FF:Milan/part34(Last part!)-pg143 - Page 101

😉Hi dr .. so did u miss me .. bet u did ... after all i am me na😉 .. i know i shouldnt flatter my self by self praising wht can do hun .. couldnt stop myself -- pls take ur own sweet time to read it .. sorry it is longer than i expected ... 😆

so here goes my comment ... i have already asked for forgiveness for the late comment and i'm here to fulfil my end of the deal

so let me start with pt 30 - - i had to read this all over again to properly comment .. i can remember pieces but cannt specifically pinpoint the exact stuff ... too much rubbish has been in my head for 2 whole weeks so think it is contaminated .. see wht a sweet torture is it to read it again before i even read the rest as i didnt even glimpse at them ..but i think i know pretty much thanx to su .. thing i do for u😉 btw i am commenting while reading thus it might sound a bit weird as all my question will be answered by ur following updates ...

anyways here it goes ...

pt 30-1

god i am glad tht Urmila got caught .. rather exposed in front of the entire modi family excluding Gopi dearest of course .. the way koki argued or rather reason with urmila was fab ... u fit her at all the right places .. of course nt literally😉 .. dont get me wrong .. i would have love tht too ... god the conversation and all the points highlighted are fab .. it seems to bring back so much memories of the story .. may be sad ones .. but tht torture at the begining was worth when looking back as it was the foundation for such loving conclusion .. barabar hai na

i am enjoying the part again .. wow it is so good to see all hell broke on urmila ... this is like music to my ears ..

hope she get a dose of this in the real serial too .. CV must add this ... na-insaf ka koi toh had hone chahiye na ...

pt 30-2

the way u express how urmila distorted both rashi and gopi's lives is amazing .. it has been balanced perfectly ...

it is true that only urmila and no-one else is responsible for the way they are ... Gopi and rashi would have been total different people without urmila's influence ... after all values are wht makes who u are .. thtz why they when u are born u arent either good or bad .. wht u do makes u either ... nurture will definitely affect the way u are ... urmila is a bad influence on anyone of a burden to the world ...

urmila did defend herself her as usual by blaming on other .. but she did have point ... what was fab was the SLAP .. dos i thought was it Aham ... just for a sec .. lucky thing it wasnt Aham and it was her husband .. if it was Aham she would have brought down the house by just yelling ...

finally jitu's bhai ka koi tho kaam agaya .. or else he wass no talk and no work ... person .. thanx for putting some scene into him ... shaina .. hope tht SLAP put some sence into tht dracula .. it is unlikely though ...

pt 30-3

It was nice to hear/ read all apologizing ... putting themselves out there must have been tough .. right 😆.. U know i was starting to think whether jitu bhai couldnt speak ... put u did put a stop to my thinking😉 ..

wow it was a heart felt apology and great advice from jitu bahi to rashi .. if only he had taken the extra effort to make her understand before she messed up everything .. bot i guess then we will nt have a story .. right ..

loved the way dawal supported rashi in her decision to be away from the Dracula ...

wow wht a conversation btwn jitu bhai and rashi .. if he had said this before it would have ended a lot of problems .. but i guess if it happened we want have a story ..

but it was better late than never ...

wow the way Gopi smiled when she said she is happy wou;d have been divined right ..

i always want to rashi to hate urmila for who she is .. but i know it is nt fair as wht ever she is she is her mother afterall .. u have done justice to her feelings too .. the way she ran to her room crying was something tht i would have never thought of .. may be i lack sympathy ..

wow wht a emotional part yaar ... how do u do it ... i wonder ..

pt 30-4

love the way rashi reacts yaar .. she doesnt blame anyone .. she blames herself .. tht is a huge accomplishment .. she is no more the same rashi tht we used to know and she proved herself again .. and i am loving ur rashi ...

love ur jijar too ... wow wht a sweet heart he is .. understanding , kind and lovable .. perfect husband material ...

hetal is being herself .. she is also such a sweet heart .. she maynt be kokila but a wonderful MIL .. one should be dam lucky to get a MIL like her

Aham .. has turn to be such a caring and lovable person na ... wow he is sweet and regretting his actions .. love him ..

love the part he realized tht it is high time he bends his wishes to suite her and nt vice versa ...

wow .. it was fab .. the hug / embrace the realization .. . Aham crying .. perfect .. concerned gopi and an emotional Aham ... wht a combination yaar .. Aham placing his head on a lap is one of the many scenes tht i would love to witness on screen ... god it would be fab na ...

"i really tortured u right!" Ahem spoke after what it seems like eternity. Gopi expected a lot but not this question. "Ahemji what are u saying?" But he dint seem to listen to her. He was in his own world "discarded u, slapped u, insulted u, throwed u out, never even once looked at u, not even once considered u as a human being. What if u were an illitretae, u dint want to be one right, nobody wants to be one, then why couldnt i saw it before." Ahem sat up abruptly "why doesnt anyone told me what i was doing was wrong? why dint no one punished me? Why does everyone expect that i wil leave u out someday? why everyone tries to protect u from me? Why everyone thinks that they can turn me against u easily? why nobody have any faith in me?" -- wow why a para .. so much of question .. poor fellow is suffering so much .. and gopi's reply was even better .. it had so much meaning in it ...

hugs were just icing on the cake ...

well we will see how Aham proves himself ... "He wil prove that the once heartless ahem modi can be a ideal husband too. He wil show to people that ahem modi not only knows how to demand, he knows how to give in too."

"But what Ahem Modi dint know that the promise which he made himself was going to be a real tough one" -- i will find out wht u mean by reading ur next update hun

finally one down and three to go😉 ...

now here i go again .. pt 31 .. didnt read this before .. excited ...

pt 31-1

no use telling nt to keep expectations ... fyi info i have high expectation especially from u ...

wow .. wht a start yaar .. honeymoon seems to be a battle field .. i wounder wht the bed would field like .. a football pitch😉 ...

poor Aham yaar ... why are u torturing the guy ... ok i guess he deserves it ... he did bring it upon him .. it would be fun to see Aham non-demanding and in self control ...

wow .. dr i cannt stop laughing here .. god Gopi and Rashi are fab .. poor fellows .. Gopi is been her typical self over-caring ... to top it all Rashi has turned into a Gopi .. these 2 ladies are driving the poor fellows crazy ...

Jijar as usual cannt do anything .. but Aham had to control himself ... both are so helpless ...

Aham shoting was fun .. he must have been furious to lase his cool ... but it is amazing to see Aham has stayed in control for over 25 mins ... dikra bohot improve huwa he ... yet it up ..😉

Aham calling her Gopiji ... wow love tht .. it was so sweet of Aham .. i thought tht he will carry her and make her sit in the front seat and put the seat belt and close the door then say jai sri krishan to the rest .. the other couple in the backseat ... i forgot about the driver though😆

wow Aham do still have control one look and rashi is back on track ... i guess being the elder bro Aham has to

oh gos i wanted gopi to tell "Aham now who is talking" guess it is too soon for tht ... well i am ready to wait until tht 😉...

