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Next Part-20

Gopi sits at the table with everyone else and eats while ahem who is standing upstairs peeks at her and smiles. He goes into his room. Gopi and the rest finished eating and hetal tells them to go sleep as its very early.

They all go to their prospective room. gopi enters her heaven (gopi's room lol) and sees ahem pacing around the room awake.

gopi: ahem ji why aren't you sleeping? what happened?

ahem: O when did you come?

gopi: just now, what happened?

ahem: you finished eating?

Gopi : yes, but what happened?

ahem: if you finished then feed me!

gopi: What?

ahem: Yes, look you just had your food and now fasting, now feed me so i can fast as wel.

gopi: But only women fast

ahem: who sed?

gopi: your impossible, you cant fast

ahem: yes i will fast for you

gopi: No wont be good, what are people going to say?

ahem: they wont know

gopi: Noo its ok im fasting thats enough

ahem: If you can fast for me, why can i fast for you?

Gopi couldnt argue any1 and gave it. She went to the kitchen, took out some food and brought it in the room. ahem sits on the bed and gopi sits beside him and feeds him like a little kid.

Atfer she finishes, gopi takes the plate from her hand and goes to put it in the kitchen and come back to find gopi sleeping. He smiles and gets on the bed next to her and sleeps putting his hands on her waist.

Few hours later, gopi wakes up and panics cause she woke up late. She looks around for dutta but doesnt find him in the room, she checks the bathroom and its empty. She wonders where he is gone. gopi takes a shower, gets ready and goes downstairs. She sees jigar..

Nakku: jigar ji

Jigar:yes bhabi..

gopi: wer is ahem ji?

jigar: he's gone out but will be back soon, dw

gopi: what? but he didnt even tell me

jigar: you were sleeping thats y!

gopi: okay, when he comes let me know

jigar: okayy

gopi goes to the kitchen to prepare some sweet for KC. gopi comes and helps her.

kokila, hetal and mani are helping each other decorating the house while jigar is reading some file on the sofa. Kinjal who was helping gopi is the kitchen gets called by panna and she leaves. Just then ahem walks in the house and looks for gopi. He sees jigar sitting down and reading something.

ahem: jigar

jigar: hey bro you?

ahem: yes wer is gopi?

jigar: what a world I must say? Gopi bhabi is finding you and you are finding gopi bhabi!, awsomr looks for me!

ahem: stop this nautanki and tell me quick.

jigar: kitchen i think

ahem: okay

He walks away with lots of bags in his hands. He peeks in the kitchen so that ahem doesnt see him and he puts the bags down quietly and runs behind her and hugs her from the back. Gopi jumps and pushes him away with her elbow as her hands are in flour. Ahem continues to hug her.

ahem: you want help?

gopi: noo

ahem: but i want to help

gopi: well if you want to help then go from here and dont disturb me

ahem puts his hands in the flour as well and starts doing it with her getting his hands all dirty. He caresses gopi's hand and plays with the flour. gopi couldnt push him away cause she was feeling too good to push this moment away.

Just then rashi, kokila,hetal and kinjal walks in... (sorryyy i had to bring Kebab mein haddiss)

goehm sees them and ahem pulls away and gopi straightens up.

rashi,kokila and hetal staring and smiling...

ahem: .. Ermm there was something in the flour and i was taking it out! Could point see it so i thought i would help

hetal: how big was it? that you had to use 2 hands?

ahem: woh.. i used both because there were 2 things.

rashi: was the thing gopi's hand?

ahem. i told you there was something in there.

kokila: its okay, go wash your hands

ahem: yes, *turns to gopi* see cause of you my hands got flour. next time i won't help you.

gopi giggles shyly.

ahem takes the bags which was on the floor outside the kitchen and goes to his room.

He takes out a beautiful red and gold saree and matching jewelleries out of the bag and puts it on the bed. In the other bag, there were flowers to put on hair and then he got high heels for gopi. He takes out a red sherwani out of another bag and puts it on the bed next to the saree.

Scene shifts...

gopi finishes cooking and decides to get ready as guests will soon come. kokila also tells her to go as she will be late. Every1 goes to get ready..

gopi enters her room and sees ahem next to the bed.

gopi: I am going shower, when I am done you go.

Ahem: no lets go together so it saves time

gopi: no!

she runs to the bathroom but ahem gets hold of the door and enter the bathroom as well and he closes the door. Both him and gopi are inside! (we all know what they are doing)

After a little while they both come out in towels and ahem take gopi to the bed and show her what he bought for her for KC. She touched by his gestures and hugs him. He hugs her back!

gopi gets ready and ahem puts the flower in her hair. He also puts her sindoor and mangalsutra.

ahem: as long as I am breathing, i will put ur sindoor n mangalsutra everyday for you

gopi blushes and puts her head in his chest and he kisses her head.

Scene shifts...

Everyone on the terrace waiting for moon and gopi walks in. Every1 praises her saying she looks beautiful. Kokila puts kajal behind gopis eyes to prevent evil eyes (KALA's EYES!)

kokila: where is ahem?

gopi: i duno, he was right here but went somewhere

kokila: its ok he will come.

gopi: yes

kokila: come lets go over there.

rashi walks with hetal and other women and they are all waiting her chand!

They all see the moon and rashi and gopi looks for her other Chand (ahem). Just then he makes his big entry in red sherwani looking dashingly handsome. (between he wasnt dressed when gopi was in the room, he had towel on)

Every1 looks at him happily as he proceeds towards gopi and smiles at her. She starts her prayer, pour water, looks at the chand and then ahem. In her taali, there was two cups of water, she took one and ahem took one, they made each other drink at the same time. jigar who was watching, informs every1 loudly that ahem was fasting for gopi that's why he didn't eat and now he's drinking water off gopi's hands. Ahem looks at him angrily and then blushes.

