Ahamji where are you? part 17page 14 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Another wonderful update, you are making my day.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow.. .this is so good...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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really really kike this ff please dont stop.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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part 8
Aham drives Gopi towards indianplaza they were picking up kaka, Gopi says to Aham that afterwards she would like to go to the mandir as food is being delivered n she n kaka usually distributes, Aham tell her he will like to help, Aham phone rings its kokila, she tells aham to ask Gopi to come home for dinner, Aham asks Gopi, she tells him it is fine but she will have to ask kaka ji n also bring him with me i dont go without him anywhere. Aham says mom can kaka ji come kokila replies yes yes he is gopis father.
First we have to go to the mandir she replies ok. Goham pick up kaka who was looking tired, Gopi asks kaka ji if he is alright he tells her at this age we get tired n it is time for our maker to take me, Gopi looks at kaka ji n starts to cry Kaka ji plse. They arrive at the mandir, n the pandit is there waiting for them ahh bhai fir you make gopi cry, you shall live until the age of 100. we can still get you married at this age, kaka laughs n blushes Gopi goes n hugs him Kaka ji he hugs n kisses, he looks over to Aham my daughter will lose me soon i did not want her alone, i am a good judge of character i see you love my child very much, dont hurt her again. Pandit looks at Aham i met you the other day ji pandit you asked a lot of questions about Gopi here, ji . I am Gopis husband. ahhh now i know why u asked about her.
Anyway lets get on with we are here for pandit does the prayers n they start to distribute the food, even Aj helps, Gopi smiles glows she hugs people aham slowed down n watched. kaka the pandit Aj gopi n the truck driver all distributing food. Gopi dikra bless you gopi bless you gopi may your married life be blessed blessings all round Aham watched n smile. He remembers the time that when they got married a beggar person came to the car n asked for some money how he refused how could he have refused. He starts to distribute the food as well. Aj getting hugs n kisses from everyone, he was truely blessed.
once they finish Gopi tells the truck driver to go home as he has to pick up early the food to distribute everywhere. Ji Gopi Didi. Gopi asks if the truck is working good as it is the new one, he replys ji n the other one has been fixed n has been given to the old persons home in rajkot. Aham love for Gopi grew more n more he admired his wife.
They arrived at mm just after 8 oclock, kokila was waiting for them with a puja thali, Aj was tired but was happy to see his baa, Baa he asks this is your big house, ji beta its also yours n your mothers n your papas. Aj looks at kokila with a frown n my babas everyone laughs ji of course how could i forget that. Aj grabs Gopi mummy sit, she knew he wanted milk maji before Ahamji goes to sleep is it possible to feed him some roti n dalh, Gopi you are in your own house why are you asking dikra. Gopi goes into the kitchen Hetal n rashi are there, Rashi says Gopi i am sorry what happened this morning i was trying to scratch myself instead i hurt my pyara nephew plse forgive me, Gopi just looked at her, Hetal kaki is the food ready as i need to feed Aj before he goes to sleep. Gopi dikra take what ever you need. Rashi just stares, Aham walks in with Aj Gopi buddy has had a tour of the house he says he cannot live here as he feels he will get lost. Gopi n hetal laugh. Rashi goes over to Aham Aj sees her n screams mummy ji mummyji, Kaka who was sitting in the lounge comes running Aham beta whats the matter, Kaka ji he hasnt forgotten what happen this morning, kaka looks at rashi, she gives him the evilest look. kaka tells Aham take him out of the kitchen otherwise he will have nightmares, Gopi takes the food n feeds Aj in the lounge he starts to yawn, Gopi grabs her shawl, Baa comes into the lounge she is looking very frail Gopi sees her she tries to get up but Aj wont let her Baa comes over n blesses Gopi, Gopi you have forgotten me nahi Baa i missed you so much Aj starts to fidget, Gopi Hetal says Aham he is going to be three soon dont you think you should be weaning him off, Kaka shouts NO i have told my child that she will feed Aham until he is five, it is very good for him, for his future health. Hetal says ji. i just thought that seeing that Gopi is busy all day working, kaka replies even though my child is working she still has to bond with her child we want the best for Aham. Finally Aham falls asleep, Gopi fixes her blouse then removes the shawl she goes over to Baa holding Aj your great grandson. Baa blesses him he is exactly like Aham, kokila hetal you were right. Baa blesses Gopi again.
Hetal says food is served, Kaka gets up Gopi beta go n eat, nahi kaka ji you eat first i will take care of Aham, Hetal says first the men eat then we women will eat. Everyone agrees. At the table chirag asks kaka if he could call him sir kaka looked n laugh i am not a teacher please call me kaka like everyone else. ok Kaka tell me about your self n your family i ran my own business a long time ago, then i retired my family died all i have left is Gopi n Aham. so did you help Gopi with meeting all the influential person nahi chirag that was Gopis hard work, her honesty,sometimes i think my daughter is a robot she never stops.
Aham finishes he goes over to his mom n Gopi he takes aj out of Gopis arms i will hold you all go n eat before it goes cold.
Everyone eats Rashi was quiet as it seemed everyone ignored her they were more focused on Gopi n her son. Aham stole glances at gopi once in a while he would wink as well. Time for Gopi n kaka to leave Aham heart sinks i dont want her to leave, he tells his mom he will go with them he wants them to arrive safe n well, Aham ji we will be fine, but Gopi plse kaka ji say let him come. Gopi agree she takes Aj from Aham n covers him with a shawl to protect him from the night wind. kokila n hetal all hug kiss gopi n aj they leave.
At Gopis house gauri n lallu were waiting for them, Gopi tells them to go to sleep they need their rest. Kaka blesses Gopi n shakes Ahams hand, n strokes Aj hair good night. Gopi n Aham walk up the stairs Gopi puts Aham in his crib, Aham looks at her, Gopi do you mind if i stay here tonight, gopi nods her head, she shuts the door. Aham grabs Gopi n hugs hers she also hugs him back.
He lifts her up in his arms n walks towards the bed, he kisses her sorry guys lights out again😆.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Suk just caught up with all your updates. Last one to comment. 😭 Absolutely loved it. I cant totally picture AJ as a little Ahem what a cutie.
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part 9

