FF: Hote Hote Pyaar Hogaya Ch19 - Pg72 (31/3/13)

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Nazma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms
Chapter 11 read, that wuss she called is going to give her a divorce now...lol, nice chapter Nazma, Gopi still crying and blaming herself, no help for her, everyone want's her to stay innocent and unworldly as a result she doesn't fight back, rather she blames herself and believes when people spew venom on her...bechari Gopi. Going forth to chapter 12, I'm not tired at all, as I slept a few hours before starting reading...😊

I quite enjoyed using the word wuss!! Rashi is digging her own grave!!

Well you know what Gopi's like!! Hopefully I'll be able to get her to open her eyes soon!!!

Well at least you slept!! I'm still wide awake - sleep eludes me!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#332

Chapter 12 is an awesome chapter, Kokila explains to her one tracked mind son all that has been occurring in the house as pertaining to his wife. All the kalakaries that she knows off she exposes to him, well done Nazma for writing it so well, for remembering all that Kokila knows and putting it down so nicely to make Aham realise about Gopi. 👏

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moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#333

hehe, so you're already fixing those lose ends! seems like the CVs need to learn a thing or two from you 😉

once again, it was a verrry nice update!

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navyab

@navyab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#334

Nazma enjoyed all the parts...so Ahem does not want Gopi out, so what will he do...

Yeah liked the part that he acknowledged that few months back he would have loved a divorce...but now...he cannot even think about it 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

#335

Chapter 13 read, Another awesome chapter, Aham all ready to make it up to Gopi, comes to find out that she thinks no-one loves her, but again he tells her everyone that does love her, but his still not looking deeply at himself, what is he afraid of finding...however he was going to plant a smacker on her before Jigar came in the room, poor Gopi Modi missed out on her first kiss...😆, don't deprive her too long.

So Jigar is planning a restraining order as well as a divorce, that's something we have got to wonder about the Modi's after the police incident where Urmila and Rashi were lying and saying Kokila beat up Rashi, it's very strange they didn't take that step, instead they kept fighting face to face instead of getting the authorities involved it's obvious that they were just punishing Rashi and never intended for Jigar and her to divorce, I just wonder why Rashi and Urmila didn't just sit quietly and wait it out...I suppose they were afraid for a lawyer to come knocking with the divorce papers (thereby the Modi's would have time to build a case for divorce, they didn't want to allow them that opportunity). Well I wonder how you are going to play your story, are you going to allow Rashi and Jigar to reconcile?

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Trisha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#336

Why is the door never shut??? They were going to kisss ot oh...hpe aham teases her more n we get a peck at least in nxt upd8

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Nazma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms
Chapter 12 is an awesome chapter, Kokila explains to her one tracked mind son all that has been occurring in the house as pertaining to his wife. All the kalakaries that she knows off she exposes to him, well done Nazma for writing it so well, for remembering all that Kokila knows and putting it down so nicely to make Aham realise about Gopi. 👏

Thankyou Nafisa!!

When Ahem gets something in his head he has to figure it out.

I tried to get as many out as I could, there are still some kalakaries left though, but it was important for Ahem to know some facts.

I was surprised by what I remembered!!

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Nazma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: moksha89
hehe, so you're already fixing those lose ends! seems like the CVs need to learn a thing or two from you 😉

once again, it was a verrry nice update!

Aww thankyou!!!!

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Nazma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#339

Originally posted by: navyab
Nazma enjoyed all the parts...so Ahem does not want Gopi out, so what will he do...

Yeah liked the part that he acknowledged that few months back he would have loved a divorce...but now...he cannot even think about it 😉

Thankyou Navya!!

I don't know what Ahem is going to do about anything yet - I need to have a good think!!

I thought it was a nice juxtaposition between Jigar and Ahem's feelings now!!

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Nazma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#340

Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms
Chapter 13 read, Another awesome chapter, Aham all ready to make it up to Gopi, comes to find out that she thinks no-one loves her, but again he tells her everyone that does love her, but his still not looking deeply at himself, what is he afraid of finding...however he was going to plant a smacker on her before Jigar came in the room, poor Gopi Modi missed out on her first kiss...😆, don't deprive her too long.

So Jigar is planning a restraining order as well as a divorce, that's something we have got to wonder about the Modi's after the police incident where Urmila and Rashi were lying and saying Kokila beat up Rashi, it's very strange they didn't take that step, instead they kept fighting face to face instead of getting the authorities involved it's obvious that they were just punishing Rashi and never intended for Jigar and her to divorce, I just wonder why Rashi and Urmila didn't just sit quietly and wait it out...I suppose they were afraid for a lawyer to come knocking with the divorce papers (thereby the Modi's would have time to build a case for divorce, they didn't want to allow them that opportunity). Well I wonder how you are going to play your story, are you going to allow Rashi and Jigar to reconcile?

You've caught up!!!

Ahem is stubborn!! It's taken him a year to work out that Gopi is the right person, but I won't let him wait too long before he realises he's in love - at least he's realised there's something there!!

I know I made Gopi miss out!! But I've made her aware of her Ahemji's intentions and she doesn't seem too shocked so hopefully they'll be getting closer soon!!

Jigar getting a restrining order seems like a good idea especially as I am going to get them divorced!!

In this story I can't see a way back for her especially after I made her remorseless and vile towards Jigar. I've got other things in mind for Jigar.