FF:Ahams feelings for gopi LAST PART at pg 62

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

awesome chapter.. update soon :)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Wow, really loved ur story .plz do continue soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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this is a good fan fic, i like it.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

PART _15

gopi finally realizes she is trapped in ahams hand there is no go for a escape, so she finally decides to kiss aham , she asks aham to close his eyes, but aham goes naughty, and says hey u r going to kiss ur husband not someone else than y i need to close my eyes,.. gopi innocently sasys she is nervous, so she will kiss him only if he closes his eyes, and tries to push aham away from her, so aham thinks finally she agreed to give me a kiss if i pull her leg more, she may even change her mind than i may miss a oppurtunity to get a kiss from his wife, so he says to gopi okay baba u win, see i have closed my eyes , atleast now u can give me a kiss, and gopi nervously moves toward aham and aham will be awaiting gopis kiss and her approach, gopi confirms that aham could not see her and waves her hand near his eyes, aham wont feel her hands after totally confirming he could not see her, she moves towards the window and picks a rose from the vase and and places its soft petals on ahams lips, and aham feels something and suddenly open his eyes and could see gopi having a rose in her hand, aham catches gopis hand and says its cheating how could she cheat him, and demands a kiss , gopi in no mood to give him a kiss and they start fighting, aham says he want, gopi says no... in their yes, yes and no no conversation, parag modi enters ahams room and hears thier yes and no, parag calls aham beta what u need beta,,, aham goes naughty and tells him that he needs some work to be done by gopi but she is not willing to do the work, but he need the work to be done in mean time since its really necessary as it was suppose to be done from long time since he never thought of it before, he did not demand the work, but gopi is in no mood to do her duty,... and he keeps complaining to his father, parag gets fed up, and gopi will be scared and standing like a stone, and parag asks gopi to do as said by aham, when the work to be done is so important u need to support ur husband and advices thenm not to fight over smaal small things, and gopi nods her head, aham smiles over gopis reaction. aham asks his father did he need anything parag informs him that he will not be able to come for kinjals birthday party as he needs to leave for a kavi sammelan in a mean time and asks aham to wish kinjal and dhawal on his behalf , same time kokila too enters their room and sees aham and gopi are not yet ready for the party, and taunts gopi y did she is taking so much time to get ready as it is already too late, and everyone are waiting downstairs for their arrival, aham says soory mom i will be ready in 5 minutes, kokila asks him to get ready soon in the meantime she will leave parag to the door so both parag and kokila move out of the room.every one arrive to kinjals house except rashi, urmila will be waiting eagerly near the door to recieve her daughter, but in vain she could see glimpse of her daughter hetal and kokila observes the eagerness of urmila on her face, so hetal informs urmila that rashi was not feeling well so they asked her to take rest in house itself, urmila starts shouting maaro dikri what happened to her oh my takurji what should i do now, my only daughter is not feeling well and i am enjoying the party here, and urmila sees gopi, and she scolds gopi, saying when her elder sister is not well y she has come for a party , she could not stay in house and taken care of rashi, or could not she make a call and inform her regarding rashis health ,, how come gopi could be so careless of her daughter as she is not rashis own sister... and she starts taunting gopi, gopi will hae a tears form her eyes, kokila understands urmilas intension to spoil the party, and interrups urmila and ask her to calm down, and starts dont worry urmila ben ur daughter is absolutely fine, we asked her to do a simple household work but she got a stomach ache, so thinking that even i too have daughter i thought i will give a complete bed rest to rashi, as she is our daughter in law, do not worry about of ur daughter, mani is thier in the house to take care of rashi, there is no need for gopi to stay in the house, as for as to inform u regarding rashis health, my bahu gopi dont have the habit of making a phone bill of 4,000 rs per month, don not woory rashi will fulfill ur wish to make a call to inform regarding her health...as she is the most intelligent daughter who knows to take care of whole modi bhavan, and even her mothers house also,... urmis mouth will be wide open and jetu bhai asks kokila and whole modi family to come inside and get seated, kinjal will be very happy to see everyone , and she takes blessings form every one and gopi aham gifts a earrings, jigar gifts her a saree, kokila gifts her a kanaji idol. and chirag and hetal gifts her a anklets for kinjal, everyone will be happy in the house, dhawal will be extremely happy to see his wife laughing, urmila goes to kitchen and calls rashi, rashi picks the cll and blames kokila and hetal for her status and complaints that even jigarji did not support, and she is staying in the house like a old furniture everyone love and respects only gopi, not her its her fate what she should do... urmila gets angry on hearing these words from rashi and tells her not to worry she knows take a revenge on kokila for hurting her daughter ...

and cuts the call, everyone in the hall will be excited and kinjal cuts the cake and tries to feed kokila first but kokila makes her eye and directs kinjal feed dhawal first, kinjal sisheartedly feeds dhawal , he will be happy, and kinjal feeds rests of them... urmila will be very angry as she has ordered all the favorites eatables of rashi and she planned the beautiful party for her rashi not for choti kagdi... and she goes in to her room, and she sits on the bed , and thinks how can she enjoy the party when her lovable daughter is not thier, and she suddenly hears a voice near the window, and she could sense it is gopis voice, and goes near the window and sees aham and gopi together, and gopi planting a kiss on aham cheeks, and urmilas mouth will be wide open on seeing this her head will have a complete 360 degree, and she will be about to faint and asks thakurji is it a dream or a real,... and when she was about to fall, jetu bhai comes and holds urmila, and asks her what happend and asks her to take rest, urmila will be in subconscious mind and says, my dikri, what shall i do now, modi bhavan , maharani.,,, and faints on jetus arms, he pours some water on urmis face and she will come to consciousness and says hey maaro thakurji, jetu enquires what happened y she is murmering, urmis temper will raise and she will ask jetu to shut his mouth, jetu will ask urmi to come near the door as the modi pariwar is about to leave and goes out of the room and urmi follows him,

kinjal will be very happy regarding the party as it was arranged very nicely by urmi phayi, but she ordered all the food and even a cake which was not liked by her but any how all the arrangements were well planned and executed since phayi was not present in the party , and she will be seeing the gifts which are given by her brothers, dhawal will enter the room and he takes a gift box form his pocket and asks kinjal to accept it on his behalf as he wanted to give the gift when she was alone , kinjal thinks that any how the gift which will be gifted by her husband will not be worthy as himself is not worthy for anything, and she dislikingly takes the gift with a fake smile on her face and opens the box thinlikng that it will be any stupid item, and when she opens the gift box she could not believe her eyes it had a wrist watch one she wanted to purchase, when dhawal too her for a shopping in the shopping mall when they were newly married, but dhawal could not afford the gift at that time as he did not had enough of money, kinjal will be happy and tells dhawal it is really a very nice gift she always needed a wrist watch and she jumps and thanks dhawal, and she hugs him saying thank u thanu thank u thank u so much... dhawal will be on cloud nine...

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Edited by bhavya - 13 years ago