FF:In Dino Dil Mera.(part 3, Pg 2)

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Hey I am attempting for the first time... Hope You Guys like it... Hmmm

I have added new Characters other than SNS star cast

Aham Modi

Jigar Modi

Gopi Singhania

Ashish Singhania ---- Gopi's Elder Brother

Preetham Goel ------- Gopi's Child hood Friend

Gaurav Ketan -------- Aham's College Friend

Ruchira Gupta ------- Gopi's Child hood Friend

Sahaja Kini ---------- Gopi's Child hood Friend

Samhitha Singhania ------Gopi's Mother

Sandesh Singhania -------Gopi's Father.

Rashi Shah

Kinjal Modi

Umang

Anita

Kokil Modi, Parag Modi

Chirag and Hetal Modi.

Part 1.

It will be 8 am in the morning in the Singhania Mansion, the whole singhania pariwar will be waiting for their lovely daughter, to come down for aarti, Rashi will be looking at her watch, and calls her mummy,

Mummy its already 8.00 , i have to go to my class, and see this Maharani has not yet come for aarti, and see ashish bhai he is not even thinking of me, he is waiting for that lazy Gopi. See mummy, if i go late to the college even today also, that stupid statistics lecture will throw me out of the class. Mummy from today onwards i will go to the college by auto...not with that Gopi's gang...

Urmila Shah ' Shanth ho jao Dikra (Calm down baby), you will go in auto for college, no dikra being my daughter how can you go to college alone that in auto , i know Dikra you are being under treated by singhania family, i am doing all this because of you Dikra, see i am forcing you to go with that Gopi is because even Preetham will be with her gang only, once if you tie the knot with that Preetham goel means our life will be settled than there is no need for us do the chamcha giri of Gopi...

Mummy you always tell one or other thing to me, and you will always convince me, you know how much ever i try to get close with that Preetham , he never looks at me, and he will always be behind that Gopi... and i am really fed up of this, please mummy i cant tolerate this insult anymore...

Calm down dikra don't give your brain in tha hands of anger, wait for a right time... everything is going to fall the way i have planned...

Ok mummy i will wait, what else i can do ...

Samhitha will be looking at the stairs, and Sandesh will see her, Samhitha till what time you will be waiting for gopi start the aarti , she will come and join later, see Ashish and Rashi are waiting from long time, they are getting late for the college...

No papa i will wait for Gopi, i always like to go to college with gopi only, as its the first day of her college, i don't want her to face any problem in the college...Ashish answers...

Urmila will bite her teeth, Rashi looks defeated, see mummy always the same thing has happened with me, now she is joining our college only, and their also all the attention will be given to her itself, mujhe koi dekhega bhi nahi...(no one will see me)

Preetham will come running in to the house, oh god Ashish you are here, i thought i will be late today, thank gopi she has not yet come yet right, i know my Friend wont get up until i wake her up...

The whole family will be in a shock... what do you say you did not wake her up yet...

Ashish, why did not you call up Gopi early in the morning, you know until she listens to your voice she is not going to open her eyes, and see we are already late to the college...

And its the first day for freshers principal has choosen me in the anti ragging squad team i need to be there at 8.45 am , other wise princi is going to kill me...Ashish tells preetham in anger...

Preetham-- why are you shouting at me, i thought i will personaaly wake up my friend instead of calling her, but i did not knew that the traffic will spoil my plan...

Mummy see preetham he is the alarm clock for gopi... his mother would have kept the name as alarm clock instead of Preetham, if i marry this fellow means i will become the waiting clock in his house.

Sandesh will ask Preetham to rush to Gopi's room, instead of wasting the time, sorry uncle i will go and wake her up...

No need to wake me up, i am not a school going girl any more today is my first day of college, so from now onwards rules are changed, Gopi will get up by herself... what you people treat me like a small kid. I don't like the people who pampers me... saying this Gopi will come down from stairs, she will be dressed in white top, and blue jeans and tied her hairs up, with a simple make up ... and a wrist watch...and a college bag...and her mobile phone in hand

On seeing Gopi's face everyones face will lit up, minus Rashi and her mothers,

Samhitha'gudiya Rani ut gayi (baby doll is got up)

Sami don't call me doll , i don't like that i am not a small baby.

