FF:- Saathi Re(updated) part-15- page 79 9th feb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#551

Originally posted by: RaJiforever
Shaina , when r u updating ? its sunday today, u wee gonna update on friday or saturday...pls update soon. M waiting 😭

maybe she is busy.. after all she did two updates in short time..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: rashi.krishna

maybe she is busy.. after all she did two updates in short time..

hmmm , maybe take ur time shaina after all the update would be worth the wait. 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

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i am soo soo soo soo sorry...acutally i had left just a small piece of paragraph but never expected that i had to leave for a function so suddenly..hence the delay...so read on..

Their was a maha update on page 70 if someone missed...

part-14

"so umang came back...happy" "yeah"kinjal said "why so dull face"gopi asked. "Nothing!!" "kinjal..dont mind me asking but do u really like umang" "yeah of course why did u feel so?" "its just u look more upset seeing him than u normally look"gopi said. kinjal smiled and sat down "i dont know he bores me..

i mean..kinjal do this, kinjal do that..i know i have to adjust a bit but he should give me some time, its like being with my mother again, so serious, dictating" "kinjal...can i ask u one thing?" 'yeah sure..why do need the permission" "woh..i understand why dint u tell abhay's matter to ur parents, i understand ahem's point of view too from keeping it from umang

but why did u keep it a secret.. i mean he is going to be ur husband u have to share all ur troubles with him from now on...so why did u hide such a big matter in ur life..i mean u could have taken his help in solving the matter. It would make the matter so simple if umang was involved too." "well gopi...i think ahem bhai was right in not saying to umang...dont tell to anyone but i feel that umang wont understand my pbm. He wont support me, he would taunt me like my parents too."

"dont umang trust u?" "He does..but umang is real possessive and demanding...i have to be very careful with him...totally careful...in everything i do, the way i speak, the dressing, getting ready...he is some what a kind of dictating..and i am sure abhays matter would just make it worse than to straighten the things out. I doubt he would understand, he may remain silent now but i feel that he would keep the doubt in his mind forever. I dont want to add more trouble in my life by letting umang know"

"Kinjal seriously...tell me...if u were given a choice and asked whether u would marry umang or not..would u have said yes even then" Kinjal remained silent. "Kinjal its ur life, not others, its u who have to live with umang ur entire life...if u dont feel comfortable with him then how could u lead a life with him. U cant take ur brothers help everytime u fall in a problem, a partner should support us in every step we take, Not critise our every move" "no gopi u are misunderstanding umang.

he is nice, caring, though a bit strict, its only that he dont show it open. Its not umang is a bad guy gopi,.its that he calcualtes everything in his life..like a bussiness. and expects me to do the same too...maintain the status..and he is right in asking that too..i mean in future i should handle his household and associate in his bussiness parties so he expects me to maintain a standard" "Standards are maintained kinjal but not the cost of our own behaviour. U may not feel today but someday u would

definetly feel that u are not the same person who u used to be...at one point u would definetly feel tired of ur own nature and that day..u can never go back again...kinjal all i have to say is think before u take a step.. their is still a lot of time" "their isnt gopi...not now...not anymore"kinjal said looking out of the sky deep in thought. "may i ask u something"kinjal said "shoot"gopi said "what happend between u and bhai?" gopi looked at her "seriously...its a lot better for u..not knowing it.." kinjal laughed "its hard not to guess anyways" gopi smiled. "are u angry with ahem bhai?" "obviously"gopi smiled kinjal laughed...and looked at her.."if possible...dont hate him"she said and gopi looked at her suprised "u are the first person who told me that!!" kinjal laughed out loud. "i bet it is" "so why cant i hate him..dont say he is ur brother and all stuff"

"ha..no..because...he dont derserve to be hated." gopi looked at her suprised "i know this might be sounding different to u but...whatever he does or say...he dont actually mean it...u know gopi during our childhood..we used to have a pet...me, jigar and rashi used to play with that a lot...its a little puppy but ahem never touched it. we always asked him to play with that..but he never came near that dog..even a centimetre close...do u know why he did that...because he was afraid that the dog wont like him" gopi looked at her amazed.

" u may find this silly but..its really serious matter to him. Bhai can never accept rejection from anyone nor defeat., he wants attention from everyone around him...mostly from the persons he love. when the dog died..me, jigar and rashi forgot it after sometime, do u know how much time did ahem took to forget it...5 years" gopi looked at her suprised. "even today u can find the puppy photo back of his photo in his room..i am not saying all this to u so u should forgive him..i am saying this because..whatever he did...their is a much more deeper reason behind it than it looks..all i say is ahem bhai is not good gopi..but he is not bad either" and kinjal left to the washroom.

