Ahams loss pt 7 on page 8 - Page 3

Wow ,...really nice...far far better than on screen drama:)

nyc nyc waitin for next part !!

Wonderful stuff! 👏

realy nice,can't wait for the next part

Nai nai. It is for us to say...

Oh Suk i am so loving reading every single word of this story. Revenge is sweet. I would LOVE to see Ahem cringe like this. You know what they say what goes around comes around (well everywhere else except this serial. In the show what goes around keeps going around and around... and oh yeah around 😡) LOVE IT!!!

Part 5

kokila in her room thinking, mota bhabi, chirag bhai n jigar why has she gone to her maikar? Gopi comes into the room , Maji your should be resting nahi gopi vahu, maji you called me gopi vahu, dikra you are my vahu n my daughter but you are still married to my farlal son. Maji can i say something ji Gopi vahu as soon as you are well i shall leave kokila looks at her how can you leave this is your house, maji it was my house yes i am married to aham ji but he wants someone else i cant live like this, i have dreams i want a husband to love me, have children of my own, one dream did come to true was to have parents n i got that with you n papa, kokila looks worried Maji dont worry i will be ok i have my kanaji. kokila puts her hand to her face n smiles, Hai Gopi vahu where is your sister Rashi? Maji i dont know each time i ask about her nobody says anything they say she is no longer welcomed here, Gopi call Rashi Maji i have tried but her phone is disconnected. Gopi give me the phone kokila dials the number urmila ben can i speak to Rashi? urmilla starts her ranting about how rashi was so good n this is what your family has done to her. kokila shouts urmilla BEN i want to talk to rashi. Rashi your phone its kokila modi, Rashi answer ji kokila says jai shree krishna rashi wont you say jai shree krishna kargri nahi kaki ji iwas just jokeing that day, what day rashi the day you first started to call me kargri or the day everyone heard you? Rashi i told you one day you will get your self in so much trouble that you will not get out of it, did i not, ji kaki ji. Rashi do you want to come back home ? ji kaki ji, tik che on one condition ji kaki you are never to see or hear from your mother until we say so. rashi thinks ji kakiji, kokila tells her be ready i will be coming to pick you up. Rashi says ji.

Kokila leaves mm but everyone was against it as they did not know where she was going so she tells them that gopi vahu knows n if you need to contact me tell gopi vahu she will call me.

kokila arrives at cm she looks up, Rashi standing by the door looking out, urmilla pleading with her but rashi not having any of it, kokila comes up Rashi says jai shree krishna to your mother because its going to be a long time before you see her and another thing do this for the right reason not the wrong dont do it as a kalakari as this crying that urmilla is doing is fake because the next time your come her it will be for good your choice. Ji kaki ji kaki ji i admit to all my kalakaris but i want my family back. jai shree krishna urmila ben , rashi looks at her mother jai shree krishna mummy look after yourself, urmilla started to cry n scream.

In the car kokila tells rashi nobody except gopi knows you are coming do as i say? dont answer back ji kaki ji. Rashi worried kokila looks at her i will ask what i asked Gopi vahu do you trust me ji kaki ji then follow my instructions.

At mm kokila walks in as she does hetal comes to her, kokila i was really worried about you mota bhabi i am ok then kokila says come in, as soon as she does rashi comes to the door , kokila what is this girl doing here? Mota bhabi I have brought her back home where she belongs, kokila she does not belong here, you don't know about half the things she has done , Mota bhabi I know everything n now rashi will tell you everything because for her to have a new life she needs to clear up her old. By then everyone was downstairs rashi starts off with the kalakaris at the house kokila stops her rashi no from the day I saw you n I chose Gopi vahu. Rashi starts with how she hated that she had lost to a uneducated girl she told about the roti. Gopi has tears in her eyes then kalakari after another all aimed at gopi her hatred for Gopi. Gopi looked at her and asked why? Rashi said it was suppose to be me marry aham I was suppose to be the older bahu. Jigar looks at her n walks towards the door kokila tells him stop, Jigar yes we know everything but let me ask you something fine you send rashi back to her maikar what next? Divorce I know that is not going to happen if a person admits to his or her mistake isn't it better we help them improve themselves n have them prove to us that they are ready to redeem themselves. Rashi will have to change firstly she will be doing all of gopis chores, then learn to cook n prove her self. Gopi who was in tears Gopi vahu you will teach your sister to cook n show how we like to do things in this house for her its day one. Jigar looks at kokila kaki I will do what you say but she will not be sleeping with me she can go to the guest room. Kokila says tik che gopi vahu you will move back in ahams room, Gopi looks shocked nahi maji, Gopi vahu its only till I get better n then you can go n live your life, Gopi says ji. Aham smiles. Rashi I don't want you to let me down otherwise I will not be coming back for you at all, ji kaki.

Gopi moves into Ahams room, Aham closes the door gopi we need to talk, Gopi looks at him yes Ahamji we need to talk but I will say what I need to say first, for me nothing changes, the things you did rashi did not tell you you did them, not anyone else as far as I am concerned I am only coming back into this bedroom because I don't want to upset maji that's all, Aham looks at Gopi plse I am already ashamed of what I did. Gopi is in no mood to listen she lies down on the floor n covers her head so not to see aham. Gopi I will sleep on the floor you can sleep on the bed, she does not answer next morning Gopi wakes up to see Aham sleeping next to her on the floor.

:) goood...ur story is very good...