Sandesh- gopi beta she is your mother, don't call her Sami call her as mamma

Gopi'Paapa my mom looks so young you know, so i feel bad to call her as mom.,... she looks like college going girl you know, she asks her father why did he marry her mother so early,

Sandesh and everyone else in the house will laugh at her...

Accha, don't drag me in this matter, ok your wish , call your mother as you like, ok baby i am getting late for office...

Papa don't call me baby.

Samhitha ' oh you are not a baby, for parents their children will remain babies only.

Preetham ' what you are not baby, hey you are under aged you are not even 18.

Gopi throws the her bag on him, what do you think in a matter of 3 months i will be turning 18, than i will become major...

Ashish 'ok stop fighting, lets finish the pooja and go to college we are already late...

Samhitha gives aarti to everyone ...and they will go to dining table and have the dhokla, gopi will just take one apple.. and starts eating, Samhitha asks her to eat Dhokla,

Gopi- i have become fat, i need to think of my health, so iam dieting from today.. don't force me to eat this oily stuff...

Sandesh and Samhitha will tell her not to do dieting, as it is not good for her health... as she is already healthy, and she have a proper figure she is not fat...

Rashi will murmer to herself, oh see she is not fat its seems in which angle she looks thin for them, she have lot of baby fat all over her body, she looks like a cotton ka Ghosla (cotton ball).

After having the Breakfast Gopi will take aashirwaad from her papa, mummy, and Maami and everyone will leave for the college...

Ashish sits in the drivers seat, Preetham in the front seat , gopi and Rashi in the back seat, preetham adjusts the mirror so that he can see glimpse of Gopi...

Rashi observes this and feels angry on Preetham...

Gopi will take out her lipstick from her bag and starts applying, Rashi on seeing this will open her eyes widely, and asks gopi,

Gopi what are you doing, why are you applying Lipstick...

Gopi answers to Rashi-----to look good Rashi ben...

Preetham interferes what gopi whom do you want to kill in the college, don't worry there is no one in the college who is as smart as me...

Ashish will tell preetham, yaar don't you know gopis chillar party, that sahaja and Ruchira.

Oh ashish got it Gopi would have been competing with them today, as who will be looking good...

Yaar Ashish, Ruchira is Okay, but Sahaja kya lagthi hai (what she looks), cant explain, i am damn sure, she will get atleast 50 red roses today, as all the boys eye will be on her itself...

(Preetham will start teasing Ashish, since Ashish has secret crush over Sahaja from school days)

Gopi will get angry on Preetham, and she will start crying aaa aaahhh

Ashish will immediately stops the car and both preetham, Rashi and Ashish will be worried why Gopi is crying...

Ashsish will ask baby why are you crying what happened tell me, gopi will be snobbing and tells her brother, that if she wont look good today infront of Ruchira and Sahaja than she needs to wear the Salwar kameej for the entire month, and Ruchira will laugh at me i cant withstand my defeat,,,, on saying this she starts again . crying...

All the three will bang their head with their hands saying oh no... not again...

Rashi will shout and say i will kill this Rucira one day bhai, she always creates one or other nonsense by her bet... remember last time on Gopi's birthday she locked me inside the bathroom , to win the bet with, that i wont be attending Gopi's birthday party, that too for just 100 Rs.

Preetham and Ashish will start laughing on hearing this Dekha preetham i told you that ruchira ki bachi would have kept one bet, i hope Gopi will loose imagine Gopi in salwar, how cute she looks, Ashish will catch his stomach and starts teasing gopi.. (as gopi never wore salwar in her life, jeans and shorts her favourite dress).

Preetham will ask Ashish to stop teasing Gopi, and he goes near Gopi, and holds her face and reassures her that , she is looking beautiful today, she is always beautiful, if by mistake if Sahaja is looking better than you, than no chance, i promise, i will make sure that you will win this bet...

And he gives his hand to Rashi, she joins his hand (without any other choice), ashish too (Sacrifice for little sister)...

And they four go to the college, Gopi will get down from car, and sees Sahaja's father in a scooter and Sahaja getting down from vehicle, Gopi will feel bad as sahaja is lloking good in her pink white salwar...