"GOPI!!"someone called and gopi was suprised to see her that its anitha. "what do u want?'gopi asked. "stay away from ahem"anitha warned and gopi looked at her confused "what do u mean?' "dont give me those innocent looks, i know very well what are u doing..u are trying to make him jealous by saying that u wil marry jigar so that his attention wil be diverted towards u, dont think that i am so blind gopi..i can see what happend just before..u were trying to come close to him helping him, so all i say is gopi..

dont play ur tricks here because they are not going to work..ahem loves me and tomorrow we wil be together offically..its too late for u" gopi looked at her coldly "if u have so much confidence in ur love anitha...then why are u so afraid of me?" anitha felt a tight slap on her face. "lets say that i am playing games with ahem...so why is that bothering u..is ur love is so breakable that only my presence is disturbing it. so what if i come close to ahem..is he so vurnelable that he would fall for me so easily leaving u..and if that is the case

then anitha..what kind of love is that...?" anitha fumed in anger silently. "do u know what love is ...its understanding one another with their flaws, faith for each other, trust on one another, supporting each other at every step in life, and mostly caring for one another more than ur own life..thats is called a true love...and when we get this kind of love anitha..not even 100 gopis can break that love. if u really loved ahem...u would not come running to me complaining..because u would have trusted ahem and would had faith in ur love that he wont betray u.

do u know why are u so worried anitha...because somewhere in ur heart u too know that what u did was wrong and u are feeling guilty for it. some where back of ur mind u are feeling uneasy with this relation because u still think that ahem belongs to me. Me, and ahem lived so many days in this house since the day i came but not even once we felt any akwardness among us because both of us accepted our paths and moved on with our future, but its only u who is still struck on the past because u dont have any trust in ur relation at all.

People like u anitha will never have peace or happiness in thier life because u wil always feel insecure in ur life..today tomorrow and foeever..."gopi said and left and stopped seeing ahem standing not far away from them. Ahem looked at her from top to bottom and dragged anitha with him.

"why did u go to gopi?" "ahem..she is playing games.." "do u think that i dont think such possibilits or do u think that i am so fragile and vunlereable to every girl in my life." "No ahem i" "or do u think that i still have a flame for gopi" "ahem listen pls" "or as she said dont u have any trust me at all!" "No ahem I" "did u realize what u just did? U have not only got insulted, but u have made a mockery of our relationship too. U gave her a chance to point at us, to laugh at our faces , a chance to her that she is right afteralll" "Ahem i am really sorry"

"HELL WITH UR SORRY"ahem thundred.. "what do u think that ahem modi cant look after himself at all, cant see whats happing infront of his own eyes. Today because of u..ahem modi had to bend his head before her...today i dint have a chance to say something to her and its all because of u" "Ahem i am really so sorry"anitha cried "dont ever repeat this mistake again..not with gopi, not with anyone..understand one thing very well anitha...whatever we have..its our relation, we should not show our defaults infront of everyone..whatever happens we should support one another

and keep our personal life to ourselves only...i sincercly want nobodys interference in our lives or any chance to anyone to come into our lives..do u understand what i am saying"ahem said in a calm manner holding anithas hand and anitha nodded her head clearing her tears. "i am sorry ahem.."she said and hugged him and ahem hugged back "its k..dont repeat this ever again" "i wont i promise."

"Get up...Get up...Get up u lazy fellow...AHEMMM"rashi shouted but the sleeping log dint move an inch. "what happend?'kinjal came in laughing. "the usual..i am tired" rashi said sitting down. "let me try...ahem bhai..ahem bhai..get up..its ur engagmetn day for god sake..get up" "5 more min" "u are saying that since half an hour"rashi grinded her teeth. "idiots get lost"ahem shouted and covered himself with pillow. kinjal sighed "i wil call mom"kinjal said. "waste..badi mami handed this work to me after getting failed"rashi said. "bucket of water" i wil kill u"ahem muttered.

"I got it"rashi exclaimed and went near ahems ear and shouted "Jigar got the new project!!!!" and ahem sprang up like a spring "No No...its mine" kinjal and rashi rolled in laughter. "idiots"ahem muttered. "go and get ready pls..." "whats the need..the engagement is at evening" "but their are some formalities..please ahem leave..badi mami wil come any moment" "fine.."ahem said and jigar came into his room "bhai i need the mehatas file, i thought i would refer it in the car, as its a huge project, and i am thinking to review all the files to get the hang of the work...so bhai..can i take all ur files.

i wil give them to u back..and what did u do with the meeting which i told u to handle..do u.."jigar stopped when everyone were looking at him like he is a zombie. "what happend?"he asked confused "are u going to work?" rashi asked shocked. "of course..kaki siad that i can go to work from today and also i wasted a lot of time these days and ..." "its bhais engagment today"kinjal said "so what its his engagement..what would i do? and also its in the evening...i would come by then!!" "its ur brother who is getting engaged..."rashi said angrily "leave it.."ahem said indifferently.."mr.perfect is getting late for office" he said and went away into the washroom.

rashi gave jigar a hatred glare and went away. kinjal shook her head and went away.

"Rashi!!"koki shouted and rashi rushed to their room. "wheres ahem?" "badi mami..he is getting ready" "good..rashi..i called the saree man..select some nice designer sarees and some matching jewellery to it." Rashi blinked in suprise "badi mami...me..!!" "whats their to get suprised..ur marrige got fixed rashi..everyone wil start noticing u now...u cant wear the same rif raff like u used to do..u should change ur wardrobe now..select nice sarees, dont worry about the cost..and yeah take orange colour more..its suits u" rashi looked at koki suprised and hetal smiled inward. "now what are u looking at my face..select fastly.."koki thundred and rashi ran to the hall.