gopi wakes up at 4am aj n aham were sleeping she goes to the bathroom to get ready for the day. She goes downstairs n does puja n then walks round the house with the incest sticks, she was about to go into her bedroom but then remember what Aham ji said he had allergy to them, she left. She goes downstairs n makes breakfast poori n dalh n chutney, she then remember that Aham ji does not eat pooris she makes paneer paratha instead. Gauri comes n helps her she tells her to go as Aj will be waking up soon, Gopi leaves.she is walking up the stairs n hears aj jai shree krishna papa, Aham replies back jai shree krishna buddy, Gopi walks in she greets Aham n aj, my suna munna has woken up Aj puts his hands up mummy ji Gopi lifts him up n kisses him mummy ji milk. Gopi agrees she sits down on the couch n feeds Aj, she strokes his hair. She says Ahamji both reply Aj replies while he was drinking milk Gopi smiles you drink up. Ahamji shower up i have made breakfast, Aham nods Gauri knocks on the door, Gopi didi Aham bhai ka driver is hear with his clothes i am going to leave them hanging out side. Ji Gauri aur suniya wake up kaka ji. ji Gopi didi. Aj stops drinking Gauri gauri i,m coming too, Baba Baba he runs out Gopi goes n gets Aham clothes, she puts them on the bed Aham who is already out of bed walks towards her he has a look he just stares at her he nuzzles her ears, just then Aj comes running back in, papa where r you going beta i am going into the shower, Aj runs in first, Aham laughs n runs behind him he then bathes him whilst Aham is shaving aj puts shaving cream on n starts to do the same. Aham puts cologne on so does aj, it was fun n games.
Gopi went downstairs n layed out the table, Aham n aj n kaka all come together, Gopi goes n hugs them all. Gauri go n give Ahamji driver some breakfast ji gopi didi.Aham ate n leaves he hated to leave but what to do he has to go meeting with clients etc. he has his breakfast kisses aj hugs gopi n shakes kakas hand i shall see you tonight.
Gopi gets a phone call ji maji, gopi dikra Baa wants to know if you are coming over today, plse come as baa wants to see Aj when he is not so tired, Ji maji, kaka ji n i are just off to the office i will come after ajs first nap. ji Gopi vahu.
The day started out well Gopi got new clients for a major catering job one of the biggest jobs hshe has done, then the new restaurant had people queuing outside as it was very popular. kaka tells gopi you go to your sassural's house but be careful of that rashi, kaka ji i am worried especially after yesterday will you come, Gopi beta no it will not look good no kaka ji papa is there he usually sits there listening to music or writing poetry plse i just dont want aj to get hurt again. ok gopi beta i will come.
Aham at his office he cant think of work all he can think of is Gopi, Aham n kaka he sees jigar, jigar he shouts, ji bhai i need help i want to send something to Gopi remember the time you sent flowers something like that to Gopi send her flowers bhai gopi bhabi loves flowers, no i want it to be different, how about chocolates jewellery no different Bhai i am lost u want different. Aham still thinks i know she needs to relax, i will take Aj for a few hours with kaka. Bhai wonderful idea.
Back at mm Rashi calls up urmilla she tells her that Gopi is coming again with her brat, urmilla tells her be careful be nice we want Gopi to give us money she can support us she stayed here for free we fed her bathe her she owes us that much. i shall come with kinjal in a little while, kinjal hears everything she says to herself i am not going to let them get away with anything.
Gopi arrives at mm Rashi opens the door jai shree krishna Aj looks away Gopi n kaka greet her back
