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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vibz88

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great update!! I ve no words today coz jigar has come back.the rest fades .i read it twice but the oly thing i remember is jigar. Oki how will he fall in love with rashi. They ve always known each other so will gopi s presence change his feelings for rashi?i hope u show ahem n rashi s relation throw jigar s point of view.i hope next update is full of jigar jigar jigar.

ha ha ha ...oh yeah i forgot u are a jigar fan right..

well its quite intresting when and how they wil fall in love..

well the story is really confusing right now..and until ahems engagement it wil be confusing for sure.

so just have patience..everythng wil sort out soon.

do u mean seeing ahem and rashi jigar should feel jealous ?

anyway the raji story is yet to be decided totally..so right now..it wil be about kinjal and the clash of gopi and rashi..

well the next update is really confusing one...i am positive abut that...😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sks21

shaina dear fantastic update...loved it
oh y is ahem keeping secret from rashi...rashi is kinda feeling ignored
and hope urmi's words dont get to her
and finally jigar has come oh it will be awesome now
this jigar is so different from sns jigar...really excited now
and also loved jigar's entry

thanks kavya...

definelty...well i think u guessed the story direction'

thats why i mentioned urmi dialouges clearly

once read those again and u wil know what going to come ahead.

ha ha i agree jigar entry wil change the story totally.

but the thing is it would be confusing right now..so bear with me.

agreed this jigar wil be definetly different from sns totally.

thanks and yeah jigar entery should have a big dhamaka as he wil bring dhamakas in the story.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthi2010

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what a pace! what an update!
saina it was brilliant. each turn and twist is perfect
my heart was going dak dak as if i was reading a thriller.
when i got to the part of jigar, the sweet jigar slipped into the role of bond james bond villian.
so will jigar fall for gopi?
so interesting..

ha ha thanks shruthi...but i am dreading that the next update would be boring compared to now.

ha ha save ur heart dear becauase u have to lose it over ahem modi in the future.

well...jigar is a really peculiar character. he can be a hero and can be a villan in fraction of seconds..

the main thing is his reaction depends on the persons.

hmm thats a tough question wil jigar fall for gopi or vice versa😉

dint decide yet..

i hope it continues to be intresting.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: uamaz

Fantastic update... jigar modi in black hai 😍

Thanks dear...ha ha for the first time i ssee everyone went ga ga over jigar suprising.


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Wow...Jigar's entry is superb...very well written, darling. Sorry less comment today since i'm so excited with Jigar. Hate Ahem but love Jigar...hehe

thanks dear...wow ..am i hearing right..u are loviing jigar and hating ahem..

see i told u..u would hate ahem and i wil make it possible.


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nyc art..i want d story to move a bit faster


oh k thanks tina..i wil try to do it fast a bit..


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: CHIKA784

Shaina,that was a fantastic update!😃

Your excellent,i forgot it was FridayFriday gotta get down on Friday 😆
Yayy i hope Jigar and Gopi become really good friends and Ahem gets jealous,that would be awesome😉

oh yeah chika..finally ur jigar came.

ha ha i know u are too busy..

well dont worry ur wish wont go wasted for sure.😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hai guys...so i see all u got so excited with jigar entry..thats fab and totally wonderful and unexpected..thanks a lot..

Part-9:


"My moms beloved son, the perfect son of the modi family, the grand icon symbol, the one and only Jigar Modi...

and Jigar steps in the modi mansion...

"Jai shri krishna kaki..maa" Jigar said joining his hands and giving a tiny courteous smile. Hetal took his face in her hands and tears brimmed in her eyes looking at him "5 years...dont u ever remember me jigar...our family...what did i do that u gave me such a cruel punishment beta!!" Hetal cried and Jigar moved his eyes slightly towards Rashi..and Rashi looked down immediately. Jigar took her hands into his "Nothing like that Maa..one have to look after bussiness right..I was busy"

Hetal nodded understanding. "U have to proud of jigar Hetal, at such early age..see how much he flourished our bussiness, Unlike some people who have no goal in the life and take everything granted " Gopi saw that koki moved her eyes towards ahem and for the first time she observed that Ahem was not at all happy to see his cousin after 5 years infact he was glaring at him..

