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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: taniks

Fab update , pls continue soon


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#72

Originally posted by: sks21

wonderful update...
continue soon


Thanxx yaar...will update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Bloem123

Amazing Update Cant wait to read the next part!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: CHIKA784

Wonderful update Gohem123,Really love how your shaping the story,oh no poor Gohem,Wonderful👏😊



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Originally posted by: uamaz

Awesome and totally different and unexpected ... top marks 👍🏼



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Originally posted by: sandyuk

Love the update! Can't wait for the next chapetr 😃


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

nice part...

poor gopi and aham both r in trouble



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Am sorry for the late update...But its a long one..i think you all will enjoy this...

PART 5

Karan looked at his prey as aham flung his arms around Gopi so as to cover her from cameras. But the damage was done.

Karan (shouted) : Enough..just get out of this place..we have to do our duty..

Press men at once scuttled'

Aham looked in horror as pressmen were leaving. He said, " hey, we haven't done a thing..give us the photos..Don't publish them"

Karan smiled at him and mocked him in horrible voice, " We haven't done anything.. .silly boy'Were you doing exercise on her body, you?

Aham : Look officer, we haven't done..you know, we are college mates..Some fellows were attacking her. I have come to rescue'That's it..

Karan : Well made up story'

Vikram and Preethi ran towards the room followed by whole class. Gopi was looking disheveled and tears were falling over her cheeks ..

Vikram (panting ) : Sir, we know them..I am their teacher. They can't do such a thing..

Karan : Who are you? Let us do the job'Don't interfere..

Vikram : Sir, please..

Anji ran towards gopi and aham at once left her and gopi hugged anji and began to sob uncontrollably'

Karan : Get off her,madam..we have to talk to her..

Preethi : Are you not listening? They are college students. We have come here for tour.

Vikram : Exactly.

Karan : You don't need to tell me what's happening? I will tell you. You have come here for a tour and these (pointing at aham and gopi) pupils before going to their home, thought of sleeping together..right?

Gopi : No(She was wailing ) Anji hold her tightly looking aghast at karan's words

Vikram: What nonsense? Gopi had come here to take her handbag. Aham was helping her.

Karan : what a likely story

Aham : Sir, If gopi was fallen on top of any other girl from our college, will you take action against them saying they are lesbians?

Karan: SHUT UP'.After doing all sorts of bad things, you have come to teach me'I will make sure you two get an imprisonment for at least one day.

Preethi : Aham, please..Don't make matters worse..Sir, we assure you sir, these are nice kids..Please don't spoil their life.

Vikram : Sir, you can ask anyone from our college or hotel staff..they will tell you ..

Karan : no way..(he walked slowly towards gopi who have lied face down on anji's shoulder'a look of terrible shock was clearly etched on her face. Karan stretched his fingers to touch gopi's hair )

Aham jumped in front of him. "Sir, you can take action..(Karan looked at him, a bit disappointment in his face) , but you will lost your job..you must know whom you are dealing with..am Aham ..Aham modi..if you tried to frame us in this case, then you will pay.."

Karan : Oh'Mr. Modi..Famous Modi industries'right?

Aham : Right..

Karan: look sir,(looking at vikram) now you tell me'if this man was not doing anything wrong then why would he threaten me? Look at the girl's state..now you tell me..were you teaching subjects or are you too involved in this?

Vikram : SIR'

Suddenly a phone bell rang and Karan took his mobile'After talking over the phone, karan looked at Aham and " Minister..called for telling me to drop this case..money..money..anyways, am taking the leave.."

He strode past the doors. Preethi rushed towards gopi and asked other students to leave the room..

Outside the room, on the hallway, Sunil looked at aham..

Anitha : what was that? Why is that officer talking to you like that? Aham merely looked at her and said nothing'Everyone was muttering something..Aham closed his eyes thinking how to vanish from the spot from these whispers..Suddenly someone took his hand and made him to move forward.

Sunil: What was all that about? Were you already know that officer?

Aham: yeah..he was (and he told him everything about the beach incident)

Sunil : Oh that's why..i mean ,now a day, boys girls in same room can't make much difference..right?but this fellow was kept on saying you both were..Now'.what we do?

Aham : What ? he is gone..right? Am free..