"Hetal...this is for gopi..go and give it to her" hetal looked at her suprised. "for gopi!!" "yes i want to get her engaged to jigar today..the sooner the better" "but kokila so suddenly..i mean they dint tell us yet.." "hetal...u behave so stupid sometimes...how wil they say that they are ready to get married..if they are silent it means that they have no problem. anyways i can see that jigar is intrested in gopi.and i dont see any reason for gopi to reject jigar. so go and give it to gopi" Hetal nodded and saw that gopi was passing by. "gopi dikra.."hetal called "yes auntie.." "come here"gopi came into the room. "How is this dress.." "wow auntie its really superb..well designed and nice work art too..superb selection auntie"

and hetal noticed a proud smirk on kokis face. "well..u should say that to kokila..she selected this for u" gopi looked suprised at koki and looked at hetal "Me!!" "yes dikra..we want u to wear this tonight for the engagement party" "but auntie..how can i take this..its too costly..i am sorry auntie" "dont worry about the cost...its tradition to gift something to the new bride and as far i can see..its better u start getting adjusted to wear such costly clothes"kokila said. "New bride?"gopi asked confused. "i am so stupid..dikra..we planned to get u and jigar engaged today with ahem and anitha" and gopi bit her lip. "i wil set a appoitment for u at the beaty parlour.."koki said and got up to leave and gopi mustered some courage..

"hetal auntie..i ...i dont want to marry jigar" gopi said and hetal nd koki looked at her suprised. "dikra..what are u saying...i thought u liked jigar" "i do auntie..but liking somethng and loving something is different..i like jigar as my best friend...but nothing else...i am really sorry auntie to raise ur hopes high but jigar is only my friend..thats it..i am sorry"gopi said and handed the dress back to hetal. koki looked at her suprised. "dont be sorry dikra..its my mistake..only sorry for troubling both of u" "can i know the reason why i am being rejected..?"jigar said from the door step seriously. All looked at him suprised "jigar u know the reason..." "is this all because u love someone who dont deserve u at all.."jigar said

and gopi looked at him shocked and all looked at her suprised. "jigar what are u saying..?" "tell me gopi..how many years wil u wait for him..?" "Jigar stop it"gopi warned. "why should i...u are ruining ur life for someone who dont even care for u and is very happy with his life.." "jigar..what are u saying?" "maa..gopi is not agreeing to this marriage not because she dont love me..because she have decided to ruin her life forever waiting for someone" "its not about him"gopi said angrily "then what is it..?" "jigar do u know what u are talking about" "yes i clearly do..tell me one thing gopi..lets say u dont want to marry me..can u tell me if u want to marry someone other than me" "jigar!" "get over him...he is happy out thier...move on"

"I am!!" "whats going on here?"kokila asked. "gopi look at me"hetal said and gopi turned towards her "is jigar saying the truth" "auntie i" "gopi..is jigar saying the truth..do u love someone" "auntie it doenst matter now" "then what is stopping u dikra" "auntie..i...i am not good for this family"gopi sighed and koki looked at her suprised "auntie..i dont know anythign about traditons and rules, ur house is a really disciplaned house, a good family..i dont want to become the dark spot for it" "dikra..why do u consider urself like that" "auntie i think u forgot but ...auntie u know what people think of me in the society" "Gopi...do u think that i asked u to marry jigar without considering anything ?"hetal asked and gopi bent her head down.

"people just talk..dikra..they talk about us too..its not like that we should ruin our life taking their words...we cant live like that...i liked u only by seeing ur nature...i dont care what ur past have..i just care what u are..and how happy my son wil be with u...gopi...i know...only because of u jigar came back to his family...during these past days i see him smiling only with u, u gave me my son back...dikra..dont take him back again" jigar looked at hetal suprised "auntie...jigar loves u...their nothing i did" "i dont know whats their in between u two dikra..but if u are rejecting jigar only because of ur past then i wont consider it as a valid reason...i am giving u time until kinjal marriage..i want u both to consider ur life together..and try to know each other.

if u still fail after that..then..i wil gladly accept ur rejection but not until then"hetal said and handed back the dress to gopi "i consider u my daughter already...its on u now...when wil u accept me as ur mother" and gopi hugged hetal and left glaring at jigar and koki looked at her leaving in deep thinking.

"where are u going?"hetal asked "office"jigar said automatically and hetal sighed "its ur brother engagment today" "yes but maa..." "hetal..its in the evening..jigar wil come back by that time" "kokila i wil listen to anything u say but not this..its high time he should take time to family too..and learn to sort relations...jigar u are going to stay in the house today...understand and spend time with ur cousins..." Jigar looked at koki for help but koki too knew that once hetal decides something..its a line of rock. "k maa"jigar said half heartdly and went away.

