Originally posted by: taniks
Fab update , I loved your Mr and Mrs Ahem Modi cos that is what they are in your story , a united couple who face their storms together depending on each other to get them thru together. Gopi is confident but not overly so ,she still needs her husband support in her life , ahem strong , capable but needs his wife to complete him.their relationship is multifaceted , their stance together in family life ,his business world and their private life is beautiful , this is wot saath nibhana saathiya is all abt , everything in this chapter just screamed one word to me and that is ' T0GETHER' a very impotant word in marriage.I loved that u gave her a backbone , the way she stood up to Nick not allowing him to demean her husband and belittle their relationship was lovely but for me the best part was ahem holding the thali to his wife silently proclaiming his support and her rights in this family and again together as blessed married couple handed the rings to other soon to be couples. Incredible how subletly yet forcefully the message of their togetherness was brought forth at that point. I knew it would be well worth the wait , I loved it can't wait for next chapter.
Thank you so much!
When I read your comment, I was stunned. When I started this FF, I really didn't know how the story would go, but I wanted to show that Gopi and Ahem were destined to be together, and I wanted to show a love story that would surpass all obstacles thrown in its path. I wanted to show two people who loved each other so much that, one is incomplete without the other, and would always be there for each other, no matter who or what was in their way. Your comments showed me that I have achieved my goal.
Thank you so much for giving me this wonderful feedback.
I will do my best to update soon.
Edited by sbp1971 - 13 years ago