SS : Ahem Modi's Solution

I'm new to this forum and i totally dont know Hindi. It was an accident that i started seeing Saathiya when i was preparing for my ca Final exams and i'm totally captivated by the story. I've also read all the ff, ss and os and was inspired by them to write one on my own. Hope all of u do not mind and give me your comments and suggesstions please... This is my first Story writing and please forgive me if there are any faults... I'm starting the story from Rashi being exposed and what would be next for everyone of MM

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Chapter -1

Its been a long night ...

Yes!!!! It is for all the people in MM. It is like the angel of night forgot to cover the members of MM under her tender wings. Each one of them are whiriling in their own thoughts and trying ways to ease their pain.

Sleep seems to be a distant dream...😲

MM had seen a hurricane today. Jigar Modi's life and so the life and light of Modi Bhavan was turned topsy turvey with the revelations made by his best friend and the bride of his dreams Sonal.

Jigar was trying his best to put up an act that all was fine between him and Rashi from the moment he knew the truth. He even decided against reveling the truth to the family to save a break down for his mother and all the others. But fate was other way round.

He was mad at her for cheating him and playing with his emotions but somewhere in a corner of his heart he hoped that Rashi might love him. Though she came in for money she might have changed. But even then a voice at the back of his head kept warning him not to keep his hopes high and that he would be disappointed.

Today, he had accepted the fact that there was no love, the women whom he thought was his everything, whom he truely loved and cherished was nothing but a foul fox filled with greed and pride. Shame on him to fall for such a cheap women. He thought about his Gopi Bhabhi... What shd she be feeling now??? She was as cheated as he was in this marriage fiasco. If not for the greed of those two women she might have had a genunie and loving husband who she deserved not someone like the hot headed Ahem Bhai...

Jigar turned in his bed and saw the other side empty. He could not bear it any longer. He just walked out of the house with his car keys to get away from the pain, humiliation and disappointment and anger for being fooled.

Just as Jigar was descending the steps his mother Hetal was as disturbed and hurt as her son. She too trusted that girl implictly. How many times had she fumed at Kokila for scolding her??? Finally it seems only she was correct about Rashi... Thinking about the events of the evening only gave her more pain. But those thoughts could not be stopped as it invaded her like plauge

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Hetal saw Kokila restless. She was worried because Rashi and Gopi was no where to be found. She was literally fuming saying how could her Gopi Vahu, go out without telling her. Hetal assured her that they have gone only for shopping and that she overheard Rashi telling Gopi that let it be a surprise. Kokila still seemed unsurre. Kokila was now more worried because her Gopi could be at harm by Rashi. SHe was pacing up and down. Seeing her Hetal was little concerned for Gopi thinking what a rough time Gopi might have when she returns back...

The door bell rang and Koki openened it. Chirag and Jigar walked in. They greeted each other and Koki's eyes were searching for her dikara. Jigar promptly replied " Kaki, Ahem Bhai is on his way from the meeting". Kokila seemed to notice that her Jigar was not the same. She was so sure that it had something to do with that Rashi as her behavoiour was also so odd. she let it go. Now her prime concern was her Gopi Vahu's safe return.

Chirag asked about Gopi and Rashi and Hetal replied that they are out. At the mention of Rashi's name Jigar's face hardened. He seemed to be irrirated. Hetal was surprised. jiagr was never the one who threw tantrums. He was always happy and tookl things the way as it came and gave happiness to everyone. It was so uncustommary of him to behave like this. And that too with Rashi... Jiagar adored Rashi and was so concerned about her unlike Ahem. He was a considerate person and sometimes Hetal saw Gopi in Jigar. Anyone would believe that they were siblings. But what has happened to him now. She knew his assurances were nothing but a big fat lie... A mother knows her Children even more than they knew themselves.

Just then the door bell rang again and Kokila hurried to open the door and there, a shock awaited her.

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This is my first attempt at a ss. Please give me your sincere reviews and comments...

(P.S : Sorry for no Gohem moments but i promise to fill other chapters with Gohem to make good the loss for this Chapter😉😉😊)

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hey went through your story it is really good the way you have started at this oint of time where SNS will have a major twist in coming week... to keep up the curiosity please do update ASAP... because it is really good...

sorry for reserving the place for commenting...

u have intrigued me back to writing short storys again

thank you for that

continue soon

I'm really excited... Sure shall post the other parts soon... Thank u so much for ur support and wonderful comments...

