new ss tum meri ho UPDATED( scene15 PAGE 35) - Page 14

Originally posted by: sks21

it was very good...so what will rasi and kinjal do??
update soon

thanks dear.they are gonna create circumstances where gopi and ahem will get close.

I'm really enjoying your story!!

Originally posted by: NazmaJ

I'm really enjoying your story!!

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<div>Can't wait to read more!!

thanks a lot nazma.means a lot coming from u.am a huge fan of your work

The weekend was drawing closer and the excitement levels increasing like crazy.they had charted out a basic plan and all the dramas they were about to do to get both of them closer.suddenly kinjal complained YOU GUYS ARE SO LUCKY YOU VE SOMEONE TO FLIRT WITH BUT POOR SINGLE ME WAT WILL I DO?RASHI AND JIGAR ARE GONNA ROMANCE NON STOP.AHEM AND GOPI WILL BE BLUSHING AS IF THEY ARE ON THEIR FIRST DATE.AND THE PEOPLE FOR WHOM THIS IS ACTUALLY THE FIRST DATE TAT AKADU ANKUR AND UR FRIEND SONAL WILL BE BUSY COZ TAT SONAL S GONNA UTILIZE EVERY MINUTE. WAT WILL I DO ALL ALONE?GUYS HAVE PITY ON ME PL.OR DO ONE THING CALL UR COUSIN DHAVAL NA ANYWAYS HE WORKS SO HARD RUNNING HIS HOTELS EVEN HE DESERVES A BREAK.

Gopi and rashi glared at her simultaneously
gopi:HE S MY BROTHER KINJAL DONT EVEN GO IN TAT DIRECTION
Rashi:YOU ARE 21 AND HE S 28.SHAMELESS GIRL.

Kinjal:flirting mein age nahi feelings matter karti hain am not gonna marry him or anything just harmless flirting na.
Or i am not going to come.anyways we had hit it off in your wedding as well.hmmm never met him after that.

Gopi:OKI OKI I WILL ASK HIM.BUT NO GUARANTEES HE WILL COME.YOU ARE A KID SO YOU BETTER ACT LIKE ONE .AM WARNING YOU NOW OLY.this was enough for kinjal atleast she would not get bored.

Rashi:wat will we wear guys.wat will we wear in the water rides? Am so so excited.

Gopi:i know you wanna go shopping.lets ask maji for permission and lets hit the malls.

Rashi and kinjal have decided to wear tshirts and jeans for dry rides while gopi is gonna wear jeans and kurta.and for the water rides they will be wearing tshirts with leggings which are just below the knees.
gopi tells ahem about the plan and reminds him to inform ankur as well.ahem cant help smiling at gopi s enthusiasm.she looks like a small kid left in the play ground.

Dhaval confirms tat he s coming making kinjal more happy.jigar tells tat his friend elesh who s a manager in their company will also accompany them.tat makes kinjal happier now two guys will be vying for her attention .wow.

Finally the picnic day arrives.everyone decides to meet at mac donalds so that they can stuff themselves before as the amusement park is a one and a half hour drive from the city.

Kinjal ahem gopi rashi jigar go in one car and when they reach they see dhaval already waiting for them.he s come in his car.
Kinjal:hi dhaval! Long time no c! You seem very busy with your work.you know wat they say all work and no play makes jack a really dull boy.she teased

dhaval.:ya work keeps me busy.wat about you?oly play and no work makes jane a really lazy girl!he teased

soon ankur arrived in his open jeep.sonal s brother had dropped her and went back.while elesh came in bike.
Gopi and rashi made all the necessary introductions.then they discussed how will they be going to the park and ordered loads of burgers and french fries and started eating.

Kinjal who was dying to create some drama said LETS GO IN TWO CARS GUYS SEPARATE GALS SEPARATE,

RASHI got really upset and tried kicking her.AND LETS HAVE A RACE GUYS .THE LOSERS HAVE TO BE THE WINNERS SLAVES FOR THE WHOLE DAY TODAY.she suggested

she knew this was enough for both her brothers who were so competitive that they would agree to it.

Soon after finishing breakfast they decided to leave. The guys were planning to go in dhaval s car.while the gals in modi s car.rashi noticed the exchange of glances between sonal and ankur and she was happy.