Jigar looked at ahem and the most suprising is neither jigar is happy to see ahem...it felt like both brothers wanted to be anywhere else except being together in a single room. Ahem slowly started coming down the stairs and Gopi came down along with him. She moved towards kinjal and Ahem moved towards rashi. "Kaki!!!!!"Jigar smiled for the first time after entering the home and hugged her, the act which gopi observed Ahem never did with his parents at any ocassion.

Koki fondly ran her hand over jigar head and smiled and patted his cheek. "Bless u, Jigar i am really proud of u. "koki said and gopi eyes automatically moved towards Ahem. She saw that even rashi was looking at him concerned and it was then gopi realized what she was missing in ahem words previously about jigar.Ahem not only dint like Jigar, he hated jigar. It was so clear in his eyes.

Ahem was not even aware of anything or anyone. His eyes were fixed only on his cousin. "jigar beta...what a suprise.."Parag boomed and hugged him and chirag too was really pleased with Jigar. "Kaka..how are u, and by the way kaka the malhotras deal is finalized, we can see the foregin bussiness from here now."Jigar said and parag looked at him proudly. "Thats my boy...i knew u would come around again, u just needed some change from here."

Again the both brothers glanced but not in a affectionate way..but almost mocking and challenging each other. Parag turned towards chirag and spoke"u are really lucky to have a son like jigar chirag, Not everyone have such luck with their children" Gopi looked immediately at ahem and saw that everyone were glancing at him, but ahem was not even slightly bothered, he seemed almost careless with the comment.

The only persons who felt bad with the comment were hetal, chirag and rashi. The rest were all seemed normal as its a daily matter of fact. "Bhaiya..Ahem is a hard working person too, he just needs some motivation" chirag sided. "dont give excuses to me Chirag, look at him, his little brother have established a empire in the foregin and returned back and he being the elder son of this family is not even ready to go to office. Who motivated us, who motivated Jigar, one should find the intrest itself. If he reallly cared this family then he would have done something like Jigar by now." And it was in that fraction of second gopi saw the pain in Ahem's face. It came and went as a lighting if only she was not observing him from the start. Gopi saw how did the others took it, rashi was hurt no need to say. kinjal was sad, Hetal and chirag..they dint like the words too..but the shock

was koki...gopi saw that their was not a trace of hurt in her face, she seemed as if she accepted the truth. Finally gopi saw jigar reaction, and got suprised..Jigar face was blank...just blank. "Dad..i think u are getting late for office" Ahem said in a cool carless tone and giving a final glare at his son and shaking his head parag and chirag went away. "Maa, i think i should go too with kaka..i wil see the status of the office" Gopi saw others reaction immediately. Ahem rolled his eyes, Rashi brightned her smile, and Kinjal left out a sigh. "No way..u came after 5 years..so i am not letting u go out for full 2 days, thats ur punishment" Hetal said but for gopi it felt it was the punishment given to ahem, rashi and kinjal and fought back a smile seeing their horrified faces. "But maa!!" Jigar started but koki cut in.."Hetal is right Jigar, start fresh after diwali..k" "Ji kaki"Jigar said and Gopi

made a mental note..if ahem listened to hetal and chirag, Jigr listened to koki and Parag..