"Grey or orange..." "grey"rashi said and ahem picked it. "watch" "that one" he picked the watch. "whats happened to ur hand" ahem asked looking at her hand and rashi bit her lip.."woh..actually" suddenly her cell phone rang..."whos the idiot" rashi dint reply "dont tell me its rakesh" rashi shrug her shoulders "just 5 min"rashi said and went out and ahem sat down waiting...waiting..waiting...he looked at the clock..she was 15 min late...he sat down dejected...pouting.." He saw a figure moving past his room. "rashi!!"he called and gopi looked inside.."oh good"ahem muttered pouting again.

gopi decided to leave as she was already in a spoiled mood due to jigar..no need to add more but something in his expression stopped her. she saw what a mess the room was... "do u need any help" "i dint got such bad days yet" "Fine"gopi said angrily and turned to leave. "wait"he shouted. gopi looked at him and ahem pointed a pair of chappels at the side. gopi looked at them...and looked at ahem confused. ahem pointed at the shoes again and again gopi looked at him confused. "select..."he said angrily. gopi looked at him suprised.."i want to be my best.."ahem said and gopi shook her head.

she looked at the pair and selected one. Ahem inspected every inch of the shoe irritating her and dint pass any comment which gopi took as satisfactory. she turned to go and ahem stopped her suddenly coming into her path He showed the bracelets in his hand and gopi pointed out one. He took the bracelet and kept it beside his grey suit and looked at her. gopi looked at him confused again "suit."he said and gopi looked the whole attire whether it suited everything with each other or not. gopi nodded and ahem looked at every inch of the attire and stood silent which gopi took as a k.

gopi turned to leave and suddenly ahem snatched the dress from her and without any permission opened it and looked at her dress. "who gave u this?"he asked doubtfully which gopi took as a nice dress compliment. "ur mom"gopi said and ahem looked at her irritatingly suprised. "engagement gift"gopi said and ahem flashed a brilliant smile. gopi understood what he was going to say and before he could open his mouth in his engagemennt praises she cut in "my engagment gift" That was enough...his face turned to raddish red immeidately and throwed the dress at her face.

gopi opened her mouth to blast him but at that moment rashi came in to save him,. "i came back"rashi said and stopped looking at the neat attire.."late kahiki"ahem taunted..and rashi looked at the dress and at gopi. gopi got the hint and turns to leave "gopi"rashi called and she looked at her ready for a blasting "thanks"rashi smiled and gopi blinked in suprise and left thinking why all the family members giving her shock after shock.

"dont talk to me..." "sorry" "get lost" "my my some one is fuming out here" "jigar one more word and i wil throw u out.." "what i did is good for u..u wil thank me later" "really" "of course.." gopi rolled her eyes "i want to talk something about kinjal" "what" "i dont know but i feel that umang is not best suited for her...what do u feel about umang" "i understand what u are getting at...i agree that he is a complete opposite to kinjal but..who are best matched gopi..it sometimes happen that though being two opposite poles but still if have understanding and love towards each other..they can be the best couple indeed.

umang is not the prince of dreams type but he wil take care of kinjal, she need a guy to protect her." "but she needs a guy whom she can be open with it..not some one who dictates her" "leave u for one second and u start to spread ur poison"ahem said coming inside and gopi placed her hand on jigar hand. "my my i am feeling scared"ahem taunted. "dont push too much ahem...its ur engagement party today"gopi warned and ahem eyes flashed with anger "i was not ready at that time" "a soldier should always be prepared for everything"jigar said. "Ahem!!"rashi came searching for him holding two dresses and stopped at the door shocked.

"oops"she said. "Red"ahem said "orange"jigar said together and looked at each other. "doomed"rashi muttered. "red"ahem said again..looking at jigar. "orange"jigar said looking at ahem. "Red..." "orange.." "Red" "orange" "RED" "ORANGE" "Pink!!"gopi said tenatively and rashi eyes thanked her immediately "super..."she said. jigar looked at rashi and ahem looked at gopi. "How is ur hand?"jigar asked. "Fine"rashi said. "how did u know her hand is hurt?"ahem asked and jigar looked at rashi accusingly. "Ahem eyes widened with suprise "u attened her!!"ahem said looking at him insulting. "cant i?"jigar said.

ahem turned towards gopi and thundred "its all because of u" "now what i did?"gopi asked confused. "u wasted my time" "u dint felt that before"gopi said. "what is with the time wastage..?"jigar asked. "do u need to know everything?"rashi said. "why cant u say that to ahem?"jigar said. "why are u shouting at her?"ahem said. "why are u shouting at him?"gopi said. "why u all are shouting!!"kinjal shouted. "u people take ur triangle, rectangle or quadrilateral love stories outside...get out"kinjal shouted and ahem looked at gopi and jigar "disturbances of india"ahem muttered and went away and gopi and jigar looked at each other "who disturbed who?"jigar asked confused.