Preetham will go to the cafe shop in college and takes two cokes one for Rashi and another for him, he will give Rashi and says something in her ears , Rashi nods her head, she moves towards Gopi and sahaja and Ashish who are speaking to each other... She purposefully bumps in to Sahaja and makes the juice spill on her dress... Preetham happily says done by pulling his hand back...

Gopi, and Ashish will see Preethams reaction and closes their mouth in a shock... Ruchira will see this scene and will come running near them, i know gopi this is your plan , you purposefully has done this so that i can loose the bet, Gopi says no no she has not done anything, Preetham will come in between, hey Ruchira kya hai hamesha bet lagaathi ho, don't you have any other work, someday you will end up in problem if you continue this,,,, don't spoil Gopis mood, lets go to class its already getting late...

Rashi will follow Preetham as they both are in final year...same class

Ashish will help Sahaja to clean her dress, and he will take all the three girls to their class door and wishes all of them for their first class... and he kisses on goopis forehead and says not to worry, and tells them if anyone tries to trouble you people in the college than let me know i will take care of them,...

How is this guys please leave your suggestions and comments...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ok i'm the 1st to comment!!⭐️

wowooo i love this!! u have created a fab storyline!! just awesome!! u know thoght u kept her name Gopi itself i was in my head imagining Giaa in this place..cz she really suits the "pampered n babied by everyone around her" bill!

Ichara(Hope that is ur name) hope u'll continue soon cz it seems awesome to see this very different concept..!
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Realy nice ff great begin Can't wait to read the next part~!
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Really nice first chapter, it reminds me of that show 'Bebo' were Bebo was pampered by everyone
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PART 2.

It will be the first hour in the college, attender from the front office of the college, will get a notice to the lecturer, after signing the Notice, the lecture will announce to the students, that all the freshers are requested to assemple in the Amohi theatre as the Principal needs to address them today at 11.30 am.

Ruchira will be over excited as they were being bugged up by the lecturing, and she will shake up Gopi who will be half asleep (Sleeping with open eyes)...

Gopi will get scared on seeing it is Ruchira who has waken her up, she asks kya baath hai ? (whats the matter)

Ruchi will tell her, ohay sleeping beauty , didn't you hear what sir just announced we need to run to amphi theatre at 11.30 as it is still 11.10, come let us go to canteen and have something , i am feeling really hungry...

Sahaja will ask Ruchi,

Its still 11.00 and you are feeling hungry, i think you belong to Kumbakarna's family (Mythological character form Mahabharatha).

Ruchi will make the angry face at Sahaja who was sitting next to Gopi (Gopi in middle on either side of her Ruchi and Sahaja, since they both love GOpi equally and hate each other, not hate, just they have mismatch of the thought, one is fire, other is rain, but they both love GOpi, Gopi is the bond between their friendship, so they both tolerate each other, but all the three wont live without each other).

Gopi will take her mobile phone and will start messaging to her Ashish bhai, that they are coming to canteen, but Ruchi will snatch the mobile from her hand and will tell gopi.

Gopi why are you behaving like a kid, you yourself told, that you are no more kid, than why are you telling your brother that you are going to canteen, so silly, see we are grown up now, your brother will always call as chillar party and he always insults me, and i hate your brother... so no need to call him...

Sahaja will tell Gopi

Gopi don't listen to this stupid Ruchi, she always tries to put us in trouble, my mother has told me not to roam in the college alone, as the boys will always take advantage of the girls, and they are not good, so if Ashish comes to canteen we can go there without fear...

Gopi will nod her head agreeing to Sahaja.

Ruchi will get up and will scream aaahhh

Gopi and Sahaja will be shocked what happened ,

Gopi don't listen ot his Sahaja, she is living in 18th century, she should have been in the museum, but god why you made her to be born in 21st century, first of all only ashish bhai is calling as baccha, kids,...

If we listen tothis stupid Sahaja, the whole will call us chillar party.

We are always being dominated by ashish bhai, Preetham , and your brainless Rashi ben... even in school also now in college also.. i told my mother that i wont jointhis college as they are also studying here, but why they will listen to me, if i say purab they will say paschim, aso they purposefully made my admission in this college...

They are thinking that your brother ashish will take care of us, who is he to take care us i am already 18, i can take care of myself Hmmm

On saying this she will turn and starts moving towards the door, and she will stand like a statue in a fear, shocked state, as she saw Ashish, Preetham, and Rashi standing at the door... staring at her and giving a dangerous look...

