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Hi frnds,

Have updated and thanks for the understanding you have shown me...It's a bit long..Do read and give comments and likes....😳


Part 16

Anita's Party

Sunil,rahul,vivek reached at the place first and they were busy looking at the celebrations that thye spotted anita coming towards them..

Sunil: Anita, you are celebrating ahams' success in this place..a night club..what about your house?

Anita:sunil.you know very well that my father and brother are against me seeing aham.You don't understand how hard for me to come always to see aham an darrange all these things'

Vivek:its brilliant anita..we were just'hey look'here comes our man..aham modi'

Sunil:yeah..he proved that he got modi blood'

Aham(coming with gopi): hi..

Anita:aham, hi..gopi..

Sunil: Gopi, why are you packed?(seeing bag in gopi's hands)Are you too going with aham?😉

Gopi:No..am moving to anji's house today..

Rahul:Speaking of anji, here she comes'

Anji:am I late? Hey..aham..congrats..you done it..congrats..

Aham:yeah..thanks..(Anita grabbed aham's shoulder and urged him forward and both of them walked away)

Anji spotted gopi :Gopi,all packed..we will go early..if not mom will not let us enter..

Anji realized that no one has replied her yet..Anji turned over to see gopi looking at another direction.Anji: Gopi..am talking to you..are you okey

GopiLyeah..am..

Dance started and all of the students get on the dance floor. Vivek spotted gopi sitting there alone clutching a glass of orange juice.

Vivek:Gopi, why don't you join me for dancing?

Gopi:No..am fine..

Vivek:come on gopi..its fun time..(He grabbed gopi's hands and pulled her).She said, look vivek..i don't know how to dance..seriously..you will make a fool of yourself if you try to dance with me'

Aham who was dancing close to them with anita replied," yes..buddy..look for someone entertaining.."

Gopi left vivek's hands hearing aham's words an dleft the party and went outside..Anji catching up with her: gopi..now don't take seriously what aham said..he didn't mean that..but gopi was already in tears..Anji:okey..fine..we can go now..okey..i will call sunil..

Gopi:no need to call anyone..i wanna go now..

Anji: but gopi..

Gopi: are you coming or not? Or else I will go to some hostel..

Anji:okey..fine..am coming..lets go..

{Anji messaged sunil about her sudden departure from party..sunil looked at aham who was enjoying his evening with anita. He has never seen aham dancing before..Rahul : its okey sunil..no need to tell him anything..He's happy that he got back anita..don't spoil his happiness}

Airport

Aham:Thanks anita'The party was simply superb..

Anita:aham actually I wanna thank you..i have never thought that I will actually see you dance and smile..but you were cool..yuou are changed..

Vikram:aham,(aham was busy thinking what change has occurred to him turned at sir's voice) have you taken every necessary things? Do check If anything's left out or not?We have got half an hour more..

Aham : okey..(and he began looking)

Sunil:aham, if you have any problem..you can call me for assistance..

Rahul:yeah..if you wanna someone kick you off the job, call him..

Suni went to hit him but stopped in mid-way by ahams' gasp.

Sunil:what?

Aham(holding a small package):I had to go somewhere..you tell vikram sir that I will be here in some 15minutes..

Sunil:oye'(aham ran past them)

Sunil catch up with him at the entrance.."you can't go now..what is it? Tell me..i will bring it for you..

Aham:its ..nothing important..and he ran outside..

Anji's house

Gopi was sleeping restless thinking about aham..Is he angry at me that I left without saying anything? Or may be he hasn't noticed me going..gopi sat up on bed and looked at clock..aham may had already boarded the fight..mobile rang'gopi reached out to it and saw aham's name in it..Gopi :hello aham..have you boarded the flight?are you safe?have you forgotten anything..

Aham: gopi..listen to me..come outside..am on the terrace..

Gopi: what?(surely mobile is playing pranks on her..aham and terrace..)

Aham: come now..quick. .

Gopi utterly astonished at herself and at the phone came outside and saw aham standing there..

Gopi; what are you doing here?you have got a flight to catch up..

Aham: yeah'I know but this is important..

Gopi: what's more important than your going to banglore at the moment?

Aham: this?(showed the package in his hands)

Gopi:this? Whatabout this?you will need money there..you are not gonna ask vikram sir for money, are you?

Aham: Gopi..how did you got this money?where?this much?

Gopi: forget about the source..its for you..

Aham:I got money ..my mum lent me some..i am asking you how did you manage to got this much money?

Gopi:if you didn't need that, give them back to me..

Aham handed out the package to her..gopi;happy?now go..😡

Aham: gopi I know that when you came with me in that farm house you were in your bridal dress..

Gopi: aham, don't waste time ..just go..😕

Aham: And I also remember that you had told me that your mother had given those ornaments to you, the only piece of gold you had ever seen

Gopi looked at aham: {he knew..}

Aham:how can you gopi?how can you let them go so easily?i want a promise from you'when I come back, I want you to show the jewellery to me..will you?

Gopi: aham..i..i was..(stutter a poor gopi)

Aham: Promise me..gopi..

Gopi: promise..

Aham: bye then'{He went down and there was the airp[oprt taxi waiting outside and he sat in it..}

Gopi clutched the package tightly and turn around..

Anji: was that aham?(a look of shock in her eyes)

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Sunil:I didn't understand..aham went to see gopi..in the middle of night from airport.. haven't you asked her why had he come?

Anji: I told you a million times no..she isn't telling me anything..she goes on saying that he had come to say bye..

Vivek:no..that may not be the reason..may be he forgot something to take or something to tell her..

Sunil:Anji, where's gopi anyway?we can ask her ..

Anji:she said she's not coming today..she got something else to do..(anji said in an undertone 'work In supermarket)

Meanwhile gopi was back in her room(in anji's house) and was busy keeping the jewellery back in her bag.Her cell rang at the moment and she took it..Aham..i have taken the jewellery..now concentrate on your work..and don't call always..

Aham: so now you have problem with my caling?

Gopi:aham, you know well that your mobile doesn't have that much money..that's why..

Aham: okey..will call you at night then..bye..

Gopi went downstairs to go for market but got her way blocked by anji's mother..

Anji's mother(aunt): gopi..i wanna talk to you alone..

Gopi: aunty, anji is not here and i don't think that I have anything to talk to you

Aunt:Gopi, but I have to..i know you are angry with me and you should be..i have played with your and aham's life..but gopi just give me some minute so that I can explain why I did it..why I spoke to aham's mother about your marriage..

Gopi:no aunty..you don't have to explain anything..what happened is happened..no one can change their destiny..

Aunt:gopi, I have told aham's mom evryhting..not just your marriage but everything..starting from the incidents in goa.

Gopi:what? You..but if you have, then why did koki aunty behaved like her son and I were bringing disgrace to their honor?

To know the answer turn to my FF next week ..till then..keep commenting and liking'{Have sent PMs to everyone who has liked and appreciated..if anyone doesn't recieve it, am apologizing.. }

Edited by gohem123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice one dear!!!! was in a dire need of something like this when on screen this disaster is goin on!!!!!!!! pllzzz update next part soon!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for PM dear. Wonderfully written and has taken on an unexpected twist ... hooked now can't wait for the next part 👏
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Yay, you updated. I have been missing your FF and was pleased to see a PM from you 😛.
Bless Gopi, having to put up with Ahem nice one minute and harsh the other... Can't wait for the next update, eager to know what Kokila had to say.
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that was Fabulous!! i loved it!! why did you leave in the cliff hanger?!!??! I love Ahem.. he came back just to gopi for her jewellery! cant wait to read more!! thanks for the PM!! 👏

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