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Posted: 14 years ago
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Kinjal's wedding was over...Though Koki was not in a state to accept it...she was now relieved that her daughter was married...Now it was in her daughter's hands to handle Urmi and get along with her husband...All were talking about the wedding when suddenly they all saw Gopi coming down with a bag....All were shocked to see this....But Koki realised what she was doing....And she glanced back at Ahem, who as usual was standing still glaring...Gopi told everybody that she was keeping her promise that she will leave after Kinjlal's wedding...Everybody was shocked and willing that Ahem would stop Gopi but nothing could budge him..Finally Gopi left the house.

Urmi was so happy that the choti kagdi was her bahu now and was in her dreamland when somebody knocked the door....All came out wondering who was it at this time....All were shocked to see Gopi....Urmi taunted her and Gopi told that she has left the house for good...And she couldnt utter a word except gaping at Gopi and showing her 50 inch tooth and "HAi Hai kya bolechu".

Kinjal was shell shocked seeing that Gopi had kept her vows and left the house...Dhawal felt bad for Gopi and recommended to his Fayi that she should stay here since she doesnt have any place to go...Urmi , since she couldnt show her real face to him, had to accept it.

Gopi was so sad and always thinking about Modi house and especially Ahem....Kinjal though not very friendly with Gopi, was observing all this...She was thinking this gawar bhabhi is so much in love with bhai? or Modi house money? But she strongly felt the former was right and her bhabhi was never a gold-digger but didnt want to accept the fact...

Aham felt bad for his mom, and that he too had let her down...But he did not want the illiterate, gold-digger in his house anymore...The fact that she was a gold-digger was nagging him...If that was the case, why was she helping him and his family? he couldnt understand...
Kokila wanted Ahem to polish some vessels and jewels to be given as gift to Kinjal as it was a ritual...She was looking into Gopi's wardrobe for something, when she came across a letter....
She was shell-shocked to see that letter...She called Aham and asked him regarding it...Aham told her everything and told her about the necklace set that Gopi had ordered...Koki was shocked and told him to shut up...She told him that her Gopi Vau was a simple girl and she would never have done that....She made a vow to find out the truth...

First and foremost she identified the handwriting and made sure she spoke to Kinjal regarding it....After lots of threatening from Koki, Kinjal admitted writing the letter and blurted out that she helped Umang in so many ways, but she ended up wit ha gawar like her bhabhi...Koki slapped her and asked her what more she wanted...Kinjal says she wanted a happy life for herself, what not she had done, she had made Gopi look like a gold-digger, created misunderstandings between aham and gopi, so that she can separate them and anita will get aham back and she would get Umang and so on...Aham who was at the entrance, was shocked to hear all this....

The man that he was, he could'nt believe that his sister could stoop to this level....He thought of all the things he had said and done to Gopi....Koki came to his room and asked him if he understood that her Gopi Vau was pure and simple? For this only she had made him listen to her conversation to Kinjal...Also she shared some of her thoughts about Raashi and Urmi to him and told him to think about all this and decide about their life...

Ahem thought a lot about everything....THough Anita was his love, Gopi was his wife...But he couldnt accept her and love her but he could respect her now...He wanted to do correct his mistakes...so he went to Urmi's house, and had a long talk with Gopi....and brought he back to Modi house...
He had asked for her forgiveness and Gopi being the girl she was , readily forgave him...All were happy to see them back together....Later Aham told Gopi to move into their room.....He had told Gopi already that he would try his best to take care of her and her feelings from now on..Though he cannot readily accept her as his wife, he will share a friendly rapport with her and he had requested some time for their realtionship to grow.....

.From here starts the slow build up in their relationship...😊


I have tried my best....Do comment please...


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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏👏 Very well written. Nice start and finish. Enjoyed reading it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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fantastic pity the cvs dont read our ff again a nother perfect story for them
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Kudos Hun... i will consider this as your next prediction😉.... then it will come true sooner...

Please write more...
Posted: 14 years ago
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Yup! Me too! Enjoyed the story :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I want Sherlock Koki back 👍🏼...Thats why i gave it a try....I wonder if CV's use their brain a little, they could give us nice tracks....But they are so hung up on the same track for months together
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Posted: 14 years ago
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actually... intelligence report says, CVs are on extended break since we have been cursing them left right because of a slow moving story... so now story is at a stand still... lolzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Well Written and disclosed all the hidden Facts of the show...hope CVs will do something like this..
and as diya said...u are the Ultimate Predictor of the forum...so m all set to watch this scenario in show soon.....


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yes! our Oracle has spoken! I hope it happens! Wonderful OS.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Me too...👏👏👏

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