Finally Jigar found the time to look at his cousins now and moved towards them. gopi saw that both the brothers dint look away from each other infact were staring at one another like calculating the other person. "Bhai" "jiagar" "Jai shri krishna bhai" "Jai krishna jigar" "How are u?" "Fine..How are u?" "Fine" Over...that was the conversation they had like having a mourning over a dead body and silence. Their was no hugging, no smiles, no i miss u nothing..Thier was silence..only silence in their relation. Jigar moved towards Kinjal and Kinjal moved her head away. "I am sorry for not coming to ur engagement Kinjal. I heard that umang is a nice guy..congratulations" "Dont talk to me bhai..i am really mad at u.." "oh shit...now what i wil do with all those make up stuff which i brought for my sister"Jigar said and Kinjal eyes lit up immediately. "Really"Kinjal jumped forward

and gopi noticed that all smiled..except ahem...he was angry now.. "Of course..i told u..i wil make for my mistake..actually one should not never leave any mistakes unattended and" "yeah yeah...thanks bhai"kinjal hugged Jigar fastly and went away eager to escape his lecture. Ahem and Rashi were fighting hard not to laugh. Jigar turned towards Rashi and smiled "Rashi..fetch me some water please..to my room" Jigar smiled and went away and Rashi opened her mouth to answer but stopped and looked at koki and left to the kitchen. And for the first time gopi saw..Ahem was smirking exactly like jigar when he was going upstairs. Even Hetal had the same smile too. "Ahem arent u going to office"Koki asked "I have work at home" Ahem said and looked at gopi. Gopi got the hint and followed him and Koki looked at them suspiciously.

"Hetal i think i told u something on kinjal engagment day" Hetal looked confused and seeing koki looking at gopi retreating form she understood "Kokila..i understand that u dont trust people so easily...but kokila ..gopi is a really nice girl, just keep ur ego aside for once and look at her properly...and anyway...gopi is my guest in this house..and sorry but i wil tell her when she needs to go." Hetal said and left leaving koki fuming.

"so..hows jigar..?" ahem asked and gopi looked at him and looked away. "k..so u are still serious at me..i get it..but if we wont talk then how wil we solve kinjals pbm" "we can ahem...and by the way..were are we going..we crossed ur room already" "To the great entertainment show!!"ahem smiled and gopi noticed it was those smile he have whenever he was about to play a joke on someone.



Ahem caught gopis hand suddenly and asked her to stop and to stay silent. Gopi saw that they are near Jigar room now and rashi went inside with a glass of water. Ahem signalled her to follow her silently. "water" rashi said extending the glass to jigar. Jigar smiled at her. Kinjal hurridly came into the room, and ahem slightly pushed gopi inside and locked the door. "Ahem what are u.."gopi started but both the brother and sister hushed her. the moment the door was closed..rashi did a total u turn. SHe slammed the glass on the ground and shouted at the top of her voice "How dare u order me to bring a glass of water..what do u think..i am a servant of urs...u u...dumbo" Jigar sprang up immediately dominating rashi with his height and rashi took a step back "Hello madam..i dont have any intrest in drinking the water which u brought for ur information...infact i was doing a favour to u"

"Really...can i know what.." "Alteast u would do some excersise from the kitchen to my room, i bet u would have been sleeping like a buffalo everyday .." "Me...Buffalo.." "Yes look at urself moti.." No need to say Rashi was fuming fire from mouth and ears "U U...if i am a buffalo then u are a a...godzilaa" kinjal coughed the juice she was drinking and it was then gopi realized both the sister and brother were watching the live entertainment..kinjal sipping juice and ahem gobbling chips at super fast speed. "If i am a godzila then u are a annoconda" "What...then u are a a jackass" "joker" "zombie" "mummy" "bansheee" "donkey" "monkey' "idiot" "stupid" Gopi turned towards ahem "Ahem stop them..wont u do anythng.." "what..oh yeah..catch" ahem slammed his chips packet in her hand and shouted "come on rashi come on yes..." "Impossible"gopi shouted and slammed his packet back to his hands.

