SS: Aham longs to see Gopi (UPDATED pg4)

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swasthi

@swasthi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

So the present is an outing and an ice cream sundae.

Great SS ... looking forward to the next part.

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Raunika

@rsk16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Wow, very sweet n romantic of Ahem to take her for a sundae.

cool writing.keep writing more can't wait.

Raunika

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aNsHu

@aNsHu_tEjPaL

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

omg!! lovely story...absolutely brilliant...loved both parts...how i long to see ahem missing gopi and seeking her out

pls continue sooon!!!! really enjoyed the story...

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shaina

@shaina.sharma

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

wow superb ss. Good to see ahem getting attached to gopi. and a romantic moment, definetly watiing for it.

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-Nafisa-

@-Nafisa-

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: swasthi
So the present is an outing and an ice cream sundae.

Great SS ... looking forward to the next part.

Thanks for liking the story Swasthi, read please kalakari students too, I think it's a good laugh.

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-Nafisa-

@-Nafisa-

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: shaina.sharma
wow superb ss. Good to see ahem getting attached to gopi. and a romantic moment, definetly watiing for it.

Hi thanks Shaina for liking my story, please click like...thanks again.

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-Nafisa-

@-Nafisa-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: aNsHu_tEjPaL
omg!! lovely story...absolutely brilliant...loved both parts...how i long to see ahem missing gopi and seeking her out

pls continue sooon!!!! really enjoyed the story...

Thanks Anshu...I'm so impatient to see the next episode these days, so decided to write a story, I'm happy with the first part, but the second part, not so much, perhaps I will rescue it later on when I feel inspired after today's episode..

Thanks for the nice words.

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â™ªáƒ¦â™¥Jazzy..!â™ªáƒ¦â™¥

@thejazzgal

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

wow!! againn nafisa

do cont sooonn...

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-Nafisa-

@-Nafisa-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: thejazzgal.s
wow!! againn nafisa

do cont sooonn...

Thanks Jazzy, you know i'm glad you like it, but I'm thinking I rushed the second update, I'm trying to think of a way to rescue this story and make nice. I will update soon.

Actually I just went back to read it, though the update wasn't funny it was still sweet and his still longing for her, so not bad.

Edited by Nafisa_blossoms - 14 years ago