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Posted: 13 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: NazmaJ

Really great start to your ff.

It's alwaays good to start with a brilliant GoHem scene!! Can't wait to read more!! - So please continue!



thank you so much...
and i will update soon dear
thanks for the support
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute7

Wow! I like the update. 😛


thanks dear



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shajnaii

its very nice..pls continue sooon



thanks dear i will continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rsk16

wow, its very nice plz keep writing.



thank you so much dear
i will update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: swasthi

That was a great start ... Ahem is very attracted to Gopi ... update soon.


thanks dear...i will update soon
dont worry...be happy
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Posted: 13 years ago
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friends thanks for the support and here i continue...


rashi goes to her room as she was very scared and she is thinking about sonal and jigar ...jigar comes and sees rashi... rashi was playing with her saree... and she was in deep thinking...

jigar: what happened rashi?
rashi comes back her to senses
jigar: are you okay?
rashi: yes mm.. i am fine...

ahem calls jigar, both goes for office... hetal and kokila goes in kitchen for cooking food... gopi goes to her room and thinks about ahem... here ahem is driving and thinking about gopi...{flashback of kiss scene} he smiles and jigar thinks about rashi that why she is behaving like this...

gopi takes out saree from her wardrobe... and she was thinking today she will wear green {ahem's favorite color} ahem n cabin thinks about gopi... her wet hair and the way she close her eyes... ahem picks his cellphone and dials home number... hetal picks up the call...

hetal: hello
ahem: its ahem kaki... can I talk with gopi..
hetal smiles
hetal: yeah sure..
hetal calls gopi and she comes...gopi takes phone...she feels shy
gopi: hello
ahem: hello...
gopi utter a word...
ahem: will you not speak something...
gopi: ji woh { yes emmm}
ahem was just listening gopi silence ...he was smiling...
gopi: ahem ji when you are coming home
ahem: why what happened?
gopi: just like that ...
ahem: okay...

ahem keeps phone and gopi smiles and turns...hetal was smiling gopi comes and hugs hetal...

rashi in tension roaming here and there...she also dials her mums number... urmilla picks up the call..

rashi: mummy i am so sacred what should i do?
urmilla: you gone mad totally ... i told u nothing will going to happen?
rashi: mummy what should i do?
urmilla: rashi if u will behave like this... someone will definitely going to doubt on us... just be calm and polite...try to concentrate on yours and jigar relationship..
rashi: but mummy u know i dont like jigar ji .. every time is just like mosquito around me...
urmilla: dumbo if you have to stay in this house then jigar is only ladder which you have to climb whether you like it or not...

urmilla cuts the phone and she thinks...here gopi was seeing and found diary...she picks up the diary and opens it...he founds Anita and his pic.. the first line she read in his diary was I LOVE YOU ANITA...

that tore gopi heart into pieces... she just keeps the diary inside the draw z a and wipes her tears and thinks to herself...

" i should not think so much about those dreams which cannot be ever fulfilled and i should accept this that i am not enough lucky to have ahem ji love. he is not mine...he always loved Anita not me...he showed sympathy , mercy on me always ... and i am so fool thought that ahem ji loves me"



so friends here i end part-1..hope you all will enjoy


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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
just awesome.plz do not stretch the misunderstanding b/w gohem
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh no! 😭 I hope Aham will tell her about dairy. Nice Update. 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Gr8 Starting.. Plz.. update the next part soon.. :). hope to see some distractions and thn ahem accepting gopi front of everyone with pride.. :D (i actually want to see gopi fighting for ahem tho.. hopefully in ur FF my wish will be fulfilled.. :P)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its very nice ...keep going...

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