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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow that was nice...waiting for next part...
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My hindi is not very good - so I will have to have some read it . Then i will post my comments
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i am also waiting for the next part.
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wow wow wow...i loved the whole of it and am waiting fr much more...i hope that they take some scenes from this and really show it on tv...i will record them and save them and watch them all the time....i think that i am falling in love.thanks and pls continueeeeeeeeeeeee

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NEXT PART-22

Ahem picks gopi up in his strong arms and takes her to his room.Ahem calls the doctor and runs to Gohem room with the whole generation behind him lool i mean kokila,hetal,rashi,jigar ,chirag, and the rest (too many to name lol)

Ahem puts gopi on the bed gently and holds her hands shockingly and he also shaking. Every1 enters the room worried. Kokila and hetal looks really worried. Just then the Doctor and 2 nurses come and they ask where the patient is. Jigar points to the room, the doctor goes in and tells every1 to go out while she checks her. (The doctor is a woman). Ahem is looking at gopi absent minded without hearing one word the doctor said. The doctor again tells ahem to go out but jigar comes in telling her that ahem is the patient's husband so please let him stay with her. Doctor smiles at jigar and says ok. Jigar smiles, he walks out the room and the door shuts.

Inside, the doctor walks towards the bed and sees gopi. She's shock. And she has a flashback of her and gopi playing around together a few years ago and gopi was her best friend until she totally lost her. Back to present.

Doctor:gopiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!

Ahem comes out his shock and looks at the nurse weirdly thinking how does she know her.

Doctor: Omg gopi what happened to you?

Ahem: how do you know my wife?

Doctor: She was my best friend, she's my gopi.

ahem: What's Your Name?

Doctor: My name is Nisha Mehra.

ahem: Okay please check what happened to gopi! She was fine then she just fainted.

doctor: Okay please step aside.

The 2 nurse comes in with the equipment's and they start checking gopi while ahem looks on worriedly.

Nisha: she's fine, there's nothing to get worried about. But...

Ahem cuts her off: But What??? What happened? Anything wrong?

Nisha: Relax ahem ji, She's fine. But she needs a lot of care and rest.

ahem: What? I didn't understand.

Nisha: Congratulations ahem, Your going to be a Father. (I kno some people doesn't want gopi pregnant, but the story needs to move and i cant keep repeating the romance now can i)

The camera rounds ahem,, 360 degreesss turn (lool).. He's eyes are wet, he cant believe what he just heard.

ahem: ermm,, ha kya?

Nisha: Gopi is pregnant!

ahem: gopi, Ma, Baap, Mein?

Nisha: yes sonn u will going to be a father!

ahem: Mein Papa..

ahem runs to unconscious gopi and hugs her. Nisha tells one of the nurse to open the door and call every1 inside. Nurse1 opens the door and sees every1 with a very sad face. She tells them to come in. Nurse2 tells them there's nothing to get worried about. Nisha Congratulates every1. Every1 looks confused.

Nisha: Well You don't have to worry because gopi is Pregnant.

kokila: What????? (they sed it together lol)

Nisha: yes gopi is pregnant and she just needs to do 3 things. 1. Stay Happy. 2. Eat lots of healthy food and 3. Don't do any work and rest.

kokila: gopi is pregnant mota babi, look our daughter is pregnant.

hetak: yess kanha ji tera laakh laakh sukar hai!

Jigar : Areeeee mein chacha ban gayaa,...

Rashi:aur mey chichi'.wow

panna joins in and dances along. ahem was still next to gopi. hetal and kokila walks up to him and congratulates him. He hugs kokila and hetal together.

Nisha is laughing at panna..

Nisha: Aree vah, bohut acha naachte ho

panaa: sukriya

Nisha: Aapka naam kya hai?

panna: panna. Gopiben, rashiben meri badi behaney hai (well panna is smaller and orphan..)

Nisha: okay well im Nisha Mehra, gopi ka best Friend.

jigar: you know gopi bhabi?

Nisha: Yes, We use to live next to each other but then one day she was gone..

jigar: oh okay well your welcome to come here anytime to meet your friend.. and every1 else.

Nisha: sure, and from now on i will be gopi'doctor, so i have to keep coming for her check ups.

jigar: really? Yes Yes Sure Come Everyday. I mean Anyday.

Nisha: Okay byee

jigar: bye, see you soon

Nisha walks out the modi mansion with her 2 nurse. Jigar looks at her going and thinking if she turns then she likes him. Just then Nisha turns and waves him goodbye and stands there like a statue looking at her longingly. Rashi comes to jigar and sees him angrily.

He comes to his senses when kokila call him and they go to bedroom.

jigar: Yes kaki, you called me?

kokila: ahem asked for you

jigar: yes bhai?

ahem: Get the house decorated, tomorrow we will throw a party, and oh please call Nisha first as she is nakku's best friend and doctor, make sure you invite her.

Jigar got really happy: Okay yes ofcourse, first on the list will be Nisha

ahem: Hmph Nautanki, go make the calls and tell every1 to decorate the house.

