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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi to everyone I love Good reading and here are all wonderful writers and I also love writing but I m new writer so If u don't like my writing then pls let me knw so I immediately stop it . I m inspired by from very wonderful writers here for writing so thanx for whom who inspired me.


So first My story is same till now just they found gopi and gopi did pooja and all praised gopi and aham still arrogant towards her. So story start from gopi passing the exam with good marks and school principal tell aham to continue teaching her bcoz she learning fast in his guidance so he is teaching her and softening towars her but his ego like always troubling him for accepting the fact and in between rashi start falling for jigar but stil with her mother against gopi so here and there kalakri's goes on. It's dinner time in MM and aham declares that one of his childhood frnd coming on business trip here and he insisted him for staying with them bcoz everyone in MM is very found of him. He is like third son to Modi's and he is coming back after 2 years so aham want him to stay with them boz his family moved to delhi to their another son and their nobody to take care of him . so he is excited for meeting his frnd who coming after long time. Gopi happy bcoz he is happy and every body happy bcoz abhishek is coming after so many time . when he gone from there to study aham want desperately that he stay with him for sometime in MM and his family already moved to delhi but he is all alone in his house but he refused and aham don't knw why. This is the only thing he don't knw abt is frnd but his frnd told him that he will definitely tell him one day so he is waiting for that day ... aham is now waiting for next day for arival of his frnd and gopi is waiting for see who is the person who is so special for aham so both r sleeping on bed thinking abt next day ... ya they both started sleeping on bed bcoz after thieve incident aham asked her to sleep on bed bcoz she is not feeling well and then tell her that she can continue sleeping on bed bcoz mom is happy when she saw u on bed but the truth is he himself does not want her to sleep on the floor but unable to say that ...

so what next store for gopi and aham when abhishek arrives


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MereMahiyaa. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Your first time wow it is realy good
can't wait to read the next part!
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Amazingly nice for a first time.
keep going .eagerly waiting for more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good start ... please continue.
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Good start , please cont...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice story line. Keep it up 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very good. please continue soon.

is abhishek loved gopi secretly, did they have a past.

intresitng to know.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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like your ff good start 👍🏼 cont plzzz
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Really nie re...

keep continuing re

all the best👏

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u r 2 good.pls keep it up n all the best.

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