Hey SNS-IANS i'm writing a ff for the first time hope u guys like it and do tell me what i should fix and what changes i should make...please do leave comments...
It was a stormy night and Gopi was walking down the road thinking to herself Ahemji why couldn't u ever recognize my love for u instead of looking apoun me being uneducated and modernized. I bared all your scoldings and hatred so one day you will forget ur past and accept me, but didn't know that was just a waste of time. But i had enough i am human being i have feelings to but i wont take it anymore and i have decided to leave u and never ever come back to u ahemji...i mean ahem modi... while gopi is thinking all this in her mind on the other side we see ahem thinking about Gopi...Ahem to himself thank god she is gone i couldn't stand her one bit but even she is gone why am i not happy when i'm suppose to be happy? what has happened to me why do i feel at guilt why... the scene is back to gopi walking.while gopi is walking the weather gets really bad and its raining hard and Gopi thinks where will i go now? i cant go back to mama's house cause woh kadoos mami muje servent ki tara rakh thi hai...then where should i go? then we suddenly see bunch of drunk goons looking at Gopi and commenting on her.Gopi tries to avoid them but the Goons start following her and poor gopi tries to escape by running but she is unable to cause the weather was really bad and suddenly the goons surround her...She tries to get away but one of the goons pull off her dupatta. On the other side we see ahem in his room thinking and missing gopi...In ahem's room. Ahem to himself although she was not my pasand she was very kind she was always caring for my family and me.I shouldn't have been that rude to her...why did i slap her and treat her bad...while he is thinking that he feels as if something bad is happening and says Gopi i wish u were here i really miss u i wish i could bring back u but how do i face u...thinking this Ahem decide's to lie down on his bed... On the other side we see gopi trying to escape with some hardship and manages to escape and run but while she is running she falls down and the goons are near her but gopi runs to the forest so she can hide but to as her kismat has not been lucky enough for her the goons spot her and poor gopi again is stuck with the goons and this time the goons come and cover her mouth and pick her up and take her to a small old cottage and lock her in and make gopi lie down on the bed and gopi is pleading the to let her go but the goons dont pay attention to her and one of the goons takes off her manglustra and says u wont need this ever again after tonight and the gopi says please leave me alone and screams Ahem ji muje picho(help me)...On the other side we see ahem sleeping and wakes up and he feels as if gopi is in trouble
Will gopi be able to escape or will there be something else in gopi's fate? will ahem realize his love for gopi and bring back her home? well for that u have to wait for the second part
Sorry guys u have to wait for the rest as my laptop battery is dieing...will continue a.s.a.p
Edited by boparaisonia - 14 years ago