Ahams loss pt 7 on page 8 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
love your story its really good.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
Wonderful Suk. I just have one request that you make Ahem grovel!😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I just love it Suk, Aham has humbled himself now and Gopi has realised not to be Aham's doormat as he shits on her head and plays around with her affections, going to hotel with Anita, totally deserves this cold shoulder treatment.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34

That was great so far Suk. Keep it up!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
Aww i loved it! keep it up, hope to see more of Gohem in the next few updates, thanks for wondeful FF, looking forward in reading more of it.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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part 6


The next morning Aham wakes up he is stiff Gopi has been doing this for a year now, n not once she complained, how do I make it up to her, he gets ready n goes downstairs to do puja everyone was waiting for him his back hurt n his neck was stiff you could see he was in pain. Parag asked him dikra are you ok Aham smiled n says he is fine. After the puja Rashi served breakfast, jigar refused he didn't even look at rashi mummy n kaki I have a meeting to go to I will get breakfast there, Aham says jigar the meeting is later no bhai I have a meeting at the site I will meet you for that one in the office. Aham nods his head. Devar ji heres your dabba there is extra food for you. Gopi goes back into the kitchen, Aham finishes his breakfast , gopi comes with another dabba n gives it to him without saying anything. He smiles danavad Gopi. Gopi turns right back round n into the kitchen, Aham says jai shree Krishna to all n leaves.

Whilst driving in self thought what does Gopi like? Whats her favourite color ? what makes her happy? Then he remembers the holi day where gopi told him he looked really good when he smiles. From now on Aham modi you will smile more when you are at home, at the office he calls homes hetal answers, Aham dikra have you forgotten anything nahi kaki I just wanted to know then he hesitates, hetal know what dikra? What does gopi like, her favourite food, her favourite color her dislikes, dikra slow down hetals laughs one minute, Gopi dikra go n rest you have been busy all morning, ji kaki. Hetal answer Gopi loves simple things she loves to do part n puja, she loves all colors but I love to see her in red, that makes her look gorjus. Kaki can we do puja this week mom is getting well, n seeing we have had all this trouble we need to cleanse the house n ourselves, hetal says why not when do you want us to do it Aham, kaki in 2 days I will cancel all meetings for me kaka n jigar but kaki plse don't tell gopi I suggested it, tek che aham dikra.

Hetal goes to kokila n tells her that they shall have puja at the house in two days, kokila looks at her tek che, Gopi walks in kokila looks at her Gopi vahu we shall have puja for suk shanti at the house I shall tell rashi to help you ji maji. Hetal leaves to order groceries etc. Rashi walks in kaki I have done everything you asked me to do, tek che Rashi we are having puja in two days you will help gopi vahu prepare everything n gopi vahu I would like you to decorate the place we shall make it a special day. Gopi smiles.

All the preparations were done, hetal told aham to make sure the pandit was available he told hetal that kinjal was going to the mandir as they now lived near there so she would tell him. The day of the puja Aham woke up the same time as Gopi n went downstairs to help her, she started with the rangoli he looked at her watching her in amazement he didn't know she could do that, he also notice how much pride gopi took in doing her work. Hetal comes aham dikra what are you doing? Kaki the rangolis that were made the last time, aham dikra all gopi she designed n made them all. Aham smiles kaki can you help me I brought this sari can you give it to gopi but don't say anything a red n gold with white hetals gives it to gopi once she finished the decorations she went to get changed she looked gorjus stunning aham was taken back.

Everyone arrives rashi takes cares of the shoes n then gets everyone a drink of water, kinjal n dhawal arrive both laughing n talking they were teasing each other. Kokila looks at kinjal n welcomes n blesses her, Kokila goes over to hetal the pandit has not arrived, kokila don't worry aham has arranged everything, hetal calls aham dikra pandit? One minute kaki let me ask kinjal, kinjal wheres the pandit ? bhai I told dhawal ji to call him? Dhawal ji pandit what time is he coming ? kokila n gopi come over kinjal I forgot to tell you I did not meet the pandit, kinjal looks at him, kokila does not say anything n picks up phone n sees if pandit will come he tells her that he shall be there in 45 minutes to start the kartha without him, pandit ji how can we start without you? Kokila Gopi knows the kartha well so let her do it, I shall take over when I come ji jai shree Krishna, Gopi vahu you will start the kartha pandit shall be a bit late. Dhawal looks at kinjal n winks kinjal smiles.

Gopi starts the kartha, Aham stares at her delighted he heard her voice, he smiles Gopi notices him but then closes her eyes, the pandit came when the kartha was near to finish he does not say anything n lets gopi continue until the end. Pandit blesses her may god bless you n aham always he tells her, Gopi smiles Aham says pandit ji can you bless us one more time, pandit laughs.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
yippe me first to comment
read in one go
love it every bit
specialy how narrated 👏👏
what ahem did to gopi
love how gopi angry with
him not given so easy
beauitful updates
waitng for more
darling

thank-you-desi-glitters-36

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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
its soo good! please update soon! :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
Absolutely great Suk, wonderful update Aham appreciating Gopi's qualities and love the ending asking the punditji to bless them again.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
Loved it pleas continue soon can't wait for the next part😃

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