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avivakirk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Jake-neil
Athenthayalum pokum. sookshicho, aduthane avalude puthiya FF purathirangum🤣

Ayo Jhaan entho cheyum🤣Sradhicho ende parai kathayila vakugal ubayokinthe?

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Rafeal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

mikavarum avalu ee katha vere ethenkilum couples-inte peril irrakum😉

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avivakirk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Jake-neil
mikavarum avalu ee katha vere ethenkilum couples-inte peril irrakum😉

Sheriya! jhaan mindathe cherikum@

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Simibrar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

👏 Nice story show the feelings of prag modi..very nice 👏 awesome..👍🏼

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simran15

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

@Liz chechi...tat was an awesome update...u left us to imagine the romantic interlude btw Kokila n Parag...r u going to continue...😊.

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kavya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

that was amazing...its really nice to read different story...and the last part was very nice...

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avivakirk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: simibrar1990
👏 Nice story show the feelings of prag modi..very nice 👏 awesome..👍🏼

Thanks Simi!

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avivakirk

@avivakirk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: simran15
@Liz chechi...tat was an awesome update...u left us to imagine the romantic interlude btw Kokila n Parag...r u going to continue...😊.

Simran,

Creativity has to strike me. I need some more time. Thnks fo rthe encouragement.

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avivakirk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: kav88
that was amazing...its really nice to read different story...and the last part was very nice...

Thanks Kavita for the encouraging words.

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-Nafisa-

@-Nafisa-

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Wow, so many good points, I knew I would like it when you made Rashi cry too, because Parag reminded her of Jigar, I loved Kinjal consoling her mother, but most of all, i'm happy for Parag to get his dream, recognition in his poetry field but also respect and love from his family (because I feel this is lacking for him, from his own children and wife), especially as you started out the story explaining how disjointed the immediate family of Parag's was, that they all did they own thing without a care for each other needs, the disappearance of Parag definitely united them and hopefully they stay as one unit in the future, being considerate of each other's feelings, as Kokila's realisation brought home to her all the cruel things she had done to Parag.

Well done Eli. 👏

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