OS: Ahem and Gopi Alone at Home. - Page 3

Originally posted by: NazmaJ

😳

An amazing OS!!!!

You have taken the moments from the show and have turned them into something wonderful!!! Your Ahem is simply mindblowing.

If only the CVs had a little of your creativity and romantic outlook we could have us something like this on screen.

Absolutely LOVED it!

Thank you Nazma. I don't know if the CVs will go to this extreme, but yeah something like this would be nice to see on the show.

Originally posted by: queenyuks

Awww...
This was very nicely done Shilpaben. You have given us treat after treat with FL and now this

Oh to see this scene on screen...

But I guess we'll have to wait a while before we see some intamacy

Yuks

Thank you Yuks. I think we've waited long enough, I am ready to see something like this on the show now. Hopefully soon.

Originally posted by: Dasuni

Wow Aham helped Gopi to remove her blouse and saari and thinking many more things about next day... 😉
sis, i really like this os!

Thank you so much Dasuni. Yeah our Ahemji, it seems can't keep his lust in check, at least to himself, as we saw from his smile, so it was inspired by that. Glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: write2meoops

Woww, great OS. I enjoyed reading your version of GoHem story. I must admit that I felt frozen reading Ahem helping Gopi taking off her dupatta and... Your Ahem is absolutely wonderful. Wish we have atleast 10% of this scene in the serial.Looking forward for the next part.

Thank you so much! I will take even 5% of what I wrote, but at least give us something. Lets hope we see something in the near future, may be in tomorrows epi since Gopi has re-injured her hands.

Originally posted by: rsk16

very nice chapter.great one.really wonderful writing.

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: angelirebelli

Well there you go again..

Now at the risk of sounding repetitive, it is a fab take S, given whatever is happening on the show.. I am sure all the GoHem fans on the forum are thanking God for small mercies...

Keep 'em coming Babez...

Ahhem *clears throat*☺️
You are the one who created this monster remember? What was it you said, "Just let go and let the real writer come out" I think something along those lines. So take credit for it.

Thank you so much for always being so encouraging and inspiring, and for your most wonderful comments.

All the Gohem fans including myself thanks you for this.

Originally posted by: ANJ4

That was just beautiful. 10 out of 10

Awe..Thank you so much Anju. At least I am 10 of 10 somewhere.😆

Originally posted by: Soulmate_Sana

romantic n fantastic one...☺️

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS.

Originally posted by: taniks

Wow that was so beautiful , what an amazingly intimate scene between husband and wife. Thank you

Thank you so much. Wouldn't it be nice to see on the show, at least something along those lines.

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

wow this OS is unpredictable Shilpa ben..thanks for the PM

Thank you so much Kaka. Glad you liked it. You are very welcome.

Originally posted by: sam990

fantact

Thank you so much Sam.

Originally posted by: tina_1234

wonderful...awesome it is <3

Thank you so much Tina!

Originally posted by: gohem123

OMG...what was that??? ...

😳 can't control...am in lala land...


Oh God...stop blushing...am imagining...can you pls continue the OS...Make FF out of it...Don't stop there..pls...I want to get over with it...

For your aham

Thank you so much. Hope you enjoyed your trip to la la land.
I don't know if I can continue it or turn it into a FF, this was strictly based on the current happening on the show, so i really don't know how it would end. I thought it would be best to just ended there, and hope to see something like this on the show.

Originally posted by: JakeR

😍 cant wait and get home to make her drape a Saree...lol... Isnt it great when some girls can carry off it very well...? Run at airport and hug her boyfriend wearing the sexiest saree on planet earth and a sexiest blouse to kill for..i mean remove for...[ROFL]

Awesome OS... ben !

Aaj toh kisi ki raat pakki...lol


Shilpaben your OS made my day and "Knight"...lol... Thanx a lot for this...u r the best!!!

I can only say one thing, better yet let me show you.🤣





Ok I've had my fun for the day.
Thank you so much for liking the OS.

you are an amazing writer!! i just got through all your stories! and all i have to say is WOWWW!!!! writing comes so naturally to u!!! im really excited for u to continue first love! it is amazing =D but more about that in its own thread lol!

Originally posted by: shruthi2010

wow great story. it took me to lala land. wish these CVs had these kind of imagination, instead of those silly kalakaris.

Thank you so much Shurti. Glad you liked the OS, I hope they show us something soon though.

Originally posted by: sandyuk

Lovely OS!

Thank you Sandy!

Originally posted by: Simz786

Luved Itt...

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: sweetySweetu

Oh wow Shilpa ben! Ur OS is so lovely and mind-blowing that Iam already in la la la land😳.I love it.I am going to read it again.If u have time,pls extend this,luv u...

Thank you so much! I am glad you got to take a trip to la la land. I don't know about extending this one, but lets see what happens rest of this week, I might be inspired to write a different version.

Originally posted by: thejazzgal.s

hehe!! lovely lovely OS shilpa ben!!

love u for this!!! uwaah!!
itni jaldi hame show me ye scenes nahi milnegey isisliye yahn achanak se dene k liye love u!!

love u love u love u!!

agey ek aur ke OS aasie hi achhi achhi wali plzz

Awe...You are just so sweet to say this.😳 I am so glad you liked the OS. Well for you I wish for them to show you a scene like this in the near future.

An OS, like this, lets see, but lets see what a future scene in FL brings you.

Originally posted by: Bloem123

Very nice os

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: swasthi

Shilpa, thanks so much for a beautifully written OS. I amazed at your writing ability. You are very talented indeed.

He was a perfect husband and had shown he had a right to over her. The pace and the unfolding of the moments were blended well wit the mood and the feeling Ahem and Gopi were feeling.

I look forward to seeing something of this in the coming days ahead or even in the future.

We will raise a glass at the end of this week for the beautiful Gohem moments we are enjoying this week - what a treat we are having!

Your are welcome Swasthi. You were the inspiration behind the OS, I went by your suggestions and thought why not give it try.
He is moving towards being the perfect husband in the show, as we saw from today. I hope they continue with this, I only ask one thing, can they please make him a little gentle towards her.
I will have my drink ready for Friday.
Thank you so much for the encouragement, and keeping me positive when I felt that the CVs just didn't understand how the viewers felt.