Will update the next part soon..

i hope you like it

Please comment!

Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

what the? jigar has become soo naughty, totally

continue soon <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
haila!!!!.....that kitchen scene was soooooooooooo cute n romantic😍......i'm in love with ahem....
ur updates are a real treat😊....continue fast......
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Am alrready in lala land ;) :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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please continue. i think you need to proofread it before uploading because there are some places where you have done some naming mistakes. please dont mind. thanks.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😍I am in La La Land, call me later
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg cant wait for the next part plz update soon
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thanks all of you and i will take care of naming and all and thanks for your support.......


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Next part-21

Recap : KC is on! gohem breaks each others fast.

STORY CONTINUES FROM YESTERDAY...

Jigar informs everyone that ahem was fasting and now he is breaking his fast with gopi's hands. Ahem looks at jigar angrily but then blushes. Hetal and kokila are happy that ahem Kept a fast for his dear wife. Everyone else laughs at jigar's statement and blesses gohem.

After the KC pooja, everyone goes to the hall to enjoy themselves. Gopi is with kokila, rashi is with hetal and kinjal with her saas and some women sitting on the floor talking while ahem is with jigar and some other boys talking and take glances at her every second (loool).

*Aakhon ki gustakiyaan maaf ho* (Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam) song comes on!!

ahem follows gopi everywhere and tries holding her waist behind a pillar when some girls pull gopi with them leaving ahem longing for her. gopi runs away with the girls and gives a naughty wink to ahem which makes him drool over her.

(Song still playing) gopi sitting on the floor with the girls and talking (but the talk is muted as the song is playing) and ahem comes sit behind her touching her hands and hair. She pushes him with her elbow without any1 noticing but he grabs her waist and holds onto her hands. Hetal comes and takes gopi with her and ahem sits there alone feeling defeated. Then he sees gopi going to the terrace alone and follows her!

On the terrace, gopi is taking the taali which has flowers in there, she turns to find ahem. He comes towards her, near her, more near till she could feel his breath on her face and he takes the taali away. *kaajal ka ek til tumhare labon pe lagadoon(this is the lyrics of the song)* ahem takes gopi's kajals from her eyes with his fingers and puts them on her lips and tries to kiss her but she runs to the swing and sits on it. He walks towards her slowly, sits with her and they sit in each others arm. (its those big swings that 4 people can sit on & its white decorated with flowers). They start lipsing the song as though they are singing it and ahem kisses gopi's neck and eyes. She holds onto him tightly and he grabs her hands. She stands up and turns to him and sings "yeh zindagi aapki hi amaanat rahegi, dil mein sada aapki mohabbat rahegi, in saason ko aapki zaroorat rahegi!" (Song lyrics) runs to him and hugs him. He hugs her tightly and closes his eyes while kissing her head.

*Song Finishes*

They come to their senses when kokila calls for gopi; she breaks the hug, grabs the taali and runs downstairs. Ahem looks at her and sigh (Hayyeee). He also goes downstairs, he walks towards jigar but his eyes looks for gopi. Him and jigar talking when gopi comes there and gives kokila the taali and she goes with the women (random people in Patil Niwas for KC loool).

They pooja and party is finished and every1 leaving modi mansion. They all bid goodbye to gohem, raaji {raashi and jigar},.. basically to every1.

Every1 goes to their room to sleep and Voila its morning time already (time goes fast in MM).

ahem in the hall and gopi comes with Tea, She serves him and just then ahem gets a call. gopi goes in kitchen. Some office workers comes there to meet ahem. Gopi comes with tea and pakoras and greets them. Ahem introduce gopi as Gopi ahem modi, Meri Patni! (someone's proud!)

The men greets her and the 2 young boys (not exactly boys but they are young maybe gopi's age) checks out gopi. gopi feels uncomfortable and goes from there. ahem sees this and feels jealous and tries change the conversation. But his blood still boiling, he remembers gopi's words that she doesn't like him when he is angry so he decided not to create a drama in MM mansion but if he sees him on the road he will kill him right there. ahem excuses himself and goes to the kitchen where gopi is and tells her not to come out until those people are gone. gopi teases him and tells him he jealous but he denies it and says he doesn't like people looking at his wife and holds her hands. gopi tells him she doesn't care about anyone else, she's lucky to have him as her husband, he kisses her forehead and goes back to the hall.

ahem have some conversation with them and those people leave. He comes to the kitchen to look for gopi but doesn't see her; he gets worried .He goes outside and gopi is putting clothes to dry and humming. Ahem comes from behind and hugs her, she tells him to go as she has lots of work to do. Just then jigar comes there and ahem lets go of gopi. They both turn towards jigar and ask him what happened? jigar tells ahem he's going to office and ahem should come too. gopi tells ahem to go but come back quick. ahem smiles and was about to walk away but take a last glimpse of gopi who is about to faint. ahem gets the shock of his life and holds her. Jigar also runs towards gopi who is in ahem arm unconscious. Ahem shouting gopi's name worriedly, while jigar runs inside to call every1. kokila,hetal, rashi. urmila comes there running to see ahem holding unconscious gopi. jigar is on the phone calling doctor while ahem carries gopi to the room.

Lool thats it for today.. Hope you liked it and please comment.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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I am guessing a Ahem junior or Gopi junior on the way LOL, loved the update, you keep sending me to LA LA Land, loved the song.

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