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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 10- Rashi as a changed woman, haldi rasam starts, follow that sangeet starts

Rashi is at the door all sad about what she has done. As she enters she see the Singhania family and notices Lawyer dhananjay and gets a fright. Jigar brings her in and whispers: don't be afraid I tell u later, and will talk to u later.

She learns that it is Koki brothers family and greets them and takes blessing. They also finds out she is gopi cousins sister. Malaika starts to tease her and asks her to show her around and leads her to the kitchen. They have a chat and rashi starts to cook. It took them 15 minutes and rashi comes out and says: Kakiji, mom, the food is ready and the table is set.

While rashi goes she cleans up the kitchen while everyone has food. Koki was worried as she was afraid to know if rashi has done some garbar. While everyone had the food , Singhania has been impressed. It was night and rashi took them to their rooms and went to her room and sees everyone is there. She got worried, and everyone changed their mood and blessed her and forgave her.

The next day was the haldi rasam and the sangeet. It was 12am , and guest started to arrive. Aehem wore his casual clothes , his sherwani. Everyone starts to put haldi on him and on the other hand, there was haldi going on in the Virani house. Everyone was pleased. Later on, Panna enters the modi mansion and surprises everyone. She has been changed. While Koki brings her in , panna runs to Rashi and says: what happened today, why u not talking about kagdi and choti kaagdi?

Everyone burst out laughin to see Panna teasin Rashi, until Panna came to Aehem, she coughed and started to speak like him and put haldi on him.

Panna: what happened now, why you not pleased. U should be happy ur unpar gawar wife is coming back to u , and now she is fully educated and still will u call her unpar. I am sure it be a laugh seeing u again in the same way.

Everyone starts to laugh and sees that panna is teasing her jiju. Aehem shouts at her and says : I see u are irritating me , go away

Panna: I am not like ur wife that will get afraid for ur anger, and run away and start to cry. Dhananjay backs her up and says she is right now take her taunts bhai.

Haldi rasam finishes and it was 5pm Aehem goes for a long shower and comes out and wears blue sherwani and sits down for a while.

It was 7pm more guests came, Rashi , Malaika, Panna and Mani is in the kitchen getting the food ready while everyone is outside gretting everyone to come in. There comes Ansh, Damini and Gopi with the Guests. Everyone gathers around and koki goes brings the thali and welcomes her vau in. Gopi was looking stunning, she was wearing Blue with gold. She knew Aehem was going to wear blue her heart was saying it. Music starts, Aehem comes down and everyone turns around and stood shocked. They knew Gopi was right why wouldn't she, she his wife

Viren and Nivideta comes in and dances on mehndi lagake rakhna, and brings Damini and gopi in. everyone knew gopi was a dancer, viren teased her and they start to dance.

Aehem had his mouth wide opened as he could not believe what he saw until, he saw rashi and ansh jump in to that song.

(to be continued in the next chapter)

Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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this was stunning hun
eagerly waiting for the next chapter....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh pls ayesha cont soon both parts amzing this for yu my dear pls cont soonnnnnnn


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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks everyone for liking it surely continue on tomorow
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Chapter 11- Continuation of last chapeter

Aehem had his mouth wide opened

Dhananjay: mr perfect what happened? You jealous of ansh and jigar dancing with bhabhi?

Aehem: well am not jealous am annoyed,

Jigar: why?

Aehem: any man wud get annoyed by seeing their wife dancing with another man

Damini: look at rashi and Malaika, they are dancing dananjay and jigar are not annoyed or jealous. In fact there Jealous of u, coz u have gopi

Jigar and Dhananjay had their mouth wide opened and got angry as she announced to bhai what they thought of their bhabhi and didn't spare her. They all did mischief like 5 year old. But why wont they, it's a wedding, re wedding of their brother

The sangeet was half way through and the mehndi was two days later and following that was the real wedding, the saat phere

Rashi was changed, she was upset for the fact she hasn't seen her sister for 5 months now and went and hugged her. They both enjoyed and danced also mucked about as they have met for the 1st time.

The sangeet was over, everyone sat down in the main hall and Gopi brought tea for everyone. It had been 9 months no one had drank it from her except ansh, Damini and the singhania. Suddenly baa health got worse. Chiraq called the ambulance while everyone was gathered around her while the ambulance came.

The ambulance came took her and put the mask on as her breathing went low. Everone left the modi mansion except from mani and kinjal. Even lawyer mihir sanghvi came as the hospital was owned by his wife purva. Everyone was upset and crying.purva came out from the icu and told them baa is critical. There might not be any hope she be surviving as she is on her last stage of life. Do pray to Kanaji, as he will sort everything out.

Purva goes back to the ICU and starts to do her check up and that, but after 45 minutes baa breathing system began to slow down and went down and down.