Sunil : yeah but remember the phone call..surely your dad must have asked the minister to call

Aham : Dad? How come dad know all this? We are in goa..miles away from Mumbai..

Sunil : yeah,but it seems press have published those photos..

Aham : What ?...Dad's gonna kill me'

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MODI MANSION (Mumbai)

Parag Modi was sipping tea sitting relaxed in a sofa , watching TV in which news is going on'Kokila Modi was scuttling here and there with some other woman surrounding her to help her with household chores'

Koki: My son is coming'he should have been here yesterday..but these trains'They never understands the feelings of parents..

Kinjal : I have asked bhai to bought some gifts to me'will he bring them?

Koki : Come on kinjal, let your bhai come..then we will discuss this..

Parag modi and kokila modi are the proud parents of Aham and Kinjal..Parag's father chirag have started the Modi industries..But the fame and popularity of modi industries increased when Parag Modi entered the business..Within months,modi industries became the hot topic of business world. Parag have married kokila who was the daughter of famous business man Inder mittal. Parag now wants to hand over his business to aham and marry off kinjal and aham to Umang and Anitha, children of his friend cum business partner Mr.Mallik.

On TV (Breaking News) '

Aham Modi with his classmate seen in a hotel room'{ images of aham and gopi shown on screen}

Parag was looking at screen and then at koki whose mouth was wide open seeing her son's deeds..

Parag took the phone and called the minister'.

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Goa '

Gopi was crying silently..her cheeks have swollen'They look like a bulging tomatoes..

Anji : gopi..please..stop crying..we all know you can never do this'nor aham'then why?

Gopi : anji, I know..but Rajeev..he will kill me..he's gonna do something..i know..i don't wanna go back..

Anji : you can come to my house..okey..

Gopi : your house? Okey..will tell geetha now itself'

Anji : okey'

Students have reached railway station'now two days holiday and then back to college for their 4th year'

Sunil : aham, do I need to come with you?

Aham : no sunil, my dad and mom will understand me'you go on'

Modi mansion

Kinjal : mom, bhai is here'

Aham : mom..where is mom?

Parag : AHAM '.come here'

Aham looks at parag and he was sitting in the arm chair at the centre of the hall. Koki was nowhere to be seen. Every other person were drifting to some other rooms..

Aham : Dad, i..(he stammered seeing parag's eyes)

Parag : how dare you? How dare you besmirch my name? what you think of yourself? You will go and spoil my name like this..

Aham : Dad, you think..i didn't do a thing'lease believe me..i haven't done a thing..

Parag : Oh..so am blind or is the man in these videos not you?

Aham : it was a mistake..dad..i was at the wrong place at the wrong time..i have nothing to do with this girl'.MOM'.she will believe me'MOM'

Parag : SHUT UP'.i don't want to hear anything..its my name you have drown under the drain..if you are telling the truth then agree to marry anitha this Sunday itself'

Aham : Sunday? Day after tomorrow'Dad,am having my college'and 'I can't'

Parag : No..you can't 'what do you want? You want to marry this girl? This piece of filth, middle class girl..look at her state..

Aham : Dad..please'.OK'I will marry anitha if she agrees'.

Parag : Good'now go from here'

Aham strode to upstairs and flung his bag on the floor in anger'

Koki : aham'

Aham looked at her and hugged her tightly'" I haven't done a thing..Dad..he never believes me"

Koki : I trust you aham'But ...you know your dad'we can't do a thing'


Aham's eyes were full of tears'He had never felt this kind of loneliness'.but, anitha..the girl ,everyone wants to touch, to talk, to date..is going to be his partner'A tiny smile lingered upon his lips thinking sunil's and other boy's shocked expressions hearing this'.

AHAM MODI To marry ANITHA''''..


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Edited by gohem123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
very nice...MAHA twist!!
cant wait to read next update...update soon.
thankyou for the long update :)
anitha and ahem---no!!!!
waiting eagerly for the next update

x.x.FAHIMA.x.x
Edited by famzii05 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Excellent,loved it,i had a feeling u were going to update!😛,ewww ii can't believe Ahem's gonna marry Anita,urghhh nooo i don't want that to happen,i want something likee romantic like Gopi see's kids and go's to play with them and Ahem watched her laughing,something cute and starts to admire her!😛

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