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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanx for appreciating me and for encouraging me for writing next part so here it goes...


So next morning aham is excited bcoz his frnd is abt to come any time. His frnd insisted that he will come on his own bcoz he have somewhere to go. Aham agreed but also told him that first he have to come MM then he can go anywhere he want and abhishek agrred bcoz he want to take aham wid him after all aham is his bestfrnd and he want to share his only secret with him.So abhishek arrives at MM and Aham goes to open the door for abhishek . They are very happy to see each other and they sit on sofa and start chatting with each other jigar too joins them bcoz he is very found of abhishek bhai . just then gopi arrives with snacks and hetal says to gopi gopi dikra come and meet my third son by the way kokila is not at home bcoz she goes to mandir for praying . gopi is abt to greet him suddenly abhishek raises his faces and sees gopi. before gopi can say anything he himself start gopi tum yaha kaise. What u r doing at modi bhavan. He is not able to see gopi's sindoor bcoz it is covered by her hair and her manglsutr clasped is broken so it goes for repairing. gopi also got confuse by seeing him there and more confused bcoz he is his aham ji's best frnd how can he. she never new that he having modi son as frnd so both r looking confused. Aham ,jigar and hetal r confused how they both knw each other. then rashi comes there with cup of teas and she also saw him and very happy to see him. see address him as lddoo and start talking to abhishek what u r doing here. he get more confused by seeing rashi but by looking at rashi he can say that she is married so he asks rashi when u get married and how come u both r at MM so rashi start that she is modi vahu and jigar modis wife gopi interrupts both of them in between and says rashi ben u knw he is aham ji's frnd . I never thought I meet u here .then abhushek says to aham I m very happy today I got to meet two my best frnds here. one is Aham Modi and second is Gopi shah. I m on cloud nine just then hetal interrupts and says abhishek not gopi shah she is no more gopi shah she is Mrs gopi aham modi . Now abhishek face is worth to watch Bcoz he is not believing that his two best mates get married to each other and as far as he knw aham hates illiterate people and gopi is illiterate so how come they both married to each other... Now he starts his question bank HOW WHEN WHERE WHY but not getting ant right word so hetal says stop first u tell us how u knw gopi And why rashi call u laddoo so He told them that he he told them that his mama is their neighbors and he used to go their house and so their they bcome frnds and gopi and he is very fast frnd...so gopi is now more happy bcoz with aham ji's frnd she also get her frnd who is her angel whenever he come to his mama house and hetal and jigar is happy bcoz rashi and gopi got there frnd but in between no body notices aham who is so jealous thinking gopi have male frnds. Till now he always satisfied thinking that he is first man in her life bcoz she have no clue of outside world but now he is jealous thinking that gopi is frnds with abhishek . Only one person notices aham's expressions and That is non other than rashi who understood that aham is not happy with the fact gopi is frnds with abhishek. and in between thinking abt her next kalakari.


So frnds rashi is thinking abt her next kalakari and aham is jealous and like always jigar have no clue what going on and gopi is happy meeting abhishek and abhishek is happy meeting gopi and aham bcoz he is least bother abt rashi but he is confused how come aham married gopi ???
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely part can't wait to read the next part!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it very nice one keep it up
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice part. keep going.want to know wat happens next.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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pretty good 😉... pls continue .. .waiting to read more ...


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Posted: 14 years ago
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great imagination dear and well written, please update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I can only say I m very thankful to all of u who appreciated my work and encourage me and thanx for ur wonderful comments. I m just falling in Love with writing with ur comments.