"Gopiji do u know that this plane may collapse during its journey and we all may die" -- god Aham is unbelievable dr ... i bet he had his own selfish reason ... nt bad Gopi is on to Aham's tricks .. nt bad at all ... they say tht when u stay with a person for long their ways do rub on u .. guess it was unavoidable dr ...

arre rashi is fab .. she is so childish ... u have brought out the real rashi i think .. she is even better than gopi .. i suppose ... oh i see i was wrong .. jijar know how to control her too 😉.. nt bad at all ... i guess sweet torture is more appropriate for her ... rashi blushing ... reminds me of tht hand scene in the serial ..

oh he told her gopiji .. i totally forgot tht she noted it last time .. wow .. afteralll gopi is suppose to have a great memory ... so it isnt any problem of forgetting .. impressive

omg .. i cannot stop laughing .. wht a sweet scene .. god Aham is unbelievable .. so so sweet .. and Gopi hunny have no chance against him for sure .. wow wht a conversation ..Shiana u are too god hun .. Gopi did get it this time .. Aham is un-defeatable .. btw who needs to defeat such a lovoing hubby .. nt me 😉

pt 31-2

impressive ... i didnt think that gopi will take it to heart .. my bad just like Aham i forgot tht u were talking ahout the gopi .. her world begin and end with Ahamji ...

"dont even think that u can leave me. we wil be together always even in the death too. Dont ever think u are my bad luck gopi, u are my angel in my life and there no life for me without my angel." - - so sweet i am last dr ... he calls her .. her angle ... su did tell me something about an angle and then she just shut up .. now i know wht she meant ...

jijar knows his wife more than i thought ... impressive dr ... love the way u are handling and the story is progressing in a highly planned manner ... knowingly or unknowingly u are doing a fab job .. in filling in all the gaps .. 👏 .. sordar thaliya (i hope tht wht u call .. for round of applause) ..lol

god sali and jiju ka coupling toh superb .. they are wonderful .. fighting for fun .. i was starting to feeling it was for real though i did enjoy the bickering ... nt only gopi and jijar .. even i got the same feeling those 2 are unpredictable and complicated beings .. god bless Gopi and Jijar .. they are suppose to put up with both ... lol

arre wa Aham tho bohot romantic nikala .. 👏 kissing on a such a romantic place wow .. u are too romantic yaar .. i am blushing here ... it would be so good to be in ur prince charming's arms and god .. i am dreaming😳😊 .. and it is all ur fault😉😆...

god dr .. it is so hot here .. inspite of the heavy rain ... ur story i affecting my good scenes ... loved it .. i have a feeling tht i will be blushing whole day while reading the rest ... i should prepare myself for the upcoming tidal wave .. 😆

pt 31-3

Shopping .. well see wht u have in store for me .. wow .. Aham would do anything to see a smile .. nt bad ..

Rashi does have a point ..concerning the dress of course ...

Aham isnt demanding anymore .. though it would have been splendid to see her in a modern dress ... more than tht seeing the effect tht it would have on Aham ... will see whether she dresses herself in modern clothes or nt ... journey just began na .. and u are becoming more unpredictable by the second dr ... so it is safe to cross my fingers ..

wow rashi and jijar .. are finally respecting each others feelings ...

oh the chocolate incident is fab ... i could just see it in front of my eyes ... so innocent and romantic at the same time ...

wow the couples are getting seperated .. wonder wht will happen .. is this the twist u were talking about or have i to read more to find out ... Aham agreed to seperate .. of course he would .. separating from them means Aham will have more of Gopi right 😉 ... he might have his own wicked plans in the business mind of his ...

wow sweet jijar ... so he wanted to make rashi's dream come true ... impressive .. and the funny part is Rashi seems to know more about Aham than the other 2 who are suppose to know him inside out .. well i guess Rashi an d Aham are made from the similar mold .. sure they are different .. but nows each others very well ...😳😉

arre wa rashi .. i never thought they play card of all games on a honeymoon ... may be strip poker .. cards on honeymoon .. u are unbelievable dr,,,, wht made u think of cards .😉.. 👏

oh this is better than strip poker ... dare .. wow ... jijar toh gaya kamse ... Rashi and Aham are thinking from one brain i guess they both ... oh god Aham and rashi aka jija or sali ka coupling toh kamal hai ... they are playing gopi and jijar ... poor guys ..

guys are caught ... "CHup kar, bhabhi ke chamche!" this was so funny i cannot stop laughing .. so i think we can imagin gopi in the dress in the next part .. i was wondering

wow .. wonderful advice .. this means i ccan expect so much in the next update .. right ... now will start to read the next pt

here goes pt 32

pt 32-1

oh wonder wht Aham and Rahi are planning for .. Gopi and jijar arent unaware as before .. they are feeling something is cooking .. tht is an achievement i guess ..lol

oh the dream sequence .. become a reality ... wow wht a scene tht was .. perfect chemistry ...

wow gopi and jijar are helpless ... wonderful .. sali and jiju toh mind-blowing ... and Gopi arguing with Aham and the most sweetest pt is where he says he like it .. and as usual the remarkable blush😳 .. rashi .. nicely justifies cheating wow .. we are generous people .. u are too good dr .. rashi seems to be pressing all the right buttons today .. poor jijar bechara toh gaya kamse ...

omg dr .. the sledge scene was mind-blowing ... it was way way beyond tht in the serial .. itz in a whole another level ... so cute and romantic ... and snow laddu .. nice one

wow .. rashi scared tht is fun .. jijar and rashi parts are cute .. and rashi is becoming more and more funny ...

wow wht a realization .. i should match my wife .. banda toh bahut balayage hai ...

"kya biwi hai!!" -- yaar are u planning to kill me by making be laugh this much ... so sweet dr ..wow Gopi and the camera .. u could write an entire OS on tht just like su did with the lappi ... there is a sinhala saying -- i directly translated into english dont whether it sounds correct or nt .. "knief in the hands of a monkey" .. bandarki hath me chacu .. u guys call it nariyal i suppose

pt 32-2

arre was even jijar feels tht Aham and Rasi are in the same boat .. jijar ko pitwaneka irada hai kya ...

anne Gopi is so sweet yaar .. she is so innocent and childish ... she have been deprived of her childhood and it is wonderful to see Aham's actions are making her experience all the lost times ... and he scolds her like she is a kid and nt his wife ...

god u gave me a fright ... i thought Rashi was truluy mad and jijar a goner ... she's just teasing ... unbelievable yaar ...

oh wow .. 😳 .. jijar is having his dinner ..so wht abot Rashi yaar .. is she too having dinner ... 😉 hope so .. kambak blanket ... or else the stupid lights ... 😉😆

oh god .. i am so exsited .. gopi is going wearing the dress .. wish Aham doent get a heart attack ...