kokila comes running down the stairs Aham you have come, Aham shouts Baa he jumps out of Gopis arms into kokila, hetal comes from the kitchen Aham she shouts all are delighted to see her, parag comes kaka come in sit down, kokila calls marni to get tea n snacks for kaka. Ma ji Baa Gopi vahu go n get her i want to spend time with my diamond here. Gopi goes to Baa room she is praying, Baa Gopi vahu you have come ji baa you said it i will not come that will never happen. Where is my great grandson Gopi replies he is with his baa, Gopi hears outside jai shri krishna Gopi helps baa out of bed n walks slowly with her outside. Urmilla arrives with kinjal, kinjal sees kokila happy with Aj ma is this Aham bhai n gopi bhabis son, ji kinjal, he looks exactly like bhai, Gopi walks in with baa urmilla shreaks Gopi beta where did you go? we looked everywhere for you? Gopi just looks at urmilla refusing to acknowledge her, beta i am your mother, you are unhappy with me, She goes over to hug Gopi, who is sitting Baa down. Gopi looks at her in a way no you dont, kaka looks at her ur the same women who came to the new restaurant n refused to pay her bill, nahi nahi , urmilla looking embarrassed, kaka continues you also said that you were Gopis mother just like you are saying now, Gopi has not acknowledge you yet you threatened to have all of us fired from our jobs. Nahi Nahi it was not me, oh really we have surviellence dvd of you as we have posted them throughout the 8 restaurants warning staff about you. i have it in the car one minute i will get it, kinjal says kaka ji i will come with you. kinjal likes kaka. Kakaji i am kinjal ahams sister, i know i also did a lot of bad things to gopi but i have changed, those two in there they are out to destroy Gopi they want her to start to pay for them plse dont let gopi bhabhi get fooled. Beta dont worry Gopi isnt that naive anymore. They both walk inside, kaka here let me play this for you, kinjal beta who wants to see this urmilla replies, kinjal grabs urmilla hand we all do, kinjal puts it on there is urmilla stuffing her face telling customers her daughter owns this place, then the drama about payment, kokila taunts urmilla vivan ji that looks exactly like you are you sure you dont have a twin sister, urmilla laughs nervously, kinjal dikra we need to leave, Aunty dhawal ji said i could stay until night time i will leave once i have played with my nephew. Urmilla rushes out of the door Rashi who is looking at all of this i will get you back old man for making a mokery out of my mum. kinjal goes over to Gopi Jai shree krishna Gopi Bhabi, kinjalben how are you? Gopi bhabi i am so sorry i deserve your punishment. i hurt you a lot. gopi smiles u are forgiven, Ahamji come here, he comes running this is your fey your papas sister. jai shree krishna fey, kinjal says soo cute, Baa jai shree krishna Aham dikra Ahamji this is your par baa your great baa he looks confused see dada over there she is his mummy. oh still confused never mind.
Gopi had a very good morning with everyone she left after lunch as it was Aj nap time , she also went to sleep
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😍👍🏼👏 What else can I say?
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I have no words!! Beautiful :)
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Suk, you made so many updates so quickly, funny and great story.

I can totally see Aham saying when Kaka asked him as the restaurant if he forgot something he says yes my wife and son.

& it's the first time i have ever seen a reconciliation of husband and wife by the nosy press. That was funny but at the same time, i felt like clobbering them, they ask questions not really about the restaurant maybe they are not specific to get customers to come (so advertising), if it was a food critic it would have been better, Gopi would get the advertising but at the same time specific to the food served rather than free for all type questions that were put to her by general press, which are looking for additional stories to sell their newspapers.
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Suk, - Urmila says, Do you know the customers were saying some of the early morning customers got diamond earrings can you believe? if that is how she does business she will lose everything... both laugh jai shree krishna.

You have captured Urmila's speech and behavior so well also Rashi excuse, i was scratching my self and by mistake scratched the child, with an innocent face too to the family, that's how she gets away with things, she is fast thinker, but you have her now.

Great story.

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