Very nice ss loved it

Can't wait to read the next part~!

will be waiting for the update.

Here i start the 2nd Chapter...

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Chapter - 2 :-

Kokila opened the door and was shocked !!!!!

She could not believe her eyes... She felt like she was in heaven at the moment... She saw her Gopi Vahu behind her Ahem... She was more than relieved to see her safe and that too with Ahem. As happiness and relief swept by she felt anger now... Had it been any other day, she woulkd have given them a billion dollar smile but today she could only glare at her Gopi Vahu...

Gopi was trembling like a leaf. Ahem saw this excahange and shook his head.. Ahem and Gopi openend their mouths to wish Kokila at the same time.. " Jai Sree Krishna Mom!!!" "Jai Sree Krishna Maji!!!" It even shocked them ... How pleasent their voices sounded togather... His deep male voice and her beautiful chimming one.. Ahem looked at Gopi, her beautiful eyes as it looked at him... The same eyes that disturbed him day in and day out, Those eyes flickered at him and he saw that it was filled in with fear and apprehension... Ahem had a hard time controlling his emotions... He shook his head and turned to his mom when he heard his mom wish them.

Kokila wished them and spoke to Gopi " Where were you Gopi??? What took you so long and why are u standing thre like a doll??? Come in..."

Gopi came inside trembling uncontrollably... On one side she was scared thinking what would have happened to her if not for her Ahemji to find her at that place and one side she was thinking where was her Rashi Ben??? As though her maji read her mind she asked her " Where is Rashi Gopi Vahu?? And why are you with Ahem and not your Rashi ben??" Gopi was still undecided and just gupled down looking at her maji...

Surprisingly, it was Ahem who answered. Ahem said " Mom, she is so scared to answer anything and was about to faint when i saw her" Everyone looked concered at Gopi.. Ahem's jaw twitched at the memory. He could not stop cursing Rashi.. What a girl is she?? He knew that his sister in law was useless but he never thought that she was this careless and that too with her own sister. If not for him then what would have happened to her??? OMG!!!! he could not even imagine his Gopi... He was startled out of his thoghts by his mom " Ahem dikra... WHat happened?? Where did u see her??""

He saw Gopi again and thought back " He was on his way home from the meeting and was driving back home thinking what he always thinks now GOPI GOPI G.O.P.I... He was smiling at the memory of her innocent, child like face this moring when he asked her to take a file for him from his coffee table. He was amused at how much sincerely she was searching for the file which he very well knew was not there... He purposefully made her do that so she would stay longer in the room.. When she said she couldn't find it, he just shrugged his shoulders saying its OK... and then turned left and hoisted it for her to see... Her eyes widened and a shy smile played on her lips as she said "ji " and left the room..

His mom once again called his name bringing him out of his memory.. He jerked and narrated how he saw Gopi all alone and thought she should be with his mom or Rashi.. But when he asked her she said she was out with Rasi eho told her to wait here and went somewhere. And that she was waiting for 2 hrs for her to return.

The look in everyone's face was unfathmable... AHem continued saying he brought her back thinking Rashi would have returned.

Ahem looked at her again...He had not revealed how scared Gopi had looked and how much of a relief that he read in her eyes on seeing him.. He was little disappointed when she did not throw herself on him as this time he would have defnetly comforted her. (lol) These days she had this lost look on her face.. He was so sure that it had something to do with Rashi and that thought made him curl his knuckels... He wanted to keep Gopi away from that girl... He had a feeling that she was upto no good. Else this girl would run at her back crying Rashiben, RAshiben, Rashiben...

Beside him he saw Jigar stiffen suddenly and glare at a distance.. Ahem followed his gaze and saw Rashi... Rashi was glaring steadily at Gopi which was not missed by both Ahem and Jigar...

"There starts another drama " thought Jigar...

FB ends ( For now)

The sound of car keys brought Hetal out of her reverie.. and at a small distance away from her one more soul jerked with a start unable to comprehend what had gone wrong or where she had gone wrong in her prayers to her Khanaji...

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I know its a long flashback... but kindly bear with me...

Please comment and give your suggesstions as well...😊😊😊