"Bewakoof kahiki!" - - is he mad because she wore the dress or for the fact tht she couldnt think tht he would love to see her in the dress .. and rashi had to think for her .. i think it is the second reaon .. will see wht u have done nextt ..

wow want a scene ... how do u do it yaar .. tht was so toucy .. i almost cried ... so sweet ... realization of love sounds really nice yaar ,,,

pt 32-3

wow yaar tht is good too good as always the light ... i am nt blaming u here ... and dont want to go int any further detail in this matter😳😆 .. less i talk the better ...

wow .. they have sealed the deal i guess ... i think why Gopi loves Aham's nose is as ... Akam ka gussa kar waqt uska nake me rahatha hai .. issliye ...😉 .. barabar hai na

and Aham is very very naughty ... god love it .. btw i was correct about why gopi love his nose .. and wht a scene ... i am sweating over here ... 😳😆

arre wa rashi toh kamal hai .. jealously always so the trick ... 😳😉

pt 32-4

wow .. the height scene reminds me of the serial ... but your version is sweet and better ... as her Aham is in love ...

Rashiben ... Aham is so possessive yaar ... oh .. Gopi is confused .. again .. she always seems to be confused ... wow .. wonderful conversation yaar Aham the dragon .. he did give gopi a rehearsal of how a dragon acts .. wonder wht will he do to show him being a dracula ,,, 👏👏👏

the most hilarious pt is the way rashi lets i will kill u ... "that gopi ki bachi, i wil kill her for sure" "then u are really dead" "rashiben"

wow dr .. this part was amazing .. never thought Gopi and jijar would think tht would would have had if those 2 married each other .. u have nicely pointed out it would have been one hell of a disaster .. all hell would have broken out ... love when Aham and Rashi fights .. they rock ..

wow .. wish tht Aham get a daughter and a son .. daughter having Aham's characters but beautiful as Gopi and Son having gopi's character but handsome as Aham ... su was telling this too ... and also Aham will adore the girl ofcourse .. he being found of Gopi so much .. and he can see how he behave through her daughter ... will be fun

finally😉 i have only 0ne more to go ...

pt 33-1

wow .. Rashi found a mum in hetal ... i always thought tht only Gopi needed a mum .. bot i was wrong .. Rashi too needed a mum and she does deserve or rather earned it ... lovly scene dr ... god i wonder how these 2 will handle parenthood .. they are worse than kids ... hope they grow out of it by time😉😳...

i have said this before but will say it again .. god love the sali jiju combination the most .. i think even more than GoHem and Raji ..

"Ahemji, u too have to do something" -- this suggest their relationship has improved a lot .. right .. wow tht is great news .. finally gopi feel confident enough to stand along side with Aham ... she is truly Gopi Aham Modi .. nt gopi ...

wow Koki's life is also settled .. u are closing all the loop holes i guess .. it was wonderful the emotional content/baggage was in deed heavy ... they small gesture of Gopi was sweet ...

oh my god ... they were planning in surprising them but did get a shock instead ... afterall they are their parents .. and they should be one step ahead of them always ..

it was really nice the way the old generation hands over everything to the next generation .. along with heart felt blessings and also with advices ...

pt 33-2

wow ... holi nice idea ... well Jijar and Rashi have surly out of their mind sno doubt on tht ..

Gopi know wht she did last holi .. nice .. snd i am wondering wht will happen next

Aham missing .. interesting ...

wow .. nice job by rashi .. a great actresses as always .. a concern Aham is easy to manipulate ... oh those 2 are always bickering .. it is fun though ..Rashi is playing Aham nicely ..

Urmila is back and well hope she is a changed person ... nope urmila is still the same .. they say even though the tiger changes the forest his spots(ones on his body) stays the same ...

wow finally Aham gets the urge to play holi .. how to ???

pt 33-3

wow wonderful .. Aham plays holi and tht too by tricking his naive wife .. nt bad at all Aha dikra .. nt bad at all ..

Bang last time did a great job .. tht was when Aham even didnt like gopi .. wow wht will happen .. this yr ..

wht will really happen if urmila drinks it by mistake ???? wht will she do ...

god both the DILs are talli ... wow now the fun begins i suppose ... wow the guys are in trouble .. they have to handle their respective partners ... locking them up is the best option ... god the wives are driving them nuts .. poor fellows ...

pt 33-4

wow .. karva chauth ..already ... jijar and rashi are having fun ... Aham is aham afterall he doesnt want gopi to fall sick .. so sweet ... oh Aham still listens to his mum 😉 he went to office .. i bet he will also stay hungry ... i was right ...

wonderful .. and to top it all Naniji is back ...

wow it rock dr .. Rashi backing Aham and jijar backing Gopi .. and love it whe n Aham says "chup kar, bhabhi ke chamche" ...

both are pregnant .. now bad guys nt bad at all ...

wow looking forward to see wht type of trouble the husbands are going to falls ... may god save their souls ..

Last one was the best .. i think the more u write the better u become at it ... so keep it up and looking forward for ur next update

sorry for being late .. to comment .. and pls dont scold me for this comment .. i think it is too long .. but i had to cover 4 updates yaar bear with me ...

if i summed it up the story is amazing and the way u are summing it up is fab .. 'btw i thought urmila was done .. god the dracula keeps coming back ..

so hope i am in the safe zone .. and i kept my end of the deal ... and do take ur own time to read no rush

well will see wht u have in store for us ... have a great week ...

until the next update ...

- -mano

happy😆 ... too long na 😉.. sorry😭 couldn't help myself😉 ... but most are just wht i felt while reading 😳😉...

btw did i tell u .. how good of a writer u are😉 .. i think i did but bear with me .. i cannt stop myself ... u are a great writer and this ff rocks

Originally posted by: 143badra

😉Hi dr .. so did u miss me .. bet u did ... after all i am me na😉 .. i know i shouldnt flatter my self by self praising wht can do hun .. couldnt stop myself -- pls take ur own sweet time to read it .. sorry it is longer than i expected ... 😆

so here goes my comment ... i have already asked for forgiveness for the late comment and i'm here to fulfil my end of the deal

so let me start with pt 30 - - i had to read this all over again to properly comment .. i can remember pieces but cannt specifically pinpoint the exact stuff ... too much rubbish has been in my head for 2 whole weeks so think it is contaminated .. see wht a sweet torture is it to read it again before i even read the rest as i didnt even glimpse at them ..but i think i know pretty much thanx to su .. thing i do for u😉 btw i am commenting while reading thus it might sound a bit weird as all my question will be answered by ur following updates ...

anyways here it goes ...

pt 30-1

god i am glad tht Urmila got caught .. rather exposed in front of the entire modi family excluding Gopi dearest of course .. the way koki argued or rather reason with urmila was fab ... u fit her at all the right places .. of course nt literally😉 .. dont get me wrong .. i would have love tht too ... god the conversation and all the points highlighted are fab .. it seems to bring back so much memories of the story .. may be sad ones .. but tht torture at the begining was worth when looking back as it was the foundation for such loving conclusion .. barabar hai na

i am enjoying the part again .. wow it is so good to see all hell broke on urmila ... this is like music to my ears ..

hope she get a dose of this in the real serial too .. CV must add this ... na-insaf ka koi toh had hone chahiye na ...

pt 30-2

the way u express how urmila distorted both rashi and gopi's lives is amazing .. it has been balanced perfectly ...