so now aham having a jealous feeling and abhishek is confused abt all this and rashi planning kalakari and our dear gopi just to Happy beyond words bcoz when she saw abhishek she remember all sweet memories. Him saving her form her mami's torture and he also try to educate her but all goes in vain due to mami . So now aham is very jealous bcoz gopi keep smiling while talking to him and even forgets abt his tea and aham being aham never want to admit anything . he just call gopi sternly and told her don't u want to study today or u waste ur whole time talking here. so go from there and start revising. Do u teaching gopi abhishek says to aham . aham replies yes I m bcoz nobody else can do it. so gopi goes from there and start revising. In between kokila comes form mandir and came to knw that abhishek is gopi and rashi's frnd too. so she is delighted that now at least gopi have someone to talk. When aham comes to his room he sees gopi doing studies so he have no reason to shout at her but he badly wanted to scold her bcoz he want to feel that he have authority over her and he can do anything with her and nobody can stop him bcoz she is his wife and only his. He can't see her smiling with someone else so what if abhishek is his best frnd and gopi's childhood frnd too. They r married knw and gopi do what he likes and if he don't like her talking to abhishek and there is nothing wrong in it but then he thinks how can he say such things to her. he always told her that he have nothing to do with her so how can suddenly he demand her that he don't like her talking to his and ya HER frnd too. Last time when she is talking to his frnd so freely it make him jealous that's y after reaching home he shouted at her and called her so many things for showing his displeasure bcoz he knws very well if he shows her that he did't like her talking to his frnds then she never talk to them again and she always remain his only. what if somebody snatched her from him. she is beautiful, loving . That's y he even against her school but then thought that this is only primary school and she is always with kids and her sindoor and manglstur is enouigh to tell everybody that she is somebody else and somebody is having rights over her and then he started teaching her bcoz he want to come close to her but all is plan goes to vain till now bcoz she is so afraid of him but he needed to do something very fast bcoz the looks she is giving to abhishek and the way abhishek is happy after seeing her. he is afraid what if she is that girl whom abhisked loved from very young age but never told him who is she and he never forced him to tell. so he needed to something fast for keeping gopi to himself. Ahamji Ahamji gopi said aham come back from his thought process and sees gopi standing in front of him with taht damn pallu of her which his motrher told to take off when she abhishek is with them. Don't knw what's problem with them she even don't knw that wife take palla with other man not with her husband but what to do all of this his own doing. gopi again confused what ahamji must be thinking . She is seeing him form the time he come back in room he keep thinking something, don't knw what is bothering her but she even can't ask bcoz she knws he never like this so she go out of their room to make his green tea which she momentary forgeten bcoz of happiness but what the hell it is he still in thoughts so she think better to call his name so she called him and he gave her strange look. she speaks ahamji ur tea, aham takes tea from her hand and start drinking it...



So frnds I knw this is little boring with aham's internal thoughts but we should now what going in his mind . so here Aham is insecure bcoz of abhishek so tuned to knw what affect will have aham's insecurites over gopi...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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So sorry frnds for delay but here next update
Aham enjoying his tea while gopi waiting him to finish his tea but as soon as aham realises that it's way past time his tea. He barked at gopi and shouted at her for bringing his tea and asked her who told her to bring tea and y she is not studying and wasting her time on such things.Gopi bcome upset and she told aham That she finishes her work and she completed her all work given by him , it infurtied him and he said kk so that's mean u knw every thing and as we both knw that tommorow is sunday so ur school is at off so the test which I m going to take next sunday I will take it right now . at listening this Gopi eyes bcome wide in shock and she tol him that it's too early but he said u told me right knw that u knw everything so now u can''t escape from test and u have to give this test. For pleasing aham gopi gets ready for test, Aham prepare her test and intenally makes it toough so gopi won't able to do it properly and hands over to it and start doing his work on laptop. When gopi saw her test paper her eyes bcome wide in shock Something in test she even don't knw and she knw she can't even ask aham bcoz he definetly get mad after knowing that she don't knw bcoz she is sure that he must teach her but she forget so she start doing her test and as aham wanted made lot of mistakes. After finishing her test gopi hands over her test to aham and aham start checking it and declare the result which he alredy knws that she failed the test and need to concentrate on her studies and in order to improve her state she need to work hard and avoid unneccesary talking and concentrtae on her studies and if he ever saw her doing anything else than studies then it won't be good for her... She noded her head in aggrement bcoz finally aham started caring for her and she don't want to loose it by her stupidness and dumbness and her maaji also get mad at her if aham is mad at her bcoz kokila already told her to work hard for her studies if she want to come close to aham that's y she never allow her to do any household work since she started her studies.. So she made up her made up her mind that she study hard and she also told aham that she do as he told and went off to sleep and aham is happy that knw gopi give her entire time to studies so their is no time left for abhishek when he is not at home and when he came back he again engaed her in studies so his plan worked and he sleept with smile on his face...
SO NOW AHAM PLAN WORKED AS GOPI MADE HER MIND FOR WORKING HARD FOR STUDIES AS SHE DID NOT PASS THE TEST GIVEN BY AHAM SO TUNED UP TOO SEE HOW ABHISHEK INTERUPT GOPI STUDIES AND HOW AHAM TRY DIFFERENT-2 PLANS TO KEEP THEM APART
Edited by aashima326 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good job dear. ur FF is facinating.😛 continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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gr8 story.. luv to know the further story...
good job.. keep up.. :)

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