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All fanfics and oneshots which i have been written with my own knowledge - this is solely my work and no one can recreate or copy my work without permission

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Hey friends,

i was watching Gulaal today and came up with this idea of ff, i don't know how it will turn out throughout the whole story but do enjoy reading it. and do comment 😉

Part 1

Gopi was a woman who never accepted defeat. Not even against her own cousin Rashi and Aunt Urmi. One day her brother in law Sushant has murdered his brother meaning her husband. He had shot her and thrown him in the river while he was alive. He did not know someone was looking behind him. But he had gave up and told her everything and she forgave him and they became one and fought together in any trouble that had occurred. Before Gopi was going to marry, her marriage had been fixed to a man. A man who turns into a women at night and becomes a goddess and prays in a temple. She found out and rejected the alliance.

One major thing had happened. He elder brother in law had sentenced to jail due to his crime. But this man/ goddess named Durgesh had come to know everything about her life. Sushant her brother in law had found out, took the gun and was about to leave but she stops him, and they go together. They reach to a place which was unknown to them. A place behind the temple where Durgesh prays after he becomes a woman. She goes up to him and tries to make a deal with him but he backfires. But she interrupts and says ' look at yourself 1st then tell me what I am, you already have ruined your manhood in this daily goddess thing, look at yourself, I don't need your clarifications and are you even a man, no such person will call you a man will they ' He shouts, ' so your telling me what is right what is wrong, and who have you brought with you, a man who is already your enemy, Vaidya come in and speak will you'

'you, your the same man who had killed Jai and threw him in the river'.

'I already knows this, from the beginning, I also know what kind of man he is'

They both stood still, but she interferes again ' you come in our family problem again, I will not spare you'

'spare, and me, you are joking, are u even a woman, what kind of relationship do you have with this sushant, why do you always attached to him, something wrong with this brother in law sister in law relationship, or is it, you cannot be able to fulfill a responsibility of a wife can you.

Gopi smacks him straight away and, says ' warning you and I will not spare you at all'

Both leave the spot and goes home. After a fortune, Rashi had something on her mind. She had to bring this Gopi face to face with Aehem Modi. But how she thought. Rashi had already been rejected by koki as she wasn't suitable for her son, but as she sees Gopi she thinks about it. Gopi was unpar, etc but she was a tough girl. A girl who handles everything in her tight clenched fist. Everything was under her paw. Nothing had defeated her at all except that she could not read or write. She could speak english but she doesn't have any experience of speaking it with everyone.

Rashi thought of a brilliant plan, she thought of why not go to the temple on thursdays as the Modi house always goes there every week on a thursday. She made the deal. She told Gopi and Urmi they would leave for temple on thursday exact 1pm sharp. But Gopi didn't want to leave at all. She was no longer living in her in law place as they told her to marry her brother in law or leave the house, so she left the house as she did not want to marry a criminal.

Sushant never had a sister and accepted Gopi as his elder sister. He had started to look for an alliance for her as she wasn't ever happy with her married life as she never been in love with Jai at all. She had been forced by Urmi to marry him for the family stake. Gopi cried bitterly on wednesday night as she was hurt of what she had done. Married a guy whom she never been able to live with or love. A guy whom never spent a moment with his family. A guy who thought about himself. Sushant comforted her, and told her there will be a gem out there who will take care of you, forget all this and move on.

Thursday had arrived, The modi family was already there praying with everyone else. Rashi, urmi, Gopi and sushant comes upstairs. Sushant has a bandooq (gun) carrying with him all the time. They stood behind and prayed. Gopi went forward, and stood beside a guy who was tall, fair, handsome, and fit. That was none other than a man called Aehem Modi. After she gave the offering to the priest, she went backwards and trips over, she falls down but he comes for the rescue. They both stood there looking into each others eye, Everyone around them looking at them in a shocked face. Gopi got irritated and looked down. They both stood up perfectly and said sorry. They both introduced themselves and Gopi thanked him.

Sushant greeted the Modi Family and told them this was Gopi. Koki was happy too see her, and said: let them come to know each other first then we will fix the marriage, it will take some time for sure. Sushant says ok, and tells Gopi to take Aehem downstairs and both of you get to know each other.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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thats really nice ayesha. please continue.
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nice one dear...
so let us know what will happen next
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very nice ff ayesha what will happen next update soon
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that was very nice...plz update soon
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It was nice ayesha pls continue
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Hmmmm very interesting storyline!!!! Write more!
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Hey, am back, i know i haven't been on this morning as i wasn't in the mood as i had so many viruses on my laptop so i was cleaning them out. So i started to write this after the virus got cleaned out. i know you all love gohem, so i put a wee gohem scene in this, but enjoy and comment for sure. x 😉

part 2

Gopi takes him downstairs and walks up to the ice cream stall with him. He asks her if there was anyone in her life etc, but she answers, there was a guy who i got married to by force because of my mami, my mami always ill treated me, and always treated me as a servant since my parents dies in a car crash when i was 6, as jai as earlier on i got married to him by force, a few months back he passed away as he got murdered. I never loved him, nothing but gradually sushant made me gain trust, hope and made me love once again. Sushant is my brother nothing more than that. We aren't really brother and sister, but we accept each other help thats it.

Aehem who was on the other hand, was in difficulty as he has dumped his love for his mother sake. He agreed to get married due to her sake, but on the other hand he was thinking he should perhaps change towards this uneducated girl, whom has already lost so much in her life and has already gained sorrow in her life. He knew he could start loving again, so he began to go forward in his life with forgetting his past. He had to gain Gopi trust first and get her educated although he knows she know english but cannot speak in properly as she never spoke it in her life.