it is true that only urmila and no-one else is responsible for the way they are ... Gopi and rashi would have been total different people without urmila's influence ... after all values are wht makes who u are .. thtz why they when u are born u arent either good or bad .. wht u do makes u either ... nurture will definitely affect the way u are ... urmila is a bad influence on anyone of a burden to the world ...

urmila did defend herself her as usual by blaming on other .. but she did have point ... what was fab was the SLAP .. dos i thought was it Aham ... just for a sec .. lucky thing it wasnt Aham and it was her husband .. if it was Aham she would have brought down the house by just yelling ...

finally jitu's bhai ka koi tho kaam agaya .. or else he wass no talk and no work ... person .. thanx for putting some scene into him ... shaina .. hope tht SLAP put some sence into tht dracula .. it is unlikely though ...

pt 30-3

It was nice to hear/ read all apologizing ... putting themselves out there must have been tough .. right 😆.. U know i was starting to think whether jitu bhai couldnt speak ... put u did put a stop to my thinking😉 ..

wow it was a heart felt apology and great advice from jitu bahi to rashi .. if only he had taken the extra effort to make her understand before she messed up everything .. bot i guess then we will nt have a story .. right ..

loved the way dawal supported rashi in her decision to be away from the Dracula ...

wow wht a conversation btwn jitu bhai and rashi .. if he had said this before it would have ended a lot of problems .. but i guess if it happened we want have a story ..

but it was better late than never ...

wow the way Gopi smiled when she said she is happy wou;d have been divined right ..

i always want to rashi to hate urmila for who she is .. but i know it is nt fair as wht ever she is she is her mother afterall .. u have done justice to her feelings too .. the way she ran to her room crying was something tht i would have never thought of .. may be i lack sympathy ..

wow wht a emotional part yaar ... how do u do it ... i wonder ..

pt 30-4

love the way rashi reacts yaar .. she doesnt blame anyone .. she blames herself .. tht is a huge accomplishment .. she is no more the same rashi tht we used to know and she proved herself again .. and i am loving ur rashi ...

love ur jijar too ... wow wht a sweet heart he is .. understanding , kind and lovable .. perfect husband material ...

hetal is being herself .. she is also such a sweet heart .. she maynt be kokila but a wonderful MIL .. one should be dam lucky to get a MIL like her

Aham .. has turn to be such a caring and lovable person na ... wow he is sweet and regretting his actions .. love him ..

love the part he realized tht it is high time he bends his wishes to suite her and nt vice versa ...

wow .. it was fab .. the hug / embrace the realization .. . Aham crying .. perfect .. concerned gopi and an emotional Aham ... wht a combination yaar .. Aham placing his head on a lap is one of the many scenes tht i would love to witness on screen ... god it would be fab na ...

"i really tortured u right!" Ahem spoke after what it seems like eternity. Gopi expected a lot but not this question. "Ahemji what are u saying?" But he dint seem to listen to her. He was in his own world "discarded u, slapped u, insulted u, throwed u out, never even once looked at u, not even once considered u as a human being. What if u were an illitretae, u dint want to be one right, nobody wants to be one, then why couldnt i saw it before." Ahem sat up abruptly "why doesnt anyone told me what i was doing was wrong? why dint no one punished me? Why does everyone expect that i wil leave u out someday? why everyone tries to protect u from me? Why everyone thinks that they can turn me against u easily? why nobody have any faith in me?" -- wow why a para .. so much of question .. poor fellow is suffering so much .. and gopi's reply was even better .. it had so much meaning in it ...

hugs were just icing on the cake ...

well we will see how Aham proves himself ... "He wil prove that the once heartless ahem modi can be a ideal husband too. He wil show to people that ahem modi not only knows how to demand, he knows how to give in too."

"But what Ahem Modi dint know that the promise which he made himself was going to be a real tough one" -- i will find out wht u mean by reading ur next update hun

finally one down and three to go😉 ...

now here i go again .. pt 31 .. didnt read this before .. excited ...

pt 31-1

no use telling nt to keep expectations ... fyi info i have high expectation especially from u ...

wow .. wht a start yaar .. honeymoon seems to be a battle field .. i wounder wht the bed would field like .. a football pitch😉 ...

poor Aham yaar ... why are u torturing the guy ... ok i guess he deserves it ... he did bring it upon him .. it would be fun to see Aham non-demanding and in self control ...

wow .. dr i cannt stop laughing here .. god Gopi and Rashi are fab .. poor fellows .. Gopi is been her typical self over-caring ... to top it all Rashi has turned into a Gopi .. these 2 ladies are driving the poor fellows crazy ...

Jijar as usual cannt do anything .. but Aham had to control himself ... both are so helpless ...

Aham shoting was fun .. he must have been furious to lase his cool ... but it is amazing to see Aham has stayed in control for over 25 mins ... dikra bohot improve huwa he ... yet it up ..😉

Aham calling her Gopiji ... wow love tht .. it was so sweet of Aham .. i thought tht he will carry her and make her sit in the front seat and put the seat belt and close the door then say jai sri krishan to the rest .. the other couple in the backseat ... i forgot about the driver though😆

wow Aham do still have control one look and rashi is back on track ... i guess being the elder bro Aham has to

oh gos i wanted gopi to tell "Aham now who is talking" guess it is too soon for tht ... well i am ready to wait until tht 😉...

"Gopiji do u know that this plane may collapse during its journey and we all may die" -- god Aham is unbelievable dr ... i bet he had his own selfish reason ... nt bad Gopi is on to Aham's tricks .. nt bad at all ... they say tht when u stay with a person for long their ways do rub on u .. guess it was unavoidable dr ...

arre rashi is fab .. she is so childish ... u have brought out the real rashi i think .. she is even better than gopi .. i suppose ... oh i see i was wrong .. jijar know how to control her too 😉.. nt bad at all ... i guess sweet torture is more appropriate for her ... rashi blushing ... reminds me of tht hand scene in the serial ..

oh he told her gopiji .. i totally forgot tht she noted it last time .. wow .. afteralll gopi is suppose to have a great memory ... so it isnt any problem of forgetting .. impressive

omg .. i cannot stop laughing .. wht a sweet scene .. god Aham is unbelievable .. so so sweet .. and Gopi hunny have no chance against him for sure .. wow wht a conversation ..Shiana u are too god hun .. Gopi did get it this time .. Aham is un-defeatable .. btw who needs to defeat such a lovoing hubby .. nt me 😉

pt 31-2

impressive ... i didnt think that gopi will take it to heart .. my bad just like Aham i forgot tht u were talking ahout the gopi .. her world begin and end with Ahamji ...

