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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi guys, I am sweety. I have always been a silent member on this forum. But today I thought that I would share the thought with u all which I have in my mind.Everybody on the forum are talking about "Gopi's wet hair", so I just had a small thought about it.So here it goes...

It was early in the morning.Gopi bathed and just now came into their room.She started drying her wet hair with a towel. Just then Ahem who was sleeping felt that somebody sprinkled water upon his face.He opened his eyes and for a minute he thought that whoever had done that, he would blast them then and there. But he saw Gopi looking into the mirror and drying her hair. While she was drying her hair,water got sprinkled upon his face. Looking at Gopi, he thought "beautiful".He just got lost in her beauty.Gopi was now pinning her hair. Ahem wanted to tell her "don't do that. U actually look much better when u leave ur hair."But as usual he was not able to say that. Then he saw that she was getting ready and she was putting her sindhoor. Ahem remembered when Nani has asked him to put sindhoor on Gopi that day, he escaped from there and felt very happy that he did. But he now he was disappointed that he lost such a golden opportunity. He really wished Nani comes now and asks him to put sindhoor upon Gopi.But Alas! that's not going to happen now...Not atleast this soon.

While Ahem was lost in his thoughts and in her beauty, Gopi became aware of his stare.She saw him through the mirror. Ahem was embarassed at being caught.He suddenly moved his eyes from her and started looking here and there. She became conscious and started to move out from the room.

Then Ahem noticed that she forgot to tie the dori of her blouse at the back and she was moving out of the room. Ahem was angry"How can she forget such things?" He shouted "Gopi..". Gopi who was about to open the door got froze there and she turned back and moved to him with her eyes on ground.Then she went to him and asked," Ji, do u want something?". Ahem said "I don't want anything. But u need something and that is brain." Gopi got confused,"Now why is he scolding her? What did she do again to anger him?"

Ahem looked at her peacefully and said "you forgot to tie ur dori at the back." Gopi was now feeling her back and sure enough she forgot that. Gopi thought,"How did I do that?" and she is getting embarassed that Ahem had told her about this.And she moved to the mirror and started trying to tie the dori. But she was not able to get hold of that threads. She thought that,"Oh God...Why is this happening? Everyday she used to do it in seconds and today she was not able to get hold of these doris also? And Ahemji is watching her so intently." She was getting tensed.
Ahem looked at her and shaking his head, " This girl is really the limit." And he got up from his bed and moved to the mirror where Gopi stood. He got hold of her doris and started tying it at the back.
As for Gopi, suddenly she felt that somebody's hands are traveling towards her back and it will be her Ahemji's hands only. Suddenly she felt that her heart is beating double it's usual speed. Ahem felt only one thing "Her skin is so smooth,soft." When Ahem completed, he was still lost in her. It was Gopi who first woke up from her dream-like state and muttered a quick "thanq". He then woke up and even did not know what to say. She moved out of the room very quickly. Ahem stood for a while like that and suddenly brought himself to the earth saying"What is he thinking?" And then he was reminded of time and he rushed to bathroom as he was running late now to the office...


So this is all it. Hope u all liked it. I know that this is not so beautiful and romantic, but it is just my thought...Thanq

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Posted: 14 years ago
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What a nice thought! I would love this to happen!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Welcome , I am Anjula ... I really like you short story. I had just watch the jewerly epi from 2010 and I can imagine what you were writing... thank you and good nite ... I know i will have a nice dream when I go to sleep.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi...Thank you for the warm welcome😊. I am happy that u all liked it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Like many of us here finally you have broken your silence. Welcome to the forum. I would love to see your short as a scene in the serial.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Welcome to the forum and hopefully you remain an active member.

Great OS, I like it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms

Welcome to the forum and hopefully you remain an active member.


Great OS, I like it.



Thank you for welcoming me to the forum and glad that you liked it. BTW, I forgot to tell u Iam big fan of u. I just love the way u analyze any scene and the way u think about it's hidden meaning.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: swasthi

Like many of us here finally you have broken your silence. Welcome to the forum. I would love to see your short as a scene in the serial.



Thank you for welcoming me.😊 Even I would love to see this scene onscreen
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetySweetu



Thank you for welcoming me to the forum and glad that you liked it. BTW, I forgot to tell u Iam big fan of u. I just love the way u analyze any scene and the way u think about it's hidden meaning.


Thanks mate for the compliment, I've suddenly become a fan you now...I'm shameless for compliments 🤣, you should see my fan fics, I throw tantrums when my buddies don't click the like button...I analyse that too...lol.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms


Thanks mate for the compliment, I've suddenly become a fan you now...I'm shameless for compliments 🤣, you should see my fan fics, I throw tantrums when my buddies don't click the like button...I analyse that too...lol.





😆😆 and I would love to have that kind of analysing skills.
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