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All fanfics and oneshots which i have been written with my own knowledge - this is solely my work and no one can recreate or copy my work without permission

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chapter 1

A wedding alliance came in the Modi mansion for kinjal. Kinjal Modi the youngest daughter of Kokila and Parag. She was the only daughter in the house and was beloved of everyone. Kokila wasn't sure to accept this alliance as Aehem wasn't married.

He was only 24 and kinjal was 20. Aehem had finished his MBA and started to handle the business affairs and matters. He came back from the USA as a changed man, a man who wanted a girk who is virtous simple and didn't care if she was educated or not.
He goes through the village and the car splashes the puddle on to Urmila. Urmila shah a strict woman who wanted best in everything. Aehem comes out and says 'sorry'. He recognises her and says: jai shri krishna, pehchana

Urmi : Aehem, itna badal giya hai tum, itne saal, kya baat hai, dehree wagaira mil gaye. Kya koi larkai to nahi hai tumhari zindagi mein'

Aehem: yeh kya, itne sawaal. Koi larki nahi hai, bas sanskaari larki aur simple si chahiye. Suna hai aap ki bhanji sai meri shaadi the ho chooki hai. Ha degree mil gay.

Urmi: pata tha mujko, tum os badmash larkai main nahi ho, kokila modi ka beta aisa nahi hai
Aehem: acha I leave now, mom danti gi agar me sahi waqt par nahi poncha.

Must be wondering how come urmi is positive: jake bhai rashi is postive here, do read she a simple changed girl here : not a cunning girl like in the serial.

Aehem arrives at the Modi mansion. Camera zooms in on his legs, goes up, stops at his chin, camera twirls around on top of his head, then finally shows his face. He enters. His hands on his waistcoat, feeling very warm and will be as its really sunny.

He enters and takes blessing from everyone. He sits down beside baa and speaks: yeh kya phir sai dawai ( medine ) nahi khai, jigar couldn't u give it, devki for a joke he says her name and gives it to her.

Parag from behind twists his ears and speaks : Besharam, meri maa ka naam laita hai tujko mein nahi chorunga.

Koki was happy he was back, and planned to show him the girl, but she asked him several questions after all she doesn't want to ruin his life.

Aehem : maa, jo larki aap ko pasand hai, mujko koi aitraaz nahi, kyu na ho unpar his ho, bas simple si chahiye.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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what a new story ayesha very good continue
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Aehem : maa, jo larki aap ko pasand hai, mujko koi aitraaz nahi, kyu na ho unpar his ho, bas simple si chahiye.

Chapter 2

Koki was happy he didn't mind getting married so she accepted the offer of kinjal marriage to so that kinjal doesn't get over her limits, she also tried to stop everyone from telling this to aehem as if he found out then he would kill her as his gusa is na jaiz.

There was another secret which no one knows except aehem and his elders that jigar was his blood brother not hetal chirag son. Hetal couldn't give a child she had 3 miscarriages before and couldn't have any again. She was barren all her life so she adopted jigar. Koki was sad that her son didn't call her mother, she felt the pain that a son away from a mother was unbearable.

Jigar was suspicious about it. He was in Australia doing engineer and was in his final exams. He finished them and came to India. He entered the office and bossed everyone around as he was a king afterall he a modi son, Aehem modi brother. He peeked through his cabin a sat down the comfy chair. He always thought something is wrong in the house.

Chirag walks in, and sees Jigar. Aehem was behind Chirag. Aehem pretend to shout at him for sitting at his chair but jigar back fires and says: awaaz neeche, never shout at a engineer like me. They laughed and hugged each other as they saw each other after a long time.

They left, drove to the ice cream stall, ate ice cream, went to the movies to watch srk my name is khan without telling anyone and went home.

The house was getting decorated. It was kinjal engagement tonight. She brought her best friend Gopi even though she is uneducated and the shah parivaar with her after all they're aehem in laws..

Gopi who is uneducated afterall she's aehem fiance and will be getting engaged tonight as well .
Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sohaib thanks hope u read my other new story which started yesterday. Ff raaz
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very good and good news for jake that jigar is aham i dont know he will react after reading it. anyone very good and thanks for sharing
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Chapter 3

They arrive home and starts decorating the house. Meanwhile kinjal and gopi are in kinjal room getting decked up while rashi is in the kitchen cooking for the guests.

The guests starts to arrive one by one. Elesh family comes over and sits down. They meet ahem and jigar. Kinjal comes down with gopi and takes kinjal to the middle.

Aehem stood there looking at her, gopi in his favorite colour. He glanced at her for a while. Kinjal and elesh exchanged rings and went behind and the pandit calls gohem. They come and exchange rings too.

Aehem had never seen a girl like her so simple. he thought, how will he cope with a illiterate. He totally got a headache.

He got bit embarrassed as he had never spent a moment with a girl who is uneducated
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Good updates, please continue soon
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It is weird that Rashi is cooking in the kitchen. Haha Rashi can't boil water - she would probably burn it . (Sorry Jake) Hahaha.
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Lol she won't burn it bopi is there guiding her lmao

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