Just then gopi gains conscious and looks at ahem who is next to her. She sits up and looks at every1's smiling faces.

gopi: Kya hua?

ahem: I duno, you tell me! Why did you faint?

gopi: i dnt, i was putting clothes to dry when suddenly i felt like the sky was moving and i fell

ahem: Do you know the reason?

gopi: no is everything ok?

ahem: Yes absolutely.

kokila: everything is more than ok

hetal: We are all very happy

gopi: i don't understand

jigar: bhabi aap bi na u r so innocent.

ahem: Haan bohut boli'

gopi: kya?

ahem: If i have to share my love for you with someone else, are you going to be ok with it?

Gopi with a sad face: whatever you think is right saab.

ahem: So you don't want me to love our child?

gopi: Child? What Child?

ahem: hey jaan you will a mother soon,!!!

Gopi gets the shock of her life: Main? Maa? Main?

ahem: haaan Tuuu!

kokila: aaj mein bohut khush hoon

hetal: jeete raho meri bacchii!

gopi: Aur haan, teri dost aayi thi, Nisha!

gopi: NISHA?????

ahem: yes she's your doctor and will be taking care of you.

rashi: yes and she will come often for your checkups. Dont worry you will see her at the party.

gopi: party? What party?

ahem: a party for you and the baby. I don't wana lose this moment.

gopi smiles shyly and looks at ahem who winks at her. Every1 leaves after blessing gohem and the Baby and they leave closing the door behind them. Gopi looks at ahem who is sparkling, she hugs him and he hug her back lightly as he doesn't want to hurt her. Ahem starts teasing her telling her she will be very big in a few months and he needs to buy very large clothes for her and gopi looks at him with a serious looks and ahem holds his ears and apologises to her. She smiles and hugs him again. They share a very happy moment sitting on the bed talking about the child.

Scene shifts...

Every1 seems confused. Jigar tells them that bro is going to be a dad and gopi mum. They all are very happy and say they will decorate the house like a bride.

Scene Shifts..

gopi resting and ahem comes in with juice and fruits. Gopi looks at all those things with wide opened eyes..

gopi: who is going to eat all this?

ahem: you

gopi: i cant even eat half of those

ahem: yes half for you, and half for baby.

gopi: oh nooo i cant eat all day, i will suffocate

ahem: well try atleast.

he starts feeding her and makes her drink the juice. Ahem fed everything to gopi and gopi is sitting der suffocating. Ahem laughs at her and she gives an angry look and then laughs. Both laugh together and hug each other.

IM SORRY PEOPLE, BUT SHE HAD TO BE PREGGY FOR THE STORY TO MOVE ON

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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
tats ok...its nice plz continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great update as usual😊.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was a great treat, what's up with Jigar and Nisha?
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Next Part-23

Its morning time and you see everyone running around the house doing the decorations. Everyone is in the hall except gopi. Ahem and jigar talking about the guest list. Hetal and rashi talking about the decorations. Kokila and the servants are talking about the food that will be served.

Just then gopi comes downstairs to see if everything is going well and ahem sees her coming down the stairs. He gives her a look as if he's saying "y cant she just stays in one place????Jigar looks up as well and sees gopi coming down. Ahem walks towards gopi.

Ahem: What are you doing here? You're meant to be resting! Common lets go back upstairs. *every1 turns towards Gohem when they heard ahem speaking*

Gopi: no i can't rest anymore, I am bored. I need to do some things.

Ahem: NOWAY!! Common lets go..

Gopi: No I am not going back upstairs. I can't stay in one room for the whole day

Ahem: who said you have to stay there for a whole day? You have to stay there for 8 months! Until the pregnancy is over!

Gopi: WHATTTTT???? Nooo please.. Okay i won't do any work but at least let me sit here.

Ahem nods and picks Gopi up in his arm and puts her on the sofa. He tells one of the servants to get some juice and fruits for Gopi. After a few minutes, the servant comes back and put the tray on the table in front of the sofa. Ahem picks up the juice and makes Gopi drink it. He cuts apples and peel oranges for her to eat. Kokila and Hetal see this, looks at each other and smiles then they both go upstairs. Jigar goes outside with rashi to check the decorations outside and just then urmila and dhawal and kinjal in laws also comes. Ahem kisses gopi's forehead and goes outside as well. Gopi stands up and hugs urmila and dhawal.Ahem gopi sits there and talks to her belly saying "beta {son} lets me do anything; I'm so bored; now you tell me, what I shall do??" Just then the TV comes on and Gopi starts watching TV and after a little while she falls asleep on the sofa. Ahem walks in looking at some file and tells Gopi to start getting ready as she takes very long but when he looks at her she's sleeping. He keeps his file on the table and picks gopi up again and goes in their bedroom.

Ahem puts Gopi on the bed. He goes to the wardrobe, opens it and takes out a saree for Gopi.