"dont even think that u can leave me. we wil be together always even in the death too. Dont ever think u are my bad luck gopi, u are my angel in my life and there no life for me without my angel." - - so sweet i am last dr ... he calls her .. her angle ... su did tell me something about an angle and then she just shut up .. now i know wht she meant ...

jijar knows his wife more than i thought ... impressive dr ... love the way u are handling and the story is progressing in a highly planned manner ... knowingly or unknowingly u are doing a fab job .. in filling in all the gaps .. 👏 .. sordar thaliya (i hope tht wht u call .. for round of applause) ..lol

god sali and jiju ka coupling toh superb .. they are wonderful .. fighting for fun .. i was starting to feeling it was for real though i did enjoy the bickering ... nt only gopi and jijar .. even i got the same feeling those 2 are unpredictable and complicated beings .. god bless Gopi and Jijar .. they are suppose to put up with both ... lol

arre wa Aham tho bohot romantic nikala .. 👏 kissing on a such a romantic place wow .. u are too romantic yaar .. i am blushing here ... it would be so good to be in ur prince charming's arms and god .. i am dreaming😳😊 .. and it is all ur fault😉😆...

god dr .. it is so hot here .. inspite of the heavy rain ... ur story i affecting my good scenes ... loved it .. i have a feeling tht i will be blushing whole day while reading the rest ... i should prepare myself for the upcoming tidal wave .. 😆

pt 31-3

Shopping .. well see wht u have in store for me .. wow .. Aham would do anything to see a smile .. nt bad ..

Rashi does have a point ..concerning the dress of course ...

Aham isnt demanding anymore .. though it would have been splendid to see her in a modern dress ... more than tht seeing the effect tht it would have on Aham ... will see whether she dresses herself in modern clothes or nt ... journey just began na .. and u are becoming more unpredictable by the second dr ... so it is safe to cross my fingers ..

wow rashi and jijar .. are finally respecting each others feelings ...

oh the chocolate incident is fab ... i could just see it in front of my eyes ... so innocent and romantic at the same time ...

wow the couples are getting seperated .. wonder wht will happen .. is this the twist u were talking about or have i to read more to find out ... Aham agreed to seperate .. of course he would .. separating from them means Aham will have more of Gopi right 😉 ... he might have his own wicked plans in the business mind of his ...

wow sweet jijar ... so he wanted to make rashi's dream come true ... impressive .. and the funny part is Rashi seems to know more about Aham than the other 2 who are suppose to know him inside out .. well i guess Rashi an d Aham are made from the similar mold .. sure they are different .. but nows each others very well ...😳😉

arre wa rashi .. i never thought they play card of all games on a honeymoon ... may be strip poker .. cards on honeymoon .. u are unbelievable dr,,,, wht made u think of cards .😉.. 👏

oh this is better than strip poker ... dare .. wow ... jijar toh gaya kamse ... Rashi and Aham are thinking from one brain i guess they both ... oh god Aham and rashi aka jija or sali ka coupling toh kamal hai ... they are playing gopi and jijar ... poor guys ..

guys are caught ... "CHup kar, bhabhi ke chamche!" this was so funny i cannot stop laughing .. so i think we can imagin gopi in the dress in the next part .. i was wondering

wow .. wonderful advice .. this means i ccan expect so much in the next update .. right ... now will start to read the next pt

here goes pt 32

pt 32-1

oh wonder wht Aham and Rahi are planning for .. Gopi and jijar arent unaware as before .. they are feeling something is cooking .. tht is an achievement i guess ..lol

oh the dream sequence .. become a reality ... wow wht a scene tht was .. perfect chemistry ...

wow gopi and jijar are helpless ... wonderful .. sali and jiju toh mind-blowing ... and Gopi arguing with Aham and the most sweetest pt is where he says he like it .. and as usual the remarkable blush😳 .. rashi .. nicely justifies cheating wow .. we are generous people .. u are too good dr .. rashi seems to be pressing all the right buttons today .. poor jijar bechara toh gaya kamse ...

omg dr .. the sledge scene was mind-blowing ... it was way way beyond tht in the serial .. itz in a whole another level ... so cute and romantic ... and snow laddu .. nice one

wow .. rashi scared tht is fun .. jijar and rashi parts are cute .. and rashi is becoming more and more funny ...

wow wht a realization .. i should match my wife .. banda toh bahut balayage hai ...

"kya biwi hai!!" -- yaar are u planning to kill me by making be laugh this much ... so sweet dr ..wow Gopi and the camera .. u could write an entire OS on tht just like su did with the lappi ... there is a sinhala saying -- i directly translated into english dont whether it sounds correct or nt .. "knief in the hands of a monkey" .. bandarki hath me chacu .. u guys call it nariyal i suppose

pt 32-2

arre was even jijar feels tht Aham and Rasi are in the same boat .. jijar ko pitwaneka irada hai kya ...

anne Gopi is so sweet yaar .. she is so innocent and childish ... she have been deprived of her childhood and it is wonderful to see Aham's actions are making her experience all the lost times ... and he scolds her like she is a kid and nt his wife ...

god u gave me a fright ... i thought Rashi was truluy mad and jijar a goner ... she's just teasing ... unbelievable yaar ...

oh wow .. 😳 .. jijar is having his dinner ..so wht abot Rashi yaar .. is she too having dinner ... 😉 hope so .. kambak blanket ... or else the stupid lights ... 😉😆

oh god .. i am so exsited .. gopi is going wearing the dress .. wish Aham doent get a heart attack ...

"Bewakoof kahiki!" - - is he mad because she wore the dress or for the fact tht she couldnt think tht he would love to see her in the dress .. and rashi had to think for her .. i think it is the second reaon .. will see wht u have done nextt ..

wow want a scene ... how do u do it yaar .. tht was so toucy .. i almost cried ... so sweet ... realization of love sounds really nice yaar ,,,

pt 32-3

wow yaar tht is good too good as always the light ... i am nt blaming u here ... and dont want to go int any further detail in this matter😳😆 .. less i talk the better ...

wow .. they have sealed the deal i guess ... i think why Gopi loves Aham's nose is as ... Akam ka gussa kar waqt uska nake me rahatha hai .. issliye ...😉 .. barabar hai na

and Aham is very very naughty ... god love it .. btw i was correct about why gopi love his nose .. and wht a scene ... i am sweating over here ... 😳😆

arre wa rashi toh kamal hai .. jealously always so the trick ... 😳😉

pt 32-4

wow .. the height scene reminds me of the serial ... but your version is sweet and better ... as her Aham is in love ...

Rashiben ... Aham is so possessive yaar ... oh .. Gopi is confused .. again .. she always seems to be confused ... wow .. wonderful conversation yaar Aham the dragon .. he did give gopi a rehearsal of how a dragon acts .. wonder wht will he do to show him being a dracula ,,, 👏👏👏

the most hilarious pt is the way rashi lets i will kill u ... "that gopi ki bachi, i wil kill her for sure" "then u are really dead" "rashiben"

wow dr .. this part was amazing .. never thought Gopi and jijar would think tht would would have had if those 2 married each other .. u have nicely pointed out it would have been one hell of a disaster .. all hell would have broken out ... love when Aham and Rashi fights .. they rock ..

wow .. wish tht Aham get a daughter and a son .. daughter having Aham's characters but beautiful as Gopi and Son having gopi's character but handsome as Aham ... su was telling this too ... and also Aham will adore the girl ofcourse .. he being found of Gopi so much .. and he can see how he behave through her daughter ... will be fun

finally😉 i have only 0ne more to go ...

pt 33-1

wow .. Rashi found a mum in hetal ... i always thought tht only Gopi needed a mum .. bot i was wrong .. Rashi too needed a mum and she does deserve or rather earned it ... lovly scene dr ... god i wonder how these 2 will handle parenthood .. they are worse than kids ... hope they grow out of it by time😉😳...

i have said this before but will say it again .. god love the sali jiju combination the most .. i think even more than GoHem and Raji ..

