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Posted: 14 years ago
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Am a constant viewer of this forum. But never wanted to write anythin..But due to this long boring weekend, I wanted to share my angle of hw this story will get progressed in future.Now v all knw ahem likes Gopi.But I doubt whether he understands it or not. With regards to the pace of the previous episodes,I don't think ahem will really confess his love or atleast realise it.So I want to write an FF abt hw will our goldenboy realise tat he's in luv???

During Gopi's B'day celebs she had told everyone abt the demise of her parents which happened to be on the same day as her birthday.Koki overhears it.After all the children left, Koki came to Gopi's room. Gopi was sitting in the sofa thinking abt her parents and wat her sis had told her. Koki asked Gopi, " Gopi vau, tumne aaj jo bhi kaha mujhe bahut bura laga.Tum apne aap ko abhi bhi anath(orphan) kyon maanthe ho..Kya mein tumhari maa nahi hoon?? (Gopi bahu,whatever u said today, I was very disappointed with u. Why do u consider urself an orphan nw also??Have u never consider me as ur mother??) " Gopi," nahi maaji,woh mein...woh .."Koki,( No mother, It's just.. It's..)" Dekho Gopi vau, meie hamesha tumein apni beti maana hoon , par lagtha hein tum mujhe maa ka darja kabhi nahin de pavoge..(Luk Gopi,I've always consider urself as my daughter.But now I think U never will give me ur mother's position in ur life") " Gopi," Nahi maaji,aisi koyi baat nahin hein.meine apni zindagi mein kabhi bhi apni maa ko nahin dekha..Jo bhi pyaar aur apnapan mila hein vo appse hi mila hein. Aap mere liye maa hi nahin balki maa se badkar ho.."(Gopi replied,"No mother.Ther's nothin like that. I've never seen my real mother in life. Whatever love,affection I've got is from u and u only...U r not my mother, u r more than a motherly figure for me...) KoKi hugs Gopi.👏(Sad music)... Koki ," Thiikhe Gopivau,ye batao yeh baat tumhe kaise pata.Meine to suna tha tumhari maabaap accident pe mare the. "(Koki said," Gopi bahu,i've heard that ur parents died in an accident. So hw do u got this information??) Gopi," Ji woh...Rasi behen..woh.."( Gopi replied," Its Rashi behen..). Koki," Rashi ne kaha tumse..woh bhi tho choti they na uss waqt...Zaroor uski ma ne kaha hoga.. Tum aankhen ponchlo aur achi tarah padayi karlena..Ab sirf kuch din heen bache hein"(Koki said," Rashi but she was a little kid herself at that time. I think Ur aunt may have told her probably,Now just wipe out your tears and study well. There are only few days left for the exam)... Gopi," Thekh hein maaji"( Gopi said,"K,mother".)


Koki comes down.Ask hetal bhabhi," kya humein Gopi ke naam par kuch puja karleni chahiye? Uski b'day hein na..( Koki comes down and ask hetal," Can we do puja for Gopi's happiness? its her b'day") Phone rings...Koki said," nahin motabhabhi mein leloonga"( Koki said," I will take the phone"). Jeethubhai said," hello vevenji,namasthe..kya mein gopibetiya se baat kar sakthi hoon." (Jeethubhai: " Kokilajee, Can u pls give the phone to gopi") Koki," Haan woh jeethu bhai mein jaanti hoon aapne kyon phone kiya?Aap apni behen ke shrradh keliye Gopi ko bechne ki baat kahne keliye phone kiya tha na..?"( Koki said," I knw jeethubhai why have u called?? U want me to send Gopi for her mother's death anniversary puja(shraadh)") JeethuBhai," Yeh aap kya kah rahe hain..meine tho abhi abhi urmila ko vahan se aathe hua dekha..Isliye...Aur waise bhi mere behen ki maut aaj nahin kuch mahine baad hui hein..2mahine baad. "( Jeethu bhai replied," wat r u saying? I've called because I've seen urmila coming from modibhavan nw.that's why...But anyways..My sisters death was not happened today..It was 2 months later..) Koki," Kya???"( Koki said," What??)😲


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taniks thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I am sure ur story is quiet interesting but unfortuately I don't understand hindi can u pls transate in english.
Thank you
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: taniks

I am sure ur story is quiet interesting but unfortuately I don't understand hindi can u pls transate in english.
Thank you

yeah please translate in English...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its very sweet..wish t happens.😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: taniks

I am sure ur story is quiet interesting but unfortuately I don't understand hindi can u pls transate in english.
Thank you


Thanxxx..I've updated it with english dialogues...Pls read and do comment and hit like button...Thanxxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Its very interesting n sweet.
Glad to know kokila came to know the truth.
plz continue soon.
Raunika

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