Rashi was given the responsiblity of driving the car for the gals while ankur volunteered for the guys.soon the race started.

WHY WHY KINJAL WHY DID YOU DO THIS.I WANTED TO SIT WITH AHEM.gopi screamed.PATIENCE PATIENCE MY DARLING BHABS.I VE TAKEN TAT AKADU ANKUR IN CONFIDENCE AND THEY ARE GONNA LOOSE SWEETIE PIE.THEN AHEM WILL BE YOUR SLAVE FOR THE WHOLE DAY THEN IMAGINE WAT ALL YOU CAN MAKE HIM DO.kinjal answered rubbing her hands in glee..
All the gals screamed with joy after listening to this
SEE SONAL WAT A BIG HEART ANKUR HAS HE IS PERFECT FOR YOU.Rashi teased.
Sonal blushed pretty pink and hit her lightly.

The journey was fun.the gals were busy playing antakshari while the guys talked about cars bikes cricket latest gadgets etc. true to his word ankur lost the race by a narrow margin.


YAHOO I WIN I WIN AM SORRY WE WIN rashi screamed jumping up and down like a pogo stick.NOW YOU GUYS ARE OUR GULAMS. Yupeee.


Kinjal winked at ankur and mouthed thank you inaudibly.

SO WAT S NEW?I AM YOUR LIFE LONG SLAVE MY DARLING WIFE.jigar teased.
They reached the entrance and saw a huge monkey statue.everybody was so excited.ankur and sonal were busy talking shyly.rashi and jigar were busy getting their picture s clicked in romantic poses.kinjal was flirting with both the single men.ahem kept standing aloof.gopi went up to him and teased WOW WHAT EXPRESSIONS YOU HAVE.JUST LIKE TAT STATUE.LIKE ONE BANDAR.she teased

oh so he was a monkey was he?tat day when she was kissing him back she definately found him attractive.wait he had to give her a proper reply.WHAT ARE YOU?MY BANDARIYA??!
Sonal who was busy eavesdropping retorted before gopi could reply NO SHE S NT A BANDARIYA.SHE S YOUR MALKIN. OR HAVE YOU FORGOTTEN SLAVE!!BUT YOU ARE HER BANDAR NO DOUBT YOU HAVE TO DANCE TO HER TUNES. She teased and everyone laughed.

GUYS WHY ARE YOU LAUGHING?YOU ALL ARE IN THE SAME BOAT.YOU ALL ARE OUR SLAVES SO YOU HAVE TO HOLD OUR PURSES.ANYWAYS YOU WILL LOOK VERY CUTE HOLDING LADIES BAGS.and she asked everyone to hand their bags to the men.everyone made faces but they had to agree.no other option.they bought tickets.went inside

they decided to enjoy the dry rides first.then when the heat was unbearable they would enjoy the water rides.after finishing and if there was time left they would finish the dry land rides left.

They took lockers and went to washrooms and changed.
OH GOD SHE LOOKS LIKE A KID IN JEANS.ahem admired his wife.but why was she wearing tat kurta couldnt she take a leaf from her darling sisters book?couldnt she wear a tshirt like all other girls were wearing.he could admire her figure more.

She looked cute never the less.

HE IS SO HOT.WAT MUSCLES.gopi was busy drooling over her husband.he was wearing a black track pant and sleeveless tshirt.she was busy salivating at the sight before her.but her stupid sis scream could not let her stay in dreamland anymore.

they started enjoying the rides.they were standing in a queue for a ride INSANITY which looked very scary.gopi seemed tensed while the attendant was strapping her to her seat.

Ahem noticed this and took her hand in his and held it tight.and he came near her ear and whispered WHY FEAR DEAR WHEN I AM HERE and winked at her.she blushed like an apple.he wanted to bite tat cheek of hers.he decided he will bite it before the day ends.

loved both the updates...its wonderful
cant wait to read more...
plz update soon...

thanks sks21.am glad u liked it

really nice .have 2 exams tom. so will comment in later tom.

Originally posted by: rsk16

really nice .have 2 exams tom. so will comment in later tom.

oki. All the best for your exams study well .

wow amazing i like this part come soon