"Look at urself..what do u think of urself..bond james bond..u are not a bond mister..u are a bander(monkey).." "And what do u think of urself..princess elizabhith" "U boring baffoon" rashi moved forward and gopi immediately caught her back. "Gopi leave me..today no one can save hiim.." "Yeah yeah..weakling.."Jigar mocked "U.."Rashi shouted. "Stop" Ahem shouted nd within seconds all became attentive and Jigar pushed the glass pieces under his bed. Hetal entered the room and looked at Jigar and Rashi. Rashi looked at the ceiling and Jigar fixed his eyes on the wall. "Juice..i thought u would tired" Hetal mocked and went away smiling and immediately jigar and rashi glared at one another and turned agianst their backs. Gopi looked at them confused. "Rashi and Jigar are not on good terms lightly"Kinjal said "Lightly?"gopi questioned "A bit more lightly!"Kinjal murmered.

"Excuse me..according to rule..she started first"Jigar corrected. "Oy..who asked the glass of water" ahem shouted. "It was just a glass of water bhai..cant she work that much" "u cant work that much" Rashi shouted. "God..they wil never stop"kinjal said. "See..i told u..no one wants me here!" Jigar said looking at gopi and no need to say the remaining looked shocked at gopi. "Its not that...i mean..they are u r family jigar" gopi explained trying to avoid ahem glaring eyes. "U knew each other" it was a question thundred by ahem. Gopi bit her lip. "oh yeah..forgot..Gopi and Jigar are best friends like u and rashi bhai.."kinjal spoke making her voice levels slowly high to low pitch. "u lied to us" ahem shouted. "i dint..i just hid the truth"gopi said. "How did u became his friend" rashi asked. "HEtal auntie"gopi said. "wow..my sister is ur friend, my cousin is ur friend, my friend is ur friend did u leave atleast one member from my family"ahem shouted.

"yeah...u"gopi said. "Whats going on here?"Jigar asked. "Its all because of u" rashi shouted. "K stop"gopi shouted. "Ahem, rashi and kinjal..jigar and me know each other from childhood. we are friends..and Jigar is not such a boring person as u think..trust me" "She is mad"ahem said "poor soul"rashi sympathised. "see..i told u"jigar said. "it was 5 years..jigar..hetal auntie was really missing u and i wanted to see u too..cant u come for me" Ahem snapped his eyes at gopi and rashi looked at him and fought back a smile. "see thats why i came right...for u..as soon as u called..i wanted to see u too but u said that u were leaving, then how come u are still here..i mean i am not complaining but its different of u to do something and say something" Gopi opened her mouth and looked at kinjal who gave her a red signal nd bit her lip "actually..hmm..'gopi started. "acutally u should take rest right now..

what say gopi" "yeah..yes..take rest k..we wil talk later" and slowly and fastly they slipped from the room and gopi saw that the maid servant was waiting with a broom outside and smiled.


"How can u like him?"ahem shouted for the 10th time and gopi ignored him again. "I mean jigar..i understand kinjal..i understand rashi..but jigar!!'" "ahem finall time..Jigar is my friend..and like how rashi is imp to u..jigar is imp to me too k" "U are out of ur mind" ahem sympathised and gopi felt like strangling him. "er bhai..gopi..if can fight over jigar bhai later..can we concentrate on me now' "see he always pollutes eveything.."ahem pointed "why do u hate him so much" "why do u like him so much" "Bhai...he is calling he is calling" kinjal shouted and Gohem ran to her and ahem snatched the cell phone and put it in a speaker and told kinjal to talk. "Heeello"kinjal said stammering. "Hi dear..missed me"a voice said and gopi and ahem looked at each other. "please abhay..i am engaged.." "But not married yet..how can u do this to me kinjal...how can u love somebody else." "i dont love u."