"god hetal..now what wil we do..so many works..and still nothing is ready." "dont worry koki we wil make it" "we have two girls at house..and see both are locked in their rooms..." rashi and kinjal and gopi came at that time. "maa where are my lavender slippers" "kinjal how many times i have to tell u to keep ur things in place...i wil find them later...go and make a rangoli at the entrance." "but maa i dont know how to make it" "this girl wil never learn..rashi go and do it" "badi mami...i just put the nail paint on hands..sorry" "hey krishna bagwan...both are useless...we have to do everything" "gopi can do it"kinjal said and rashi and gopi snapped thier heads at kinjal.

"What"koki asked suprised. "yes maa..she got first prize in rangoli competetion " "really dikra"hetal asked. "its nothing auntie...kinjal is over exgratting..." "well...do u know how to make rangoli or not"koki asked and gopi nodded her head. "k..go and make one in the entrance.." "ji"gopi said and left. rashi looked at koki and gopi and left to her room. gopi sat down to work..and completed a huge rangoli...she was about to put final touches when...someone stepped on her rangoli...spoiling it..gopi dint need to look up to see who it was. "oops.."ahem said..not feeling sorry at all. gopi grinded her teeth...and got up and gave him a cool stare. "what are u looking at?"ahem demanded.

"gopi ...i got the purple colour.."rashi said and stopped in horror looking at the rangoli. ahem lost the colour in his face and gopi raised her eyebrows and smirked folding her hands. "AHEM!!"rashi thundred and ahem jumped out of the rangoli immeidately "i dint do..she did" "U IDIOT..." "i thought she was doing this" "well rashi was helping me a little.."gopi said. "U DUMBO...Now we have to do this again...DONKEY..." "see rashi listen..its my engagememnt today.." "Hell with ur engagement...u spoiled my rangoli...blind fellow..blind fellow..."rashi shouted and ran after him and ahem ran away from her. "i wil get u"ahem shouted, and gopi rolled her eyes.

"wait...u monkey..just wait" rashi ran and collided with jigar and both fell down, rashi on top of him...both stopped thier breaths immeidately and rashi looked at jigar eyes shocked. Jigar kept a irritating expression but as soon as he saw her wide shock big big eyes...his expression changed into amazment and lost looking at her. both looked at each other lost...and rashi realized first and got up immeidately. Both looked down uncomfortable and rashi pushed the hair oout of her face. Jigar looked at her and looked back again and smiled. rashi looked at him quetioningly...jigar pointed at her face. rashi touched her face..and looked at him confused...jigar pointed at her eyes and on her cheek

and signalled that the kajal got on her cheek. Rashi bit her tongue..and rubbed her cheek making the kajal spread more. Jigar sighed and caught her hand and pulled it out and took a handkercheif and slowly and clearly cleared the mark from her face. rashi kept looking at him and jigar glanced at her and kept looking at her. "rashi...i need the "gopi came and stopped and jigar relaeased rashi hand immediately. "the mark went away"jigar said and rashi nodded and looked at gopi and went away down hurridely. jigar went away and ahem came beside her suddenly "u... make me some kheer...i am hungry"ahem ordered.. and gopi splashed the colour on his face and went away.

it was evening...slowly the guests started to arrive...

"rashi...maa is calling u.."jigar said and stopped seeing her. Rashi turned towards him in a pink ghagra..with a silver embroidary...with loose hair..and not did make up yet..wearing a necklace. Jigar kept staring at her and rashi looked down..."what"she said looking at herself cautiously. jigar came back.."woh..maa is calling" rashi nodded and jigar left. "how am i looking..."ahem asked...and kinjal gave a thumbs up and went away. "shit i forgot the brooch...kin..."ahem stopped seeing kinjal went away and went to her room. and gopi jumped just in time putting the dupatta over her. ahem turned to the other side immeidately and said "i ditn see anything"defensively. gopi shook her head and put the pins.

"can i turn"he asked. gopi said a"hmmm". ahem turned and blinked in suprise and started at her wide eyed. gopi looked at her attire defensively and it was later she noticed...tooo late..that she wore a green and red mixed combination ghagra. ahem broke into a teasing smile. "well well..according to my knoweldge..jigar fav colour is not green" "u already saw this dress" "i never thought u would wear it todaay" gopi dint said anything. ahem placed the brooch on tthe table and sat down obidently on the bed. gopi sighed and took the brooch and waited. "what"ahem asked. "stand up"gopi said "lilliput"ahem muttered and gopi pinched him with the brooch. "ouch..careful" "lilliputs makes mistakes.."gopi said.

"so, i see that u have finally accepted that i am unavailable." "i already did that..but how come u realized today" "i see u are back to urself...snappy, angry, teasing...what happend got bored of ur innocent, naive..patience character" "sort of" "see i told u...u cant act ur whole life.." "right.." ahem looked at her curiously "what are u hiding?" "nothing..its done" gopi said and turned to leave and ahem grabed her arm and pullled back "what are u hiding?" gopi sighed.."jigar told ur mom and his mom about us" Shock hit ahem like a thunder. "what the...is he mad" "i asked the same..but dont worry u are safe" "what do u mean by that?" "he said i love someone but he dint said for whom i am waiting?"

ahem relaxed. "so is ur marriage canceled"ahem asked happily. "bad news for u...its is still on.." "what...how?"ahem asked shocked. "Hetal auntie rejected my offer of back out..and decided that me and jigar should get to know each other...soon" "ur stars are really good or..u are playing really well" "take whatever u want...u are looking so happy today" "its my engagment party with the person i love..unlike u..i am going to marry someone who loves me..and i lovve her and u wil be watching it crying tears of bloood...what do i want more." "how considerate of u.." "thank u.." gopi rolled her eyes and turned to leave and ahem grabbed the hair clip from her hair "ouch...what are u doing" "do u like this hair clip?"

