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Posted: 14 years ago
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All fanfics and oneshots which i have been written with my own knowledge - this is solely my work and no one can recreate or copy my work without permission

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Part 1 -

Nani has left the house after telling koki to bring Gopi and aehem close as there is not a single love between them. Koki was annoyed, she had to do something. She recollects that their anniversary is in a week so she told Chirag and Parag to book tickets to Swtizerland for both couple. But in different cities. She knew she had to go as well, so chirag insisited her to go as she very well knows Aehem attitude.

Nani leaves the house and at home koki speaks up: "mother has left the house. She came to this house, and gopi that day came back from her pihar bacause of nani, now nani has left, Gopi will not leave this house, especially you Aehem listen to this, no matter what you say, how much you insist Gopi will not leave the house as your under my oath".

Aehem who was shocked, he thought and again thought it was ridiculas a gavar with him again, not leaving his shadow alone, "argh God" he thought of, Anita had married, but what can he do, he can't fall for a girl he doesn't like one bit, especially when she had embarrassed him a lot so many times in front of people and on that day when his office staff came, rashi had got a cake from outside and switched it with Gopi, Rashi put poison in it, thank god he saw that, but still he was ashamed of a gavar like her, He knew he was expecting much from her, but had to know her so he can know what difficulty she had been through because of rashi.

He was shaking, "yuk" he thought, he hated getting close to girls for sure, they were cunning, just after anita had left and how he saw her true nature. He felt like vomiting, felt like smacking himself of what decision he had took. Up he goes to his room, runs into the washroom and vomits heavily in the sink, how can he even think of her. He knew he was falling for that unpar but what can he do, his mother was already trying to bring them close, "eek "he thought," eek, bad thinking, stop" it he thought.

Gopi comes in the room and sees his laptop on the desk, picks it up and puts it on the table, and he caught her: now what are you doing, last time you washed it, now put it in the washing machine, don't touch my things, leave it where they are, can't you understand a small thing of mines'

He hurt her ' oh no, what am I doing, eek not again, bad thinking " he shook his head and picked his laptop and sat on his rocky couch, and started to work. He stopped and saw her hurt: he folded his hands: 'Gopi ji can you please, do your work and leave". He did not know Koki and Rashi was looking outside who had joined hands to bring them together, they were shocked to see how bad their relationship was.

They knew that sending to a world of romance place-Switzerland was the right thing to send them in a week time. Gopi ran outside and saw both rashi-koki standing there and hugged Rashi, and cried her heart out. Aehem had gone to sleep, while Gopi tidied the kitchen with the help of Rashi and went to their rooms and slept.

The next day, the Modi house woke up and came down. Aehem has come back from jogging as usual, in his blue and black track suit and sits down in the hall. Mani brings him water, but koki interrupts and says to Gopi to give it to him. He shook his head and thought: not again, eek, why does she even show me her face, with putting a pallu on her face, will not make her face hide from me.

She gave him water and he spoke: whats the use putting a pallu on and hiding your face, did I ever tell you to wear it then, take it off. Gopi stepped 3 feet back and looked at him an a surprised way with all the members of the family looking at him, with a surprised face. Koki and Rashi eye locked and smirked.

Jigar looked at Rashi and spoke:Kitani shiddat se tumhe pane ki koshish ki hain, ki har zarre ne tumse milane ki saazish ki hain.

Rashi got embarrassed and went up to Gopi and spoke: Gopi, did I not tell you, let me take it off, and come with me, ill fix your hair, why did you change it to your old form, we loved your new style, from now on you will keep it that way.

They went up and rashi sorted her hair, while downstairs: aehem put his face in his hand and spoke: what the hell, what did I just do, eek, with that gavar, I just communicated, damn"Jigar repeated the words and laughed out, and started to crack jokes. Aehem looked at him and chased him after, with a vase in his hand, as he was annoying him.


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i dunno what u all thought of after reading this part, but hope you all enjoyed it, and do comment.


Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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ayesha your new ff looks different than previous one
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Yes shoiab, I started this one, the previous one was a short ff. How did u like this one ?
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I liked this one better. Good job! Continue!
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realy nice Ff pleas Continue :D

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