Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms
Wow, so many good points, I knew I would like it when you made Rashi cry too, because Parag reminded her of Jigar, I loved Kinjal consoling her mother, but most of all, i'm happy for Parag to get his dream, recognition in his poetry field but also respect and love from his family (because I feel this is lacking for him, from his own children and wife), especially as you started out the story explaining how disjointed the immediate family of Parag's was, that they all did they own thing without a care for each other needs, the disappearance of Parag definitely united them and hopefully they stay as one unit in the future, being considerate of each other's feelings, as Kokila's realisation brought home to her all the cruel things she had done to Parag.
Well done Eli. đThanks Nafisa! for your feedback. I loved the way u put across your thoughts. A writer needs appreciation as well as positive criticism to improve. i loved your take on the writing. I always have feelings for all underdogs People like Parag, Gopi etc. I'm like a mother trying to protect them.
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