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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 143badra

😳 "ek kya kaam thi(looking at kokila) ki dosiri aa gayi" -- fab statement

but Ahem gave her a "are u talking to me" look -- loved this one .. wish to see this in the real serial

loved the scene btwn Gopi and Aham in the us ... omg ... it was so adorable 😳 -- finally Aham gets wht Kokila said ...

"Mummy i dont have any money to give, u shop with ur own money" "Arrey, u are a modi's DIL and u dont have any money to spare on ur poor mother." "Mummy try to understand, jigarji is working very hard for this money and i dont want to waste it on these useless items. I know these are pretty but still what the need i have with them. When i want anything desperate i wil buy it, no need of anything for me now" ... wa Rashi tho bahut samajar nikali ...

interactions btwn Aham and Rashi are fab ...

"Ji gopiji" -- i love to hear this ... oh its just so 😳

"oh sorry, ahemjiju handle with care k" -- now this statement is great ... it gives the idea tht she is a porcelain doll and Aham her owner

I like this Aham a lot (or should i tell ur Aham😉) ... he is such a sweet heart and so romantic😳 ...

finally jijar's confusion is over ... omg wht will jijar do to get back for the all the tricks tht she played on him😆 ???????????????


as always fabulous update ... after reading it .. my heart is yearning for more ...

u have left us with so much of questions ... my head is spinning at the moment ...

i will let u do the thinking as i have no intention of loosing my mind until u finish the story 😉

hope Urmila's plans backfire doing her damage or else making Aham and Gopi come closerrr 😉..

Looking forward to read a lot of Gopi and Aham scenes ... 😳

"Get ready for a twist and a shock" -- now this statement confuses me a lot ... omg wht are u upto 😉 ... as u said tht u will end all the shocks -- waiting desperately for the next update ...


- - badra


first of all a big applause for u for such a wonderful comment👏

what a analysis u did with the part. All the dialouges u have highlighted are my favourite too

mostly the ahem giving her "are u talking to me" and the starting dialouge about koki are my

evergreen favrouite. Rashi is responsible now away from her mother and looking for her husband .

Ahem wil the more romantic and as usual hot headed. Yes it true, gopi is really a glass doll

easily breakable. She really looks like so. jigar is defienetly in a mood for revenge. wait and watch what wil he do.

ha ha i know so much questions and dont worry all the answeres wil be answered in the next update.

my mind got tired too plotting and should get a new mind for jigar plotting.

there really a shock coming and a twist in story too wait and watch

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Bloem123

Realy good Update!😃

thank u

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

hi dear, i wont tell about urmi plan for now, it wil spoil the suspense u know but u can guess it by reading the part carefully.

Yes jigar is set to revenge mode from rashi modi so have to watch how the two wil save themselves.

ha ha i love too when urmi gets foiled he he



i hope urmi wont make Gopi as a thief by putting that necklace (the one Gopi n Kinjal liked) in Gopi's bag...even if urmi does that i want Ahem to trust Gopi n solve it...

im so eager for the next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shajnaii



i hope urmi wont make Gopi as a thief by putting that necklace (the one Gopi n Kinjal liked) in Gopi's bag...even if urmi does that i want Ahem to trust Gopi n solve it...

im so eager for the next part.

it wil come on friday for sure or before it. u wil be surprised.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

first of all a big applause for u for such a wonderful comment👏

what a analysis u did with the part. All the dialouges u have highlighted are my favourite too

mostly the ahem giving her "are u talking to me" and the starting dialouge about koki are my

evergreen favrouite. Rashi is responsible now away from her mother and looking for her husband .

Ahem wil the more romantic and as usual hot headed. Yes it true, gopi is really a glass doll

easily breakable. She really looks like so. jigar is defienetly in a mood for revenge. wait and watch what wil he do.

ha ha i know so much questions and dont worry all the answeres wil be answered in the next update.

my mind got tired too plotting and should get a new mind for jigar plotting.

there really a shock coming and a twist in story too wait and watch


i am trilled 😊that u loved my comments and thanx for the applause dr 😃...

u have done a fab job thus i had no choice but to post a nice comment 😆... did i have another option i donot think so😉 ...

true ... Gopi do look like a glass doll and i always feel tht she might break any moment 😉... Hope Aham will be there in case she breaks 😆...

I think i love ur Aham more because he is romantic😳(such a sweet heart) + hot headed too ... Aham being a hothead do add to his charms ... 😉

rest ur brain a little and plot well 😉... waiting for the next update ...

shock and twist have officially become my favorite words ..lol😆



- - badra

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Posted: 14 years ago
hi I m first time commenting on some story but ur story is so great that i m not able to resist my self from giving my assumptions So I think urmilla will try something with gopi's ijjat bcoz aham only get mad when he see her with some other man but i want urmilla to try something like that and aham trust gopi without gopi explaning anything to him that would be great and i think the biggest shock u r going to give is that kokila planned everything to realise aham that he rules gopi rather than understanding her.
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Posted: 14 years ago
i'm loving aham-rashi's interactions...finally jigar realised the truth...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi! I'm commenting on this story for the 1st time..actually my best friend @143badra was the one who used to copy the update on a word doc n make me read it..n eventually i was so addicted that i started reading it all by myself!😳
just first of all wanna say that i loveee the entire story so far!! its beautifully written! i can sometimes imagine it in my head..
n this update too is simply beautiful..n i like the fact that u used Kokila saying to Aham that he now can understand her up to a certain extent but not fully..nor can he console her yet..i picked this up cz here i feel u r using Koki to convey what(frustration or anything else) we readers/ fans actually feel towards Aham n Gopi..that Aham can't just say sorry n everything will be rosy n happy for him with Gopi..its nice to see that he can't jst erase what has happened throughout his marriage until then just by a few sweet moments..so it was very important to make him realize that he hardly knows her yet n to give more value her thoughts n feelings..

hmm..im feeling worried for Gopi..but well hopefully whatever happens simply solidifies Aham's feeling towards Gopi n he ends up defending n taking care of her..in other words truly beginning to be the Saathiya who will stand beside her n give her strength to face anything which will be the culmination of the actual title of the show!😍

on a lighter note, i love this new Rashi n Aham!! haha specially Rashi's playful attitude..cz i really do feel she has the potential to be really funny in the actual story too!grt that u have utilized that aspect of her character..love reading jija-sali interactions!😆
u really have a great flair at writing!
im sooo waiting to know the rest of the story!
Edited by princessunara - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww lovely my dear...😳
keep it up...👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
This part was really nice and mindblowing.
Loved that Jigar finally understood that Rashi has changed and Ahem realised he needs to work very hard to gain Gopi completely by supporting her. Just worried wat urmila will do . and all the best for Jigar, it wld be fun to read wat he plans against them.👍🏼
keep writing more.
Raunika

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