish come true he was feeling that he spend the time with her friend we will also not forget that . now you will soon start a new life with anil and im he stop .what about you ahem what will you do . im happy the way i im now the time i got with you is enough for me to leave . they look at each ever for the last time the same way when they left last time . 😭

here i stop hope you will like it let me know how you saw it .
what do you think they will get to know about each ever or not .😊

part 11 pg 11
Edited by hana_y - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thx next part will be also great
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thx for it happy o know you like it

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