He started to smile, but this was just the beginning, 1st step was to tell her the truth. As he began to talk to her he told her everything about him, anita and more. He also told her he had now forgotten her and moved on in life. Gopi was happy for sure that he had expressed his truth which was kept a secret to the whole family for the past 2 years except Kinjal and Jigar. He didn't know what to do with this Anita as she kept on calling him for the past 2 hours. As he knew Gopi was a tough person to handle the situation he gave her the phone which was ringing again.

She answered it, and there anita speaks: why haven't you been picking up the phone, please think about it again before getting married, you know we both won't live with each other, How can you think of leaving me to a girl who isn't the same statue as you, who is not even worth you.

Gopi: "oh, so you can't live without him can't you, do one thing why don't you go and find yourself a suitable guy for yourself, as aehem modi doesn't need a cheap girl like you who can stand so low and marry hi for just the sake of Modi Money, what did you think, he will think twice for your sake, . And your calling me and unpar jahil aren't you, unpar jahil to tum ho jo apne sanskaar aur parampara sub kuch bhool chuki ho, aur ghatiya kam karnai kai bejai susar jao(change yourself) aur kisi aur par maro. Aehem Modi ko aisi aurat nahi chahiye, phir bhi tum iskai bagair nahi jee painge to apna elaj kar and yeah don't forget this
and what do you think that after our marriage i will work continuously day and night serving people who will not appreciate me...a husband who will not stand the sight of an illiterate wife as she isn't his worth, same statue and more and scheming witch like you who cannot see me happy ever so that what you think, don't think i am a fool that will not understand anything, samjhi gai"

Anita was shocked and Gopi cut the phone there. Anita, was in a total shocked as she came to know all her secrets in a jiffy over the money of Modi house , she truly loved him for sure.

Aehem and jigar looking at her just there, as she hadn't seen anyone that strong, with pride, garv and more, and could easily give a tight response back to anyone. There was some more things which they didn't know which they will gradually know when they get used to Gopi.

Gopi saw Durgesh near the temple pointing a gun towards her. She got scared and told him everything about that guy who standing there. Durgesh fired the gun towards them, bullet came near them, they bent down and hit the guy behind. The police who was just a few steps behind durgesh caught him and took him to the police and there he went behind the lockups.

Gopi who was looking quite scared, had held his bicceps tightly. She was thinking as her eyes had lowered down. Her inner self spoke: omg his bicceps are really big, and he is tough for sure, uh ho, she had to be careful with him so that he doesn't raise his hand on her after marriage.
He saw her scared, tensed, and sweat all on her forehead. He goes in lala land. He couldn't believe how she looked like a innocent child who was scared how she was and he saw her holding his bicceps tightly he knew she must be thinking about them as they are massive and tough. He held her and took her to the car where sushant was standing and left with sushant.

Aehem was driving his car, who already was over the moon, as he was having flashbacks of what happened between the two of them. He closed his eyes, and saw her everywhere. He wasn't paying attention to driving, which he was dreaming of the song Pyaar ka anjaam from bewafaa with her face everywhere.


He always heard from his mother and kaki that :kehte hai jub yeh dil tootka hai, to awaaz nahi nekhlti
, jab yeh toota hai, to qyaamat aajati hai, toofan aata hai, zalzalai aa jaati hai,os awaaz mein vo dard hoti hai, os awaaz mein vo mohabat hoti hai,' but his kaki always told him in childhood: 'magar sun, agar tum kisi say pyaar hai to tera dard yeh mohabat ke saat ye dunya wali, yeh dunya wali kya insaf karenge tu tarap ta reh jaenga, aur yeh dunya dekhti rehjaenga'

Suddenly he crashes his car into someones car boot. He couldn't believe that there was something happening to him inside to him.

Rashi who stood there at the temple with her mouth wide open, she had to do something to get married in the same house so she can bring her down to her statue, as she is thinking to much, about it. Urmi who was there behind watching rashi reaction as what she wanted to was to make her the servant of her house for her entire life, and she hated her own daughter as much as that gavar she thought. Rashi was doing all the things which her mother told her to, but inside her, let her down as she never will be able to do it to her as she loved her sister truly from the heart.

Aehem arrived home. He saw everyone waiting for him in the main hall. Koki stood up and walked towards him and spoke: 'so tell me dikra, how did you like her.'

Aehem got shocked, got a bit shy, lowered his head, smiled a little and ran upstairs.

Everyone saw his reaction and knew his answer was yes for the marriage, and jigar went after and started to joke and flirt around with his brother, and pulled his legs just as he does casually since childhood, as that was his job. Aehem was getting irritated so he quickly entered the bathroom and shut the door and started to have the shower while he was in thoughts.

As he was in the shower, he hears thunder in the background, and thinks there is a big storm coming tonight with more rain from the sounds of the wind blowing outside. He imagines that Gopi is coming. She will brings his food and places it in front of him and says "you should eat first and then take the medicine, call if you need anything", "I will come and get the dishes later" and she leaves. He imagines that she is like she was running instead of just walking her slow walk and also also he was tired so he came out of the shower after he put on his clothes, came out of the bathroom, sat on his bed, took his medicine as he had asthma and he fell asleep right away, still with all the weird thoughts in his head.

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well i tried making it longer but, it didn't turn out that long as i expected it to be, but i knew you all are after Gohem romancing and more, so i put a bit in it, hope u all enjoy it, and do comment. Enjoy x
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thats really nice. thanks for updating. plese continue.
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Liked your storyline of Ahem knowing Gopi was illiterate before marriage & slowly falling in love with her. A man's greatness lies in accepting other's weaknesses & trying to help overcome them. Good job Ayesha!!!!👏👏
😆Biceps part of it was really funny.

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