Baa told Purva, : "tell the family, I have lived long, now chiraq has the responsibilities of the house while Aehem will have the business, As due to the marriage do continue to do it after my death, I surely will tell kanaji when I go to him to protect the family from evil. And for Gopi, she was like my daughter not my grandchild, always took care of me while I got ill. For rest of the family, take care of yourself and the family and take their side. My last wish which I want is Ansh and Damini to live in my house as my Grandchildren, brother of Aehem, jigar, kinjal and Dhananjay. I will feel bad if they refuse."

Baa dies right there, and purva starts to cry.She gathers hope, and goes outside and doesn't say anyting

Chirag: what happened ?

Hetal: what happened why are u soo quiet?

Purva gathers hope and says: Am sorry, Baa is no longer with us anymore and she told me to let u know her last wish.

Everyone greets badly, hetal faints, Aehem and everyone hurt, gopi crying and went to Aehem and hugs him. Aehem tries to console her.

Parag ansh, and Damini: what was the last wish she said

Purva: baa said "tell the family, I have lived long, now chiraq has the responsibilities of the house while Aehem will have the business, As due to the marriage do continue to do it after my death, I surely will tell kanaji when I go to him to protect the family from evil. And for Gopi, she was like my daughter not my grandchild, always took care of me while I got ill. For rest of the family, take care of yourself and the family and take their side. Kinjal, do take care of urself as ur a married lady. My last wish which I want is Ansh and Damini to live in my house as my Grandchildren, brother of Aehem, jigar, kinjal and Dhananjay. I will feel bad if they refuse."

Everyone was shocked and cried. The wedding was cancelled until 2 months, they all went home with baa body and put her in the middle.

Kinjal and mani gathered hope and called everyone, and told them about Baa.

Everyone, the whole of Rajkot, was shocked and horrified to know what happened.

Everyone came to the Modi Mansion and met everyone, and after a while they took the body and buried it.

Chirag and Parag were extremely upset as their baa could not see her granchildrens children.

(didnt want anyone getting sad, but had to write it as it was part of the Scenario, sorry friends.)

Posted: 14 years ago
#66
Aww baa passed away :( great update though! Thx!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great update. Sorry that Baa passed😭 .
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Chapter 12


It has been 3 days baa has passed away, everyone was unhappy then finally chirag spoke:' kinjal sab ko yaha bulao'
Kinjal goes and gets everyone, calls Ansh and Damini and goes and get jeetendra and neetu from their room. They all come and sit in the main hall deciding what to do. Parag brings the topic about Baa last wish and talks about it. Chirag speaks : " Ansh aur Damini I have considered u always as my son and Daughter in law but I want u to decide if u gnna fulfill baa wish by staying here forever but I will not tell u to change business and come to mines but u keep urs and we keep ours if we want but talk about business later"
Damini: kakaji I don't have any problem staying here, I have never experienced how sasural will be coz I never seen mines as they died while ansh was 9.
Ansh: I have decided that according to baa wish me and damini will be ready to shift over here tonight if u all don't mind
Everyone was happy they were going to shift, but aehem, jigar,kinjal and dhananjay was extremly happy as there new brother will be stayin here from now on.
Everything was sorted out, due to the wish of baa and they fixed gohem marriage for 7 phere. It been fixed for next month and chirag told everyone to move on in life as in life there always people dying.
After 2 weeks everything was back to normal, morning started of from puja by rashi, damini, gopi and malaika all four bahu of Modi house. Gopi gave aarti to everyone and aehem was the last one, Aehem was looking at her but he was upset the fact that she hasn't spoke to him since sangeet as he thought she still is scared of him. While the food been laid out gopi served everyone, and aehem took his hand and held her hand and never let her go. Ansh, Koki, Chirag, Parag, Jeetendra and neetu glanced at them and laughed quietly as they haven't seen Aehem romancing ever in life. Kokila spoke up: Aehem dikra,
Aehem: yes mom
Kokila: enough of ur romancing and leave my gopi vau hand
Everyone burst out laughing and Dhawal spoke: jiju yeh kya ap ki shaadi hoi nai aur romance shuru, ek dum best in best hai ji
Aehem : mom even u backing all of them especially ur gopi vau, all I hear from u is gopi gopi gopi never my name
Rashi: jiju, don't annoy my sister ever or else ill go back to my old self and haunt u in this life
Everyone burst out laughing again until they heard someone at the door.(It was Viren and Nivideta the one who danced on sangeet - was the cousin of jigar meaning hetal sisters son and daughter in law)
They came to help for the marraige
Edited by ayesha_78 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i am sad about Baa, but it was an awesome update hun...
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Welcome diya, I never wanted to put that in but then I changed my mind
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