Ruchi will run behind Sahaja and will hide (as she knows ashish will not beat her if sahaja is there, love you know)...

When Ruchi hides behind Sahaja, ashish's anger will calm down by seeing the beautiful sahaja's face,,, but Preetham and Rashi will be biting their teeths.

Preetham will hols Ruchi's hand , hey Ruchi ki bacchii listen, if you put Gopi and sahaja in trouble because of your stupid and brainless ideas than think what i will do with you...

Rashi will tell iske saath tho aisa hi hona chahiye, bahuth udthi rahthi hai (same thing should happen to this girl, she always flies)

Gopi will request Preetham to leave Ruchi, and Ashish will take them to canteen, and Ruchi will order burger and coke, Sahaja will not order anything, so ashish will ask her to take atleast Mango shake as it is very good in canteen, Sahaja will agree and nods her head. Preetham and Ruchi will stare at both of them, Ruchi will tell to herself, sahaja ki bachi You wanted to spend time with ashish bhai thats why i know why were you insisting calling bhai to the canteen..

You purposefully joined this college so you can continue your love in college also...

Preetham will murmer to himself, wow what a scene, this ashish's fate is written in gold, have a such a beautiful obeying girl friend...

See my fate, gopi don't know at all i love her, she thinks i am her best friend, when she will understand my feelings... ok let her turn 18, i will propose this buddhu (stupid).

Rashi will be staring at Preetham, she thinks that once she marries she will not live in India itself, she will take him abroad and will live a happy life their away from Gopi.

PART 2.1.

The principal of the college will address to the students, and tells them not to divert their mind from the studies and he is very strict, and if he finds anyone bunking the class they will land up in trouble...

On hearing this, Ruchi will get ichki, and she will pour the popcorn from her hand Gopi will take her water bottle from her bag and will give to her, Preetham will make signal to Ruchi (hand signs) and will tell her not to worry, that principal is little mad, he always eats the juniors head like this every year, on seeing preethams signals Ruchi will calm down...

And after the class hours, ashish will drive the car and he picks all the four girls Sahaja, Rashi, Ruchi , Gopi. Sahaja will refuse to come along with them as she will go in bus, but Gopi insists that she will drop them both every day , Ashish too forces Sahaja, she agrees and gets in to the car,

Rashi will get angry on them, and murmers to herself, mufth ka car hai (free car service).

Preetham will come running to Ashish and says that he needs to go for oofice as Papa has sent car to the college, on saying this he waves everyone, especially Gopi . Since Rashi will be sitting next to Gopi , she thinks that Preetham is waving her and she blushes...

First ashish will drop Ruchi to their house, Ruchi says thanks to him, Ashish tells her from tomorrow onward he will come and pick her and asks her to get ready and stand infront of house at 8.30 am, Ruchi will say Ok bhai and waves at them... Ruchi's mother will be standing at the gate and sees Ashish telling bye to her, and she tells to Ruchi, see this is the reason why i made you to join that college, he treats you and Gopi the same way understood.

Ruchi hugs her mom, yes mom i know, but what to do i like ashish bhai so much that if i wont fight with him for a day i cant get sleep only, that why i always complain to you, why did not you and papa got me a brother.

Ruchi's mom will hit on Ruchi's head and says badmash (naughty).

Next Ashish stops his car infront of Sahaja's house and Ashish will tell her before getting down from the car that he will pick and drop her daily , and asks her not to refuse, and asks her to be out of the house at 8.20am. and Gopi will say bye to her...

Rashi will be making face at Sahaja wavea at her,(Since sahaja belong to middle class family).

At last they will reach the Singhania Mansion, and Gopi will throw her bag on the sofa and will run to the kitchen and will hug her mother,... and asks her mother.

Sami did you miss me. And lands her head on her shoulder.

Samhitha will pat her daughters cheeks and says, haan Dikra i missed you a lot, that why i am making you your favourite Gulab jamoon.

Gopi's eyes will be widened with happiness, and she will take the glass serving and puts two jamoons and starts eating, meanwhile Rashi too enters the kitchen and sees Gopieating Jamoon, samhitha will serve Rashi and asks her to eat.

