SS:Gopi's Mahabharat 16th update

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Posted: 14 years ago
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SS: Gopi's Mahabharat


This is the Story of Gopi,an illiterate girl with a heart of gold, and a soul of purity who overcomes her flaws, and punishes those who wronged her, and in the process reforms the wrongdoers

All the characters are the same, and the story is intact from may 31st, 2011. From then on the story shapes up differently.

Part 1 will be shortly coming.

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Part 1 pg1
Part 2 pg2
Part 3 pg2 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/saath-nibhaana-saathiya/1696151/ss-gopis-mahabharat-16th-update?pn=2
Part 4 pg3 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/43702958
Part 5 pg4 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/43810575

Part 6 pg 4 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/43849469

Part 7 pg 5 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/44073031

Part 8 pg5 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/44114299

Part 9 pg6 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/44753552

Part 10 pg6 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/44755548

Part 11 pg7 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/46297854

Part 12 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/49936528

Part 13 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/49990494

Part 14 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/50140140

Part 15 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/50145182

Part 16 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/50411173
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 1

Night sets in for Modis as they went off to get some sleep after Ahem's outburst. Gopi Vau instead of retreating to her room, sits in by the living room window looking at the full moon. She is deeply thinking over the past few days incidents where her elder sister Rashi ben had to face the brunt for the mistakes that apparently seemed to be created by Gopi herself. Gopi thinking to herself "I did everything correctly then how come everything goes wrong? Plus Rashi ben has get scolded because of me. And she tries to help me so much. I don't think that I will ever be able to win Ahemji's heart. I don't think that I worthy of being his equal half. Because of me, everyone is unhappy and getting upset. Ahem ji doesn't like me, and even Maa ji is in pain because of all this. rashi ben and Mamiji get trouble for me" With tears brimmng her eyes, Gopi vau had come to a conclusion, and had decided to do something that will be for the best of the Modi family.

As Gopi walks to her room she sees Ahem tranquil face and her resolve becomes stronger as she thinks "Not everyone gets the love, but does loving somene necessarily mean that you too will be loved by them? No it doesn't. Because love is selfless, and calls for sacrifice, and if you can't sacrifice, then you don't lknow the essence of love. But I will sacrifice for Ahemji's happiness. I'm not a khudgarz". Making a firm resolve Gopi Vau look at her Kanha ji, and went to sleep taking charge to return everyone's happiness back to them.

Edited by Hot_Indo_Chilly - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very good start. Please continue.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Liked the beginning and I'm curious to see where it goes. At the moment I'm thinking Gopi might leave MM.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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An awesome start love.
I loved it

I cant wait for more

Yuks
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Good start! Very real & true to Gopi's character!!!! The sacrificing fawn!👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it really very nice waiting for next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely start, great introduction to setting and waiting for next part eagerly.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2

Next Morning:

Modi Mansion wakes up with the daily aarti sung by their Gopi Vau. As they came down, they saw Mani filling up the dining table with a breakfast filled with a favorite dish of everyone. Enhancing the aroma of breakfast was Gopi's welcoming smile. After breakfast was cleared, Gopi went to Koki to discuss about lunch and other remaining chores. She in the meantime has neatly packed a few sarees, her Kanha ji, and the shagun money that was given along with the necklace taht Koki had once so bought with so much love for her. Gopi was not a materialistic person, but leaving the necklace behind would mean that she is leaving, returning her mother-in-law's love; and was one thing that she could not do. She carefully placed her bag hidden in the front lawn and went back to business as usual. After spending sometime massaging Baa's feet, she went to enquire if Koki and Hetal needed anything. As the day progressed, Gopi's resolve strenghtened as well. She knew very well what a Herculean task she had at hand. Even the evening dinner appeared to be a rich 5 star restaurant buffet. th ebuffet all the rich Gujrati dishes along with a few signature enhanced dishes of Gopi's like her special methi theplas. Gopi felt content seeing the smiles on everyone's face, and yes including Ahem as well. He just just kept a small smile which escaped his lips once in a while when he eyelocked with Gopi unintentionally.

As everyone retreated to their rooms,Gopi cleared up everything. She even dismissed Rashi and teased her to go spend time with Jigar. Rashi just gave a small forced smile hearing Jigar's name, and left been given the much sought after break that she wanted.

At night, when Gopi came in her room, she saw Ahem fast asleep. she took his photo out of the frame, and silently came out. As she going out she saw Kokila's room and peaked into it. there lay her parents-in-law who became her parents in a rightful sense. She did a pranam to them from far, and a few tear drops escapd her eyes knowing how much her saas had tried to patch things between Ahem and her.

Gopi made her way out of MM, and picked up her bag. She took a one last look at the house that was to be her home till her breathed her last breath, but alas destiny had other plans for her. Silently crying Gopi headed out on the road.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow ... Gopi taking care of everyones needs - so selfless as ever.
Update soon.

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