"yes..why" "good" ahem broke the clip in two pieces and put them in gopis hand and left saying "revenge for colouring my face..". gopi shook her head and slammed the pieces down.

The party started...the building set to decorate...people started to arrive...

"do u know ahem...their no need for any decoration lights.."rashi said. "why?" "because ur face is lit up like a thousand watt bulb" ahem smiled. jigar and gopi came down together.."their u go our lovely dovely couple.."rashi said. "what about ur partner...?" "they couldnt come today because of thier some function.." "good ridance..." "ahem."rashi warned..."dont u think gopi compliments jigar a lot..." "what nonsense..."ahem said. "see..both have same colour, height, softies, thinking, attitude...a perfect couple...i think gopi suits better with jigar than with u" "because i dominate her when she is with me...and she dominates jigar when she is with him..simple" "and among us..." "well i let u dominate among us.."rashi smiled.

"and me and jigar.." "eeew..what happend to u..what a horrible combination...dont even think that in a dream k..." "i was just asking.." "dont even try to ask..."ahem said and left angrily..

"Gopi!!" gopi turned around and gopi and got suprised "shruthi...!!"gopi shouted and both hugged each other. Shruthi was her room mate and college mate when she studied with ahem. "oh my god what a suprise"gopi shouted. "what are u doing here...u know. how house is this do u?"shruthi asked seriously and gopi nodded. "then how come u are here...and what happend to u...no call, no message..u just dissapeared...i mean i know what happend...but gopi..we are friends." "i know yaar..its just i dint want to face anyone again..thats it.." "gopi...i understand..but...what about me nd preethi..we are ur friends." "i know ..sorry" "only be given if u promise to keep it touch again" "i do"gopi smiled. "how come u are here?"gopi asked.

shruthi rolled her eyes "do u believe..this...my finacee.. have a patnership with ahem..." "oh..congratulations.." "thank u..." "i am so happy for u..." "hope i could say the same.." gopi smiled. "can i meet the good lady"jigar said coming to them..."shruthi..meet jigar..ahem's cousin..and this is shruthi..my friend" "Hello" "hai.." "just ahem's cousin..?"jigar questioned and gopi looked at him angrily.. "my best friend too and the main reason i got landed in this house."gopi said and jigar smiled. shruthi looked at them and smiled. "i wil just come now"jigar said and left. "is he only ur best friend?" "shruthi...he is ahem's cousin.." "so what...look at this party...its his engagment party...do u see any remorse or guilt on his face..nothing...then why should u destroy ur life..?"

"u speak like jigar exactly" "smart people always do the same.."gopi smiled. "Hellloo...pleasent suprise..."ahem said coming to them and gopi rolled her eyes and left immediately. "congrats ahem" "thanks...are u still friends...?"ahem asked.. "why...want to destroy our relation too as u destroyed her life.."shruthi said angrily. "i was just asking..okay...curiousity...chill" "its everything a joke for u ahem..isnt it..after all u did.." "she deserved that...who asked her to turn against me...u too were study in the same college..did i ever trouble u...then why did she came in my way." "so...does it became such a mistake that u destroyed her entire life to pieces.." "it was a college prank k...guys u are making it a world economic pbm.."

"A college prank...seriously ahem do u really think that ur prank stopped with the college.." "what do u mean?"ahem asked seriously. "ur little prank destroyed everything in her life..u have left the college proving her characterless, and greedy..but do u ever thought what result she would have faced." "talk clearly shruthi!!" "after u left..do u know what value she got in our college...a wh**e...yes..thats how all the boys started to see her..not even one day would have passed...without some one taunting her about u and her or passing a comment as whos next in her life...and somebody even went to the limit of asking her to go out with them." Ahem eyes became wide with suprise. "Do u know how many days she cried unable to bear the torture..how many times she shouted that she dint do anything."