"u are lieing..and dont worry..u dont have to lie more...once i proved everyoe that u love me..then no one wil stop us" "what do u mean?" "The photos remember...we had in college..those are enough kinjal to prove that u know me..to prove that u loved me.." "what nonsense are u talking what photos" "The photos whenever we went out with our friends..oh forgot..ur not supposed to go out with boys sorry i forgot that fact." Kinjal was not in a state to utter more words and ahem snatched the phone from her hand "what do u want?"ahem demanded before gopi could stop him. "who are u?" "i am elder brother of kinjal..and this is a final warning to u...leave my sister alone..otherwise..u would never dream what i wil do to u" "U cant do anything mr.ahem modi..yeah that u right..i know everythig about ur family. If any one of the proof is out..then ur family repuation wil come crashing down

and i know very well how much u care for ur family repuatation"the man laughed and ahem looked at kinjal and gopi. "How much?"ahem sprang to the point and gopi looked at him shocked. Their was a brief silence and abhay spoke "how much wil u give?" "u say first' "5 lakhs" "deal" another silence. "if this is a trap modi..then u wil feel really sorry" "i dont have time to play with persons like u, when and where" "i tell u again" and the line went out. "are u mad!" gopi shouted. "then what else can i say to him..he have proof" "its a fake proof, we can say our point" "no one is going to listen to ur points..everyone needs a gossip to chat on and its all they care about." "But ahem" "i know what is correct and what is wrong for my sister so u stay away"ahem shouted and gopi became silent fumming with anger.

"U lied to me.."rashi shouted and all the three turned towards her. "i asked u yersterday..and u lied to me..again ahem" "Rashi i can explain" "what more can u explain...what more lies can u come up now..say ahem...i knew it.i knew something was going on..but u ...u hided from me again..what happend to the promise ahem, what happend to all those sorries..what happend to u?" "rashi listen..its not like what u are thinking..its more serious.!" gopi said.. "u stay out of this gopi..dont interference btwn me and ahem"rashi said and gopi was taken aback. Kinjal looked shocked and ahem looked from rashi to gopi. "i trusted u, i thought u are my friend..and what did u do..only lies, u lied to us about jigar, u lied about ahem yesterday...u knew everything gopi and not even once u tried to mention it why." "Rashi cool down..i told not to let anyone know." ahem said "and she obeyed u this time..

why this time ahem..out of all the persons she obeyed u...i am not such a dumb idiot" "Rashi listen to me" "what their to listen more ahem..u said everything yesterday..that its between u and gopi..and i am the third person.." "rashi listen to me first" "U changed ahem..u are not the same anymore"rashi ran away fighting tears back and ahem ran after her. Kinjal touched gopis shoulder and gopi cleared the tears which were trying to escape.


"rashi listen to me...its not what u think..first listen and then decide.." "what more to listen...go to ur gopi and u two decide who i am?" "Kinjal is in pbm!"ahem shouted and rashi stopped. "what nonsense" rashi said and ahem started explaining to her. "omg...ahem what wil we do now" "not we..i wil do..u are staying out of this" "But ahem" "No rashi..this can turn to a dangerous game..the man i talked to..he seems really serious..the faster we get rid of him..the better for us. and u are not going to get involved again" "and gopi can right" "i dont care for her, but i do for u" "and why is she involved in the first place" "Kinjal trusts her, so do I"Rashi looked at him shocked. "I know we have a past but rashi i know that gopi is not a type of person who wil leave when some one needed her. She does a true friendship and i really accept that she is a real good friend when needed." "More than me..!'rashi questioned

"No one can take ur place rashi...not gopi,not anitha..no one can and will..trust me" "I used to trust u ahem...but sorry to say..i doubt this now"



"So is everything clear.."ahem said. "Ahem do u really think we should go with this plan?"gopi asked. "if u have a better one..i am all ears"ahem said. "whats wrong with this plan gopi'rashi asked. "I am not saying its not good but rashi their are so many loopholes. I think we should intimate koki auntie or atleast hetal aunite" "Whatever hetal mami knows badi mami wil definetly know it..this is not a small issue gopi"rashi said,. "why are u still mad at gopi...ahem cleared everything yesterday for u." "i am not mad" "u are!!"kinjal said. "K yes i am mad..gopi alteast u should have intimated me...i could have kept a secret" "u?"ahem questioned. "why only gopi can keep secrets!!"rashi spoke. "Rashi..i am sorry..i know u are hurt and i agree..i should have told u"gopi said and ahem raised a eyebrow at her. "dont say sorry gopi..its ahem bhais fault" "why are u blaming ahem?"rashi questioned kinjal. "why are u blaming gopi?"kinjal questioned back.