"Ahemji, u too have to do something" -- this suggest their relationship has improved a lot .. right .. wow tht is great news .. finally gopi feel confident enough to stand along side with Aham ... she is truly Gopi Aham Modi .. nt gopi ...

wow Koki's life is also settled .. u are closing all the loop holes i guess .. it was wonderful the emotional content/baggage was in deed heavy ... they small gesture of Gopi was sweet ...

oh my god ... they were planning in surprising them but did get a shock instead ... afterall they are their parents .. and they should be one step ahead of them always ..

it was really nice the way the old generation hands over everything to the next generation .. along with heart felt blessings and also with advices ...

pt 33-2

wow ... holi nice idea ... well Jijar and Rashi have surly out of their mind sno doubt on tht ..

Gopi know wht she did last holi .. nice .. snd i am wondering wht will happen next

Aham missing .. interesting ...

wow .. nice job by rashi .. a great actresses as always .. a concern Aham is easy to manipulate ... oh those 2 are always bickering .. it is fun though ..Rashi is playing Aham nicely ..

Urmila is back and well hope she is a changed person ... nope urmila is still the same .. they say even though the tiger changes the forest his spots(ones on his body) stays the same ...

wow finally Aham gets the urge to play holi .. how to ???

pt 33-3

wow wonderful .. Aham plays holi and tht too by tricking his naive wife .. nt bad at all Aha dikra .. nt bad at all ..

Bang last time did a great job .. tht was when Aham even didnt like gopi .. wow wht will happen .. this yr ..

wht will really happen if urmila drinks it by mistake ???? wht will she do ...

god both the DILs are talli ... wow now the fun begins i suppose ... wow the guys are in trouble .. they have to handle their respective partners ... locking them up is the best option ... god the wives are driving them nuts .. poor fellows ...

pt 33-4

wow .. karva chauth ..already ... jijar and rashi are having fun ... Aham is aham afterall he doesnt want gopi to fall sick .. so sweet ... oh Aham still listens to his mum 😉 he went to office .. i bet he will also stay hungry ... i was right ...

wonderful .. and to top it all Naniji is back ...

wow it rock dr .. Rashi backing Aham and jijar backing Gopi .. and love it whe n Aham says "chup kar, bhabhi ke chamche" ...

both are pregnant .. now bad guys nt bad at all ...

wow looking forward to see wht type of trouble the husbands are going to falls ... may god save their souls ..

Last one was the best .. i think the more u write the better u become at it ... so keep it up and looking forward for ur next update

sorry for being late .. to comment .. and pls dont scold me for this comment .. i think it is too long .. but i had to cover 4 updates yaar bear with me ...

if i summed it up the story is amazing and the way u are summing it up is fab .. 'btw i thought urmila was done .. god the dracula keeps coming back ..

so hope i am in the safe zone .. and i kept my end of the deal ... and do take ur own time to read no rush

well will see wht u have in store for us ... have a great week ...

until the next update ...

- -mano

happy😆 ... too long na 😉.. sorry😭 couldn't help myself😉 ... but most are just wht i felt while reading 😳😉...

btw did i tell u .. how good of a writer u are😉 .. i think i did but bear with me .. i cannt stop myself ... u are a great writer and this ff rocks

god mano...is this a comment or a ff😆

i am doomed now to reply u back. i wil reply part by part for my safety.

dont think i wil start commenting now, because i haave no idea what happend in which part?

so i have to read from part 30 to 33 again and then i wil staart my work,

this is called diggin my own grave😆

but thanks a lot for the wonderful lengthy comment, excited to read this.

Originally posted by: 143badra

😉Hi dr .. so did u miss me .. bet u did ... after all i am me na😉 .. i know i shouldnt flatter my self by self praising wht can do hun .. couldnt stop myself -- pls take ur own sweet time to read it .. sorry it is longer than i expected ... 😆

so here goes my comment ... i have already asked for forgiveness for the late comment and i'm here to fulfil my end of the deal

so let me start with pt 30 - - i had to read this all over again to properly comment .. i can remember pieces but cannt specifically pinpoint the exact stuff ... too much rubbish has been in my head for 2 whole weeks so think it is contaminated .. see wht a sweet torture is it to read it again before i even read the rest as i didnt even glimpse at them ..but i think i know pretty much thanx to su .. thing i do for u😉 btw i am commenting while reading thus it might sound a bit weird as all my question will be answered by ur following updates ...

anyways here it goes ...

pt 30-1

god i am glad tht Urmila got caught .. rather exposed in front of the entire modi family excluding Gopi dearest of course .. the way koki argued or rather reason with urmila was fab ... u fit her at all the right places .. of course nt literally😉 .. dont get me wrong .. i would have love tht too ... god the conversation and all the points highlighted are fab .. it seems to bring back so much memories of the story .. may be sad ones .. but tht torture at the begining was worth when looking back as it was the foundation for such loving conclusion .. barabar hai na

i am enjoying the part again .. wow it is so good to see all hell broke on urmila ... this is like music to my ears ..

hope she get a dose of this in the real serial too .. CV must add this ... na-insaf ka koi toh had hone chahiye na ...

FINALLy read the part 30 now, god i forgot what i worte😆

god its not ur brain is contaminated, even mine too

ha ha u fit her at right places...that was a fab stamtment. i am rolling now.

yup, as everyne knew i love kokila modi character a lot and the way she fried urmi in the intial days i used to watch them repeteadly more than the gohem scenes.

brinigng the past is to bring the sad memores again. But this time it was a totall beja fry for urmila.

all the past mistakes which no one pointed and hiden from everyone came tumbling down from everyone making her lock.

i do reallly want this scene, the frying of urmila shaw...hmmm maybe it wil the end of the episode

Originally posted by: 143badra

😉Hi dr .. so did u miss me .. bet u did ... after all i am me na😉 .. i know i shouldnt flatter my self by self praising wht can do hun .. couldnt stop myself -- pls take ur own sweet time to read it .. sorry it is longer than i expected ... 😆

so here goes my comment ... i have already asked for forgiveness for the late comment and i'm here to fulfil my end of the deal

so let me start with pt 30 - - i had to read this all over again to properly comment .. i can remember pieces but cannt specifically pinpoint the exact stuff ... too much rubbish has been in my head for 2 whole weeks so think it is contaminated .. see wht a sweet torture is it to read it again before i even read the rest as i didnt even glimpse at them ..but i think i know pretty much thanx to su .. thing i do for u😉 btw i am commenting while reading thus it might sound a bit weird as all my question will be answered by ur following updates ...

anyways here it goes ...