But rashi will feel bad, thinking that this jamoon is made specially for Gopi not for her, and she remembers the day when she went to the college that no one ever bothered to make her favourite dish and will get a tear at the corner of her eyes, gopi will see Rashi wiping her eys and asks Rashi ben what happened, Rashi will make a big smile and says nothing gopi, something went in to my eyes...

Rashi will take her jammon and she will go to her room and will start studying.

Gopi as always after eating Jamoon she will go and sit infront of the TV and will start seeing the PoGO channel...

Sandesh will come back from office, and he will ask for Gopi from Samhitha, she will tell him she is watching TV, sandesh will tell to Samhitha this girl is never going to change, and he comes and sits near Gopi, but Gopi will be totally involved in watching TV, Sandesh will wait for 5 minutes that his daughter will notice him and waves his hand infront of his eyes but no use... she is totally lost, samhitha will be seeing this scene and she will signal ashish, and both will laugh at Sandesh...

Ashish will tell his Papa

Papa no use this chillar party will always be seeing carton only don't disturb her, let her do her work.

Ashish will tell him, yes dikra, if she sits infront of a TV than when she will study. she is a girl when she goes to others house imagine her position, don't know to do anywork.

Samhitha will tell him to have tea, as she is still a kid once she is married all the responsibilities will make her to learn form the situation...

Sandesh will agree and laughs...

PART 2.2.

it will be almost 3 months in the college, Sahaja, Ruchira and Gopi will be very busy with their daily schedule, and now they are very comfortable in the college they are no more newbies in the college, the whole class has become vry friendly with all the three girls, all the boys will be cursing Ashish, as the 3 beautiful girls are under his protection, as they are getting scared to talk to 3 girls as ashish may punch them one day...

Gopi will be reading the notice board and sees the timetable of the semester exams, and she will note down the date , and will run to canteen to Ruchi, and Sahaja, and Ruchi will be in a shock state as the exam dates are near, sahaja will be calm as she is, Gopi and Ruchi will immediately run to the Library and will pick their books (its their first entry in to library). And gopi and Ruchira will sit in library and will be studying, with tears falling form their eyes.

Ashish spots Sahaja alone and enquires about Gopi and Ruchi, Sahaja tells him they went to library, and Ashish Knows his sister, as she studies only at the last moment, but this time he is shockes she has started studying before a month.

Preetham sees sahaja and Ashish alone and winks and goes to them, Whats the matter romancing alone.

Where is Gopi and that Ruchi, Sahaja will tell him that they are studying his eyebrow will also be raised,,,,,

Preetham will leave them alone and he will go towards library, on his way Rashi will see him in the middle seeing him alone, she immediately runs t him, and asks him where the rest are Preeetham will tell they are studying, ... Rashi understands that he is going to Library for gopi, so distract him, she will start about the studies and will tell him that she has not understood some of the lectures and will ask him to teach her, preetham will help her and they both sit in the canteen and he will help her out...

It will be the last year of the college, as usual Sahaja will top in the class, Gopi and Ruchi will pass by first class, Gopi and Ruchi will be very happy for their result, as they both were thinking that they will flunk the papers...

Rashi, Preetham and ashish will pass their final exams with first class, and there will be a farewell party arranged for all the final year students, by the juniors, ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it is really nice! loved reading the 2nd part too!!👏
u know u reminded me of my 1st year 1st week or so cz i had my cousin bro looking out 4 me too..n haha exams..
lol the 1st time i also actually stepped foot in to the library was to get past papers when i got the shock of seeing the exam time table 2 weeks b4 the exam!😆

anyway it is really nice narration..i can relate to it so am looking forward to read the rest of the story!!😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: princessunara

it is really nice! loved reading the 2nd part too!!👏
u know u reminded me of my 1st year 1st week or so cz i had my cousin bro looking out 4 me too..n haha exams..
lol the 1st time i also actually stepped foot in to the library was to get past papers when i got the shock of seeing the exam time table 2 weeks b4 the exam!😆

anyway it is really nice narration..i can relate to it so am looking forward to read the rest of the story!!😃

Ya true it always happens with me , i never step in to library unless i need the previous year question papers...
we all girls fall in the same category not everyone but almost😉
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hi this very nice one
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hey do continue soon dear ...
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Very nice Update Can't wait to read the next part~!

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