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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

awesoe update...

glad that gopi's father has started to realise his mistake



Thank you so much. Glad you liked the update.
Gopi and her father may never have that close father daughter relationship, but for her it will be enough that he acknowledges the fact that she was not responsible for her mother's death.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: gohem123

Thanx a lot...was waiting for FFs..as cvs are hell bent on creating kalakaaries..Nice update..loved the way you described the relationship of goham.. ..Please continue soon..



Thank you so much!
I know how you feel, at one point I felt like quitting the show, but I just cant's too addicted to Gohem, so I try to show a type of relationship I want the SNS Gohem to have, and I am glad you are enjoying it.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kamjal

shilpa am just glad there are good writers like you on the forum.


your update has been worth the wait

you have lifted my mood

👏 awesome



Thank you so much Kamjal!
I think you are also one of the excellent writers we have in this forum, and this is the best way to keep us going when things get unbearable on the show. I am glad I was able to contribute in lifting your mood.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: taniks

Fab update , I loved your Mr and Mrs Ahem Modi cos that is what they are in your story , a united couple who face their storms together depending on each other to get them thru together. Gopi is confident but not overly so ,she still needs her husband support in her life , ahem strong , capable but needs his wife to complete him.their relationship is multifaceted , their stance together in family life ,his business world and their private life is beautiful , this is wot saath nibhana saathiya is all abt , everything in this chapter just screamed one word to me and that is ' T0GETHER' a very impotant word in marriage.I loved that u gave her a backbone , the way she stood up to Nick not allowing him to demean her husband and belittle their relationship was lovely but for me the best part was ahem holding the thali to his wife silently proclaiming his support and her rights in this family and again together as blessed married couple handed the rings to other soon to be couples. Incredible how subletly yet forcefully the message of their togetherness was brought forth at that point. I knew it would be well worth the wait , I loved it can't wait for next chapter.




Thank you so much!
When I read your comment, I was stunned. When I started this FF, I really didn't know how the story would go, but I wanted to show that Gopi and Ahem were destined to be together, and I wanted to show a love story that would surpass all obstacles thrown in its path. I wanted to show two people who loved each other so much that, one is incomplete without the other, and would always be there for each other, no matter who or what was in their way. Your comments showed me that I have achieved my goal.

Thank you so much for giving me this wonderful feedback.
I will do my best to update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kaka.lg


thanks so much for the pm shilpa ben. Gohem relationship is so pure and warm. Hope SNS turn to be like this too. love ur story so much



Thank you so much.
I love this Gohem, I also hope our SNS Gohem are shown like this in the future, I just wouldn't be able to see them separate, they are meant to be together.
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Posted: 13 years ago
When are you updating?,your awesome!

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update! romantic as well!!
loved how ahem and gopi have come such a looong way and how they have become one not only physically but emotionally as well...i love the trust between them...u described it sooo beautifully!!!

omg at the party...what a !@#$! how dare she say that??? i was ready to kill her...but i am sooo happy to see that unlike last times gopi didn't hide out and understood...i am glad she's feeling secure about her relationship w/ahem and her family.

shocker of the day-----def gopi's dad!!!!!! finally!!!! i've been waiting for this!!! the man finally realized he had a daughter!!! i am waiting to see where the relationship goes next. how he makes up with his daughter after years of abuse and neglect

absolutely loved loved loved ahem's possiveness!!!! loved the scene b/w him, gopi, and nick!!!! nick got what he deserved! also from the looks of it, he's not done yet!!! but i am happy our lovers are together. i am really loving ahem and gopi's trust in each other and the sense of security that has come in the relationship

overall, it was such a beautiful update, i love how everything is coming together for gopi and her family and gopi and ahem

waiting for the next one!! pls post sooon although this one was well worth the wait!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
A wonderful update Shilpa.
A lovely morning after scene.
Loved Ahem being there for her at every step of the way where it mattered. He is satisfying her at every level; be it dealing with relatives taunts to Nick to closing the gap with her father to appreciating her and loving her.
What a perfect day it was!
It would make a world of a difference to see this in the show.
Looking forward to the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW , that was wonderful... now I can come up for air. Great writing.
Posted: 13 years ago
nice update shilpa ben
do cont soonn :)
mwah!

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