pt 30-1

god i am glad tht Urmila got caught .. rather exposed in front of the entire modi family excluding Gopi dearest of course .. the way koki argued or rather reason with urmila was fab ... u fit her at all the right places .. of course nt literally😉 .. dont get me wrong .. i would have love tht too ... god the conversation and all the points highlighted are fab .. it seems to bring back so much memories of the story .. may be sad ones .. but tht torture at the begining was worth when looking back as it was the foundation for such loving conclusion .. barabar hai na

i am enjoying the part again .. wow it is so good to see all hell broke on urmila ... this is like music to my ears ..

hope she get a dose of this in the real serial too .. CV must add this ... na-insaf ka koi toh had hone chahiye na ...

pt 30-2

the way u express how urmila distorted both rashi and gopi's lives is amazing .. it has been balanced perfectly ...

it is true that only urmila and no-one else is responsible for the way they are ... Gopi and rashi would have been total different people without urmila's influence ... after all values are wht makes who u are .. thtz why they when u are born u arent either good or bad .. wht u do makes u either ... nurture will definitely affect the way u are ... urmila is a bad influence on anyone of a burden to the world ...

urmila did defend herself her as usual by blaming on other .. but she did have point ... what was fab was the SLAP .. dos i thought was it Aham ... just for a sec .. lucky thing it wasnt Aham and it was her husband .. if it was Aham she would have brought down the house by just yelling ...

finally jitu's bhai ka koi tho kaam agaya .. or else he wass no talk and no work ... person .. thanx for putting some scene into him ... shaina .. hope tht SLAP put some sence into tht dracula .. it is unlikely though ...

thanks mano. i really liked that conversation of koki comparing gopi and rashi and their lives destroyed because of urmi.

these conversations just pour in the mind and they seem so natural.

u are right, no people are good and bad when they are born, its the way we made them.

urmi harmed both their lives by leaving one unpampered and another to the core.

it is true in sns that wen rashi asked for the advice, urmi first qn was what was gopi doing.

she thinsk that gopi dont have a marriage of her own at the first cost.

if this was the case, then why did she let her marry.

of course what can u expect urmi but to denfend herself. she never accepts her mistake and in the recnet sns too, she never agreed with rashi with sonal matter,

urmi thinks about herself and it is proved always.ha ha so u thought the slap was from ahem.

ahem only slaps his wife and sister, the people who depend on him, not otthers.

ahem dont treat urmi as a living person at all, so he wont slap her..😆

yup actually shaijanli asked to keep jeetu too in the releavation and the scene have to end with urmi exposal and the honeymoon begins but i got tempted more and utilized jeetu bhai as he came to the scene.

only he can make urmi shut up as though how much urmi demands, a wife wil always be scared for her husband and we see that urmi alaways asks rashi not to say anythign to her father.

so i tookthe chance and made jeetu give a slap so that atleast now, urmi wil value her husband

making urmi some sense, no way..she wont change i wont let her change too. i just hate her.

😉

Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

god mano...is this a comment or a ff😆 --- i was wondering the same hun .. but just think if i had comment it individually as usual u would have still end up with the same size i suppose ... so it was the usual dose .. only difference ur getting the full dose at once ...

i am doomed now to reply u back.- - dont worry dr .. i know u have a hectic week ahead and u also have to write the next pt of the ff .. so concentrate on it and take ur own sweet in reading my comment .. i will nt go anywhere ... i wil reply part by part for my safety ... by commenting for this u already are in the safe zone hun .. so i think u have no worries .. btw it was very clever of u 😉...

dont think i wil start commenting now, because i haave no idea what happend in which part?

so i have to read from part 30 to 33 again and then i wil staart my work, -- no rush dr ... pls dont go to a lot of trouble to reply ... btw whty did u think when i said i am still reading pt 32 in the evening as i have been meddling with the whole thing from morning ... i comment while reading ... so it didnt take tht much of effort ... and had a wonderful time .. am still laughing and blushing ...

this is called diggin my own grave😆 ... correct dr .. but in this case u asked me to dig it for u😉 .. dont worry i have no intention of pushing u in .. but be careful nt to fall in as i promise tht i am nt going to accompany u 😉...

but thanks a lot for the wonderful lengthy comment, excited to read this. -- u are welcome and the pleasure was all mine .. hope u like it ... and another thing .. did i have a choice in nt commenting .. even after exams .. i dont think so ... if i didnt i might have ended up digging my grave .. so i think .. itz better u dig it instead of me ... thtz why i say u need no enemies when u have friends like me ..lol

tc

and see u around dr ...

Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

FINALLy read the part 30 now, god i forgot what i worte😆 -- well done tht was qiuck ..😉

god its not ur brain is contaminated, even mine too -- glad u could join the club .. hope ur condition doesnt worsen after reading my comments ..😉😆

ha ha u fit her at right places...that was a fab stamtment. i am rolling now. .. glad i could make someone laugh oopss sorry i meant u nt someone

yup, as everyne knew i love kokila modi character a lot and the way she fried urmi in the intial days i used to watch them repeteadly more than the gohem scenes.

brinigng the past is to bring the sad memores again. But this time it was a totall beja fry for urmila.

all the past mistakes which no one pointed and hiden from everyone came tumbling down from everyone making her lock.

i do reallly want this scene, the frying of urmila shaw...hmmm maybe it wil the end of the episode

she deserves to be tortured to the extend tht she would regret her existence .. oh tht dracula .. make my blood boil ...

thanx for the comment hun .. tht too this quick .. impressive

Originally posted by: 143badra

😉Hi dr .. so did u miss me .. bet u did ... after all i am me na😉 .. i know i shouldnt flatter my self by self praising wht can do hun .. couldnt stop myself -- pls take ur own sweet time to read it .. sorry it is longer than i expected ... 😆

so here goes my comment ... i have already asked for forgiveness for the late comment and i'm here to fulfil my end of the deal

so let me start with pt 30 - - i had to read this all over again to properly comment .. i can remember pieces but cannt specifically pinpoint the exact stuff ... too much rubbish has been in my head for 2 whole weeks so think it is contaminated .. see wht a sweet torture is it to read it again before i even read the rest as i didnt even glimpse at them ..but i think i know pretty much thanx to su .. thing i do for u😉 btw i am commenting while reading thus it might sound a bit weird as all my question will be answered by ur following updates ...

anyways here it goes ...

pt 30-1

god i am glad tht Urmila got caught .. rather exposed in front of the entire modi family excluding Gopi dearest of course .. the way koki argued or rather reason with urmila was fab ... u fit her at all the right places .. of course nt literally😉 .. dont get me wrong .. i would have love tht too ... god the conversation and all the points highlighted are fab .. it seems to bring back so much memories of the story .. may be sad ones .. but tht torture at the begining was worth when looking back as it was the foundation for such loving conclusion .. barabar hai na

i am enjoying the part again .. wow it is so good to see all hell broke on urmila ... this is like music to my ears ..

hope she get a dose of this in the real serial too .. CV must add this ... na-insaf ka koi toh had hone chahiye na ...

pt 30-2

the way u express how urmila distorted both rashi and gopi's lives is amazing .. it has been balanced perfectly ...