"because of ur little prank mr.modi...everyone starts to take her as thier property...and...even one day..someone..tried to cross their limits too." ahem clenched his hand in anger. "because of ur prank..mr.modi the girl who roamed aroound the college with pride..got in a situation who couldnt even lift her face up. and do u know when we tried to complain about the behaviour what we got...the whole society blammed her...saying that the girl who tried to trap a rich family lad can do anything else too.no one believed her, no one supported her...i have to confess even we wouldnt too but thankfully we saw the decoration on the terrace when it was being taken out at the last moment...and we got to know the story..though couldnt get the evidence to prove ur act.

because of u..she got landed in a position who couldnt show her face in the college or society. She left the college unable to bear the torture and started to do private course...and it was then we last saw of her...after that she kept no contact with anyone...because of ur simple little prank mr.modi..her career got destroyed, her life got destroyed, her name got destroyed. How the hell do u think that someone would accept a girl who have such a bad name in the society. Today u are standing here happily getting engaged and she..though being innocent have to roam around avoiding everyones eyes, trying to be dissaper in the thin air..so tell me ahem...who made a college prank...to a world economic pbm...But one thing i wil definetly say ahem...god wil never forgive u..for snatching his true devotee from him." and shruthi left leaving ahem in deep thinking.

"Hello...Hello...whos here" ajay sneeered and gopi took a step back. She cursed herself for not thinking not to expect him here, after all he is ahem's best friend. "miss.gopi rajvansh...what a plesant suprise to see u again...long time..no see...and am i seeing this right..u are in ahem modis engagment party...wow..i must say...u are really brave...or to say shameless" "everyone cant have ur traits ajay...excuse me" "arrey wait yaar..where the hurry or are u afraid that ahem might spot us, dont worry he is busy with his own engagement...he wont mind " "let me go" "why...did u sign urself for mr.modi now...dont worry..though not like ahem..we are handsome too and a bit rich...people like u shouldnt be choosy dear...after today..only anitha would have

rightts on him...so consider today as ur offical gate exit from modi mansion...so its better to choose fast..otherwise...what wil happen when this pretty face of urs...get wrinkled and starts ageing...u have to utilize the opportunity when u got it." "U are sick!!" gopi said and turned to leave but ajay caught her hand and pulled her towards him. gopi started to struggle "my my.,,even though so much happend..still not an inch of attitude is left from u..and in a way i like it...its so inviting.." "Leave me.." "why...do u prefer only richer man than ahem...or..are their any costs to pay first." ajay laughed and he felt a hand placed over his shoulder..and turned to see that its none other than mr.ahem modi..

"Hetal..u know what kind of name this girl have in the society" ahem remembered his mom words...even after so many years..the talk was still on..."u deserved that" jigar words when he slapped him..."ur little prank destroyed her life..."shruthi words..."did a tiny slap value is more than my life ahem..."gopi words...all were vibrating in his head. Suddenly he heard her voice and saw that unkownignly he came out to the garden and saw gopi..who was looking troubled...and then saw ajay..who was laughing...and he dint need to wait to see what was happening their...

"Leave her..!"ahem ordered. "Ahem..i was just joking/" "i said..leave her..."ahem ordered again stressing each word anger radiationg from his face. Ajay left her hand immediately. "cool buddy...i was just kidding...its not like she is ur own private property...give us a chance too" And the next second he was face to face with ahem, his shirt in his hand grasp "Whatever ahem modi does...he never disrespect a girl... i dont want u to repeat this mistake ever again...when i say never...it should be never...understand.." "yes" ahem left his shirt and ajay scrambled out.

Ahem looked at gopi who was watchign her hand. He went to her and took her hand and exaimend it...it was just red with the pressure. Gopi kept looking at him calcualting...ahem looked at her "they wont trouble u again"he said and throwed her hand down. Gopi looked at him suprised. "I would have helped anyone who were in ur place...i saved u because its my duty as a human being...dont consider that i have a soft corner for u...nor..i love u..." Gopi looked at him tilting her head "i never said u love me..."gopi said and left leaving ahem in anger and was about to say something when his phone rang...

"The time is getting on..bring the boy and girl" pandit anounced. Everyone were exciting.. "want a kerchief!!"jigar asked gopi and gopi looked at him and laughed "keep some.."she played back, jigar laughed... "where is anitha...?"rashi muttered. "maybe ran away..."gopi said "wise decision"jigar muttered.."shut up"rashi said angrily and jigar and gopi giglled. "ha..theirs ahem..."rashi shouted and went to him. "come on...the time is up.." Ahem nodded and looked at everyone. He took a sigh and moved forward and went straight at jigar and gopi. Both looked at him confused "Ahem...seriously u can taunt me later..go"gopi whisphered.

Ahem caught her hand and dragged her with him leavng jigar and rashi shocked. "Ahem!!"gopi hissed. "what are u doing?"jigar shouted. "ahem whats this"rashi tried to stop..but no avail...he simply kept gopi close to him and dragged her with him to the main hall. The hall stopped whisphering the moment they saw gopi and ahem. All the elders stood rooted to their spots...in shock.."ahem let me go please..." but he dint listen and took her to the centre of the hall and released her. "start the cermony"ahem said and the whisphering broke again. All the elders stood stunned unable to do anything. SOme said that they might changed the bride due to some conflicts.

Some said its a love marriage..some said..some trouble at the last min...but all stood looking like a dummies watching the scene. gopi was trembling from head to toe unable to do or think what was happening and rashi caught jigar hand stopping him silently watching the drama. "ahem"gopi hissed but he dint even heed her. He took out the ring and the pandit said that it the right time and ahem slid the ring on her finger and placed his ring on her hands. she looked at him shocked and ahem singalled her to do it...and when gopi dint respond..he silently made her slid the ring on his finger...Their was a disturbed applause...in the room..and the elders bent their head in shame.