"K stop"ahem shouted "Kinjal stay out of this, ur pbm are enough for u. Gopi we are going with this plan, and rashi..u can do ur why is gopi more liked by others than me analysis afterwards. i only agreed to let u discuss this matter to cool u but u are not getting involved understand" gopi looked at rashi and rashi looked at ahem and pouted. "so now for the call to come" and the call came immediately. "Yup say.."ahem said. "Tomorrow night at the old fort, at 10 but on one condition...kinjal should come to give me money." All faced each other shocked. "Thats impossible!!"ahem said. "Its not ur choice mr.modi.its mine"and the line went dead. and everyone turned towards kinjal who was shaking like a leaf. "we dont have any choice"ahem said. "u got to be kidding ahem"gopi said. "no way..its too dangerous.."rashi said.

"Are u people out of ur mind..."Jigar shouted and everyone lost their color from thier face.

"dooomed"rashi whisphered. "No...we are dead"ahem corrected.


I know this part is totally confusing right now..but give me some time..i wil clear it out...

so how wil jigar react now..

will he help ahem or the brother rivalry will come in between.

will rashi overcome her insecurity or wil their be a another test for gopi

and of all how wil kinjal be saved and wil they succeed withouth the elders help...

stay tuned...

Part 10 - Page 54

Edited by shaina.sharma - 13 years ago
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Oh wow i love jigar. Hmmm when ahem was getting insulted by koki and parag i actually liked it!! Serves him right.your gopi is wonder woman she has charmed half of mm. Now she is best friends with jigar. Ahem is gonna fume with jealousy.wat about rashi?pl dont make rashi jealous of gopi.rashi can ve gopi s best friend and gopi can ve rashi s then they wont fight.i hope jigar helps with kinjal s problem. I loved the rashi jigar fights. Want more of it! Great update!!
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Really good. Can't wait for more.
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Posted: 13 years ago

loved it... loved it... loved it...

fab update shaina..👏👏👏...
finally jigar arrived...yay... now time for more action...
wats cooking btw jigar n rashi😈...
koki n parag love jigar more than ahem.. is this a reason for ahem turning into a heartless guy...
they seemed to be more worried about their prestige😕😕😕... more than their son..even jigar seems to be more involved in work... getting ready to go to office even after meeting his family after 5 years... or is he trying to avoid ahem,rashi😉😉😉...
aww i loved raji's fight...want more of raji...
😲😲😲gopi knew jigar ???? tat was a shock to magi😆...good to know tat gopi n jigar are friends.. and so sweet of jigar he came to india for gopi...he he even ahem is jealous of tat😉...
now coming to kinjal's prob... ahem is seriously a dumbo,idiot...
he's making the prob bigger...ok now even rashi knew it...now thr is goin to be more and more complications... so rashi is thinking tat ahem is trusting gopi more than her...
the last bit was fabulous... jigar knew it...now cant wait for the next update... am getting eager...
once again the overall update was fabulous... sweet(gopi-jigar friendship)confusing(raji relationship),nocomments(gohem reationship)..
waiting fot the next update...
n hey i have commented on the previous update too(sorry for commenting so late on tat)..
n wish u a very very happy new year dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
shaina dear another brilliant update...loved it
oh nice twists shaina gopi and jigar new each other didn see that coming...so i guess ahem will be jealous of her closeness with jigar...and confused about rashi's and jigar's relationship so will wait for ur updates to clear my confusion...
feel bad for ahem how his parents treat him and prefer jigar over him...
so that rashi knows about the secret and she's mad more with gopi guess her mother words got to her...and omg jigar heard everything??
what will he do??will he help them??
again wonderful update shaina
Edited by sks21 - 13 years ago

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