it is true that only urmila and no-one else is responsible for the way they are ... Gopi and rashi would have been total different people without urmila's influence ... after all values are wht makes who u are .. thtz why they when u are born u arent either good or bad .. wht u do makes u either ... nurture will definitely affect the way u are ... urmila is a bad influence on anyone of a burden to the world ...

urmila did defend herself her as usual by blaming on other .. but she did have point ... what was fab was the SLAP .. dos i thought was it Aham ... just for a sec .. lucky thing it wasnt Aham and it was her husband .. if it was Aham she would have brought down the house by just yelling ...

finally jitu's bhai ka koi tho kaam agaya .. or else he wass no talk and no work ... person .. thanx for putting some scene into him ... shaina .. hope tht SLAP put some sence into tht dracula .. it is unlikely though ...

pt 30-3

It was nice to hear/ read all apologizing ... putting themselves out there must have been tough .. right 😆.. U know i was starting to think whether jitu bhai couldnt speak ... put u did put a stop to my thinking😉 ..

wow it was a heart felt apology and great advice from jitu bahi to rashi .. if only he had taken the extra effort to make her understand before she messed up everything .. bot i guess then we will nt have a story .. right ..

loved the way dawal supported rashi in her decision to be away from the Dracula ...

wow wht a conversation btwn jitu bhai and rashi .. if he had said this before it would have ended a lot of problems .. but i guess if it happened we want have a story ..

but it was better late than never ...

wow the way Gopi smiled when she said she is happy wou;d have been divined right ..

i always want to rashi to hate urmila for who she is .. but i know it is nt fair as wht ever she is she is her mother afterall .. u have done justice to her feelings too .. the way she ran to her room crying was something tht i would have never thought of .. may be i lack sympathy ..

wow wht a emotional part yaar ... how do u do it ... i wonder ..

YEAH agreeded that if jeetu spoke first what wil be the story. as i said, jeetu speaking is totally unexpected from me too. i utilized every charcter so why to leave jeetu bhai alone.

yes, jeetu bhai and the daugther conversation was heart touching and his appolgy says that when children perfroms mistakes parents get the blame.

dhawal is supporting to kinji always but the thing is he afraids of urmi too.

so when he saw her true nature beign a good boy he want his wife secure away from her.

yes the gopi smile i took it in sns as i observed that wehnever someone compliment her she wil look at the person responsible before replieing.

so indirectly i want to point that ahem is her world of happiness.

no daughter can hate her mother, though how much she tries. some or other point the feeling comes. same with rashi though she wants to stay away from urmi, she cant live withouth her either.

ha ha u dont lack sympathy dear, u just lack. sympathy for rashi.

yes its is emotinal with jeetu and ahem reaction..as u knew it in the part-4

Originally posted by: 143badra

😉

well spoken mano,, u proved that friends like u then no enimes needed.

oho i got a clever compliment from mano..party time

u are right, the comment should be posted in one go and replies wil be cut short by me.

dont worry, if i fall in a grave, i wil ask mano to push u when u are dancing on the top.😉

Originally posted by: 143badra

😉Hi dr .. so did u miss me .. bet u did ... after all i am me na😉 .. i know i shouldnt flatter my self by self praising wht can do hun .. couldnt stop myself -- pls take ur own sweet time to read it .. sorry it is longer than i expected ... 😆

so here goes my comment ... i have already asked for forgiveness for the late comment and i'm here to fulfil my end of the deal

pt 30-4

love the way rashi reacts yaar .. she doesnt blame anyone .. she blames herself .. tht is a huge accomplishment .. she is no more the same rashi tht we used to know and she proved herself again .. and i am loving ur rashi ...

love ur jijar too ... wow wht a sweet heart he is .. understanding , kind and lovable .. perfect husband material ...

hetal is being herself .. she is also such a sweet heart .. she maynt be kokila but a wonderful MIL .. one should be dam lucky to get a MIL like her

Aham .. has turn to be such a caring and lovable person na ... wow he is sweet and regretting his actions .. love him ..

love the part he realized tht it is high time he bends his wishes to suite her and nt vice versa ...

wow .. it was fab .. the hug / embrace the realization .. . Aham crying .. perfect .. concerned gopi and an emotional Aham ... wht a combination yaar .. Aham placing his head on a lap is one of the many scenes tht i would love to witness on screen ... god it would be fab na ...

"i really tortured u right!" Ahem spoke after what it seems like eternity. Gopi expected a lot but not this question. "Ahemji what are u saying?" But he dint seem to listen to her. He was in his own world "discarded u, slapped u, insulted u, throwed u out, never even once looked at u, not even once considered u as a human being. What if u were an illitretae, u dint want to be one right, nobody wants to be one, then why couldnt i saw it before." Ahem sat up abruptly "why doesnt anyone told me what i was doing was wrong? why dint no one punished me? Why does everyone expect that i wil leave u out someday? why everyone tries to protect u from me? Why everyone thinks that they can turn me against u easily? why nobody have any faith in me?" -- wow why a para .. so much of question .. poor fellow is suffering so much .. and gopi's reply was even better .. it had so much meaning in it ...

hugs were just icing on the cake ...

well we will see how Aham proves himself ... "He wil prove that the once heartless ahem modi can be a ideal husband too. He wil show to people that ahem modi not only knows how to demand, he knows how to give in too."

"But what Ahem Modi dint know that the promise which he made himself was going to be a real tough one" -- i will find out wht u mean by reading ur next update hun

finally one down and three to go😉 ...

now here i go again .. pt 31 .. didnt read this before .. excited ...

thank u for loving my rashi😃 yup its a significance that rashi blames herself as she is the root cause of the pbms accoridn to her.

but dont take the positvity too long. its rashi after all, first realizatin and then accusation.

The way rashi shouts is it my mistake.. it says that how much she is hurt and looking for approval jsut like gopi.

its a similar behaviour of gopi lke she is deprived of love here rashi is deprived of values. THe words whch gopi should say are coming out of rashi now.

yup jigar is a perfect husband material and if i would be rashi i would have done the puja of jigar everyday.

and hetal i can accept ahem as husband but i would definetly want hetal as MIL only.

really she is a darling and the girl having such a good sasuma is reallly a lucky girl i tell u.

just wait and watch how much caring and demanding less he wil be or i say u already learnt it.

Demanding is his basic nature and it wont go away even he witshed for it just like gopi as shy is her nature.

but i want to show that even ahem wants to mend too but the pbm is he is too rigid and wife is too flexible.

yes the concren and emotional ahem was always in my mind. i just want to see him break up in sns too for once. the rigid arrogant fellow being cared for ...it would be good.

i feel that the way ahem is due to koki too. she let never anyone say anything to him and always scolds him alone, which makes a false security in ahem mind. that he is always right.

so in a way his asking that why no one dint tell him what he was doing was wrong is a fab statmeent for me as the whole mm watched hwo he treated gopi but not even one person opend their mouth against him.

i mean chirag is the head right then why are everyone is afraid of ahem.

this part mostly consits of the soul serching of rashi and ahem as they are the persons who are still conflicted.

yapiee done one.part. now hav e to read the next one

Originally posted by: shaina.sharma