"i am sorry...but due to some personal pbms this party is over now"ahem anouced and slowly everyone went out getting a new gossip in town.

Ahem's engagement day...Time...5 o clock...Modi halll...

"AHEM!!!...what did u do" kokila shouted. All were stunned and shocked. Everyone looked at jigar and ahem. jigar was too shocked to say anything...and gopi was too lost to say anything looking at the large diamond engagement ring on her hand which was actually belonged to anitha until 5 min back.

"i did it to save our family honour" "what nonsense is this...what wil we say to anitha...what will umang say to us...and how can u marry gopi..she is going to be ur brothers wife...did u even think about that."kokila shouted. "their no need to give anitha or umang any explanations...because...it was because of them i did this"ahem said in a broken voice and gopi looked at him suprised.

"ahem what are u saying..?"parag shouted."Umang called me...and said that this marriage is off...and he is breaking with kinjal too"ahem said in a chocked voice and the blow hit the modi family. Kinjal couldnt believe what she heard and rashi went and supported her. It took some time for the family to clear out..and kokila whisphered "what...how..but why...ahem what happend between u and anitha...why did umang did this..and what all this..."

"i did this to save our family honour, to stop everyone talking about a failed engagment party...a changed bride is better than a no bride gossip" "this..this is how u save our family name..instead of clearing the misunderstanding u have directly created a more scene...what do u think of everyone...is this a doll party to change the brides whenver u want...its ridiculous to expect somethng from u...i wil talk to umang right now...i wil clear the misunderstandings"parag said.

"They wont come"ahem shouted... "they wont...because...umang clearly told me that he dont want to get involved with a family which is going down..nor want to involve his sister either...the marriage is over."ahem chocked and the tension filled the house. "going down...whats the meaning of that!!"chirag asked and ahem bent his head down and replied in a more than whispher "the project in which we invested so much money is failed...all our creditors...left us..our shares have fallen...and..."ahem said in a broken voice and lifted his head, eyes red with tears..

"in short to say...we are bankrupted...!!"

so what wil modis do...

what change wil bring in to ahem life now..

will gopi belongs to jigar or ahem now...

what is kinjal future...

how wil rashi be effected...

and of all...Will Ahem Modi..see the reality Now...

COme back on Wednesday Again...to get a final 3rd shock...

Let me know if someone want the pm...

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kavya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#554

oh god shaina brilliant dear...
i don know how u write such amazing stories...really awesome dear
twists after twists👏 well done dear...loved the update
so the family knows that gopi is in love with someone and what will koki do how will she react if she comes to know it was ahem...and what all ahem had did to gopi??
so gopi gets to know more about ahem from kinjal
and ahem got to know who gopi was treated for what he did
and so now what is the real reason for ahem to get engaged to gopi??is bankruptcy the real reason??and or he did it coz he loved gopi...
omg shaina u leave us hanging like this everytime...i can not take it anymore...
cant wait to read the next update

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-Eris-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#555

Wow wow wow!! Thank god gopi is engaged to ahem and not jigar.did i see hints of raji relation in the past or i am reading way too much.i actually loved this shock hopefully third s shock will make me happier.i would love to slap ahem by the way breaking gopi s clip hate him i hope somehow he gets kicked in his stomach. Pl pl pl next update make gopi punch him

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Posted: 13 years ago

#556

Res...

Thanks...well u know i am reading all the part i have missed...i mean i have read 5 update in a row...

Haha...now i am reading part 14...thanks so much Shaina. I will leave my comment soon...

Thanks sweetheart...

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Uh Oh...so much happened in the updates. U proved me that Ahem is not bad at all, Raji also have feeling for each other, Koki is exactly the same as in SNS...I can see kinjal future is Dhawal...lol..i hope i am not wrong.

But bankrupt? I was super shocked the moment i read it. I always want to see it happen in SNS...haha...But u got me by surprise.

Shaina dear, i will definitely read ur next update on Wednesday. I promised...

Thanks so much darling for bearing me...

Love you,
Monyka

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Justlikethat1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#557

A wonderful update... Time Ahem comes down from his high and mighty chair and face the reality clearly.. Modi's are bankrupt.. Hmm.. Interesting...Will wait for the next update..

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AngelicDesires

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Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#558

Wow!! Amazing Update Shaina...

U give very good shocks... lol

Cant wait fr d next update!!

Continue soon!!

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sathya.s

@sathya.s

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#559

Shaina, I was eagerly waiting for your update...Modi Hall 5 o'clock. This update was amazing. I was thinking about several possibilities for Ahem's action to put on the engagement ring on Gopi's finger. But I never thought about this reason. You surprised me, thank you. But at the same time I am really angry with Ahem. He is such an egoist. He played with Gopi's life during his college days and now again for his family's reputation. Arrrgh. But I have to admit, this twist is superb. Waiting to read your next update. Please PM me. Thank you.