Ahem thinks he should get gopi dressed so that when she wakes up, she can just come downstairs.

Ahem goes to the bed near Gopi and pulls her up and holds her in his arm opening her dhori's at the back while she's still asleep. He takes off her blouse and puts another one on and tie the dhori's. And then he put another petticoat on her and left her saree's pallu on the bed as he cannot wrap it around her as she's sleeping. He makes her lay down again and covers her. He kisses her eyes and goes to the bathroom for shower.

30 minutes later...

Ahem comes out and finds Gopi awake.

Ahem: had a good sleep?

Gopi: I am sorry, i fell asleep

Ahem: y u sorry? Ur meant to sleep!

Gopi: I am not late am i?

Ahem: No.Your saree is on the bed, just wrap it around, i already changed ur choli and petticoat.

Gopi nods. She gets up and wraps her saree and pins it. She sits infront of her dressing table and puts her jewelleries on. Ahem wears his kurta and ask gopi if she's ready. She nods and they go walk towards the stairs together. Just as Ahem was going to go down the stairs, Ahem picks her up in his arms and brings her down. He makes her sit on the sofa and gives her juice. She drinks it and ahem goes over to Jigar.

ahem: jigar, the party is about to start, and i cant see Nisha, did you call her?

jigar: Ofcourse bro, i told her to come on time. Shall i call her again?

ahem: no wait a little bit, if she doesnt come by then, then you can call her!

jigar: okay bhai. Where is gopi bhabi?

ahem: she's on the sofa, go sit with her, I am coming back in a while.

jigar: where are you going?

ahem: dont ask questions, you know where i' am going, but don't tell gopi ok?

jigar: ohhh okayy okayy

jigar goes over to gopi but hetal tell jigar to call rashi and dhawal comes sits next to her talking to her.. ahem walks out from MM mansion.

Scene shifts...

Urmila and Rashi are in Rashi room.

Urmila: rashi dikra what happened to you. Why are you lying on bed?

Rashi: mummy I am not well. I don't know what happened. U know I am feeling like vomiting but its not coming…I don't know, and this headache…

Jigar comes and sees rashi..

Jigar: Rashi what happened? Let's go for party.. Everyone is waiting for us..

Rashi stands up and says "let's go jigar ji…"

Urmila was about to say but rashi stops her there and nodes her head. Three of them go to the party.

Scene shifts...

Dhawal talking to gopi making her laugh, just then Ahem comes in with a BIG smile. Gopi sees him and looks confused. He stands in front of the MM door and looks at gopi. He walks towards her and 4 men comes behind him with a crib. Gopi looks shocked and happy. They put the crib in the middle of the hall. (its the crib that swings argh you know what i mean.. you got the image ryt?) And kanha ji is in there (their god). The crib or shall i say jhula lol is decorated with red and white flowers. Baa, kokila, rashi, hetal, urmila, kinjal, comes downstairs looking very nice in their saree's (they got ready for party). They get happy to see such a nice crib. Gopi, kokila, rashi,kinjal, hetal and Baa walks over to the crib and sees Kanhaji's murti in there and gets more happy. Gopi tears up and Ahem wipes them telling her from now on everything will be fine.

Guests stars coming and congratulating Gohem. Dhawal, jigar who is standing in the hall welcoming the guests. Just then nisha comes and dhawal heartbeat gets fast after seeing nisha .Ahem sees nisha coming. Ahem smiles and goes to sit next to Gopi.

Dhawal roams around the door just for Nisha and just then she walks in the MM house in a very beautiful white and silver Chudidar (Anarkali style). Dhawal gives a million dollars smile and looks at her longingly. Gopi sees Nisha and gets very happy, she stands up and Nisha runs up to her. They hug and cry. Ahem sees this and gets happy, Dhawal still staring at Nisha. Jigar comes in the side of rashi and puts his shoulder on her {as she is not feeling well}

Nisha: Gopi, i missed you sooooo muchh, you cant even imagine how much i missed u both, and rashi how are you, hey You both are looking very beautiful yar.. She hugs gopi and then rashi..

Gopi: jhooot. I missed you more

Nisha: kher choro.. Your pregnant.. Sit down and from now on i will be taking care of you as I am your doctor. And tomorrow is you first appointment. Come to my clinic in the afternoon with ahem ji.

{rashi is feeling dizzy but she controls on her. She is not able to stand but she make her balance and stands and smiles}

Gopi: Okay as you say Nishu (Her nickname)

Nisha sits on the other side of nakku and dhawal still staring at her. Ahem sees Dhawal and he walks up to him...

Ahem: Eyyy tujhe kya hua? {what happened to you}

Dhawal *still lost looking at nisha*: mujhe kya hua? Kuch kuch hota hai jeeju, aap nahin samjho ge"

ahem: Kyaa?? Samjho ga.. Main bhi pisla hua hoon.. battao.. tujhe Nisha passand hai?

dhawal *comes back to sense*: who me? Ahahaha Nooo kya jeeju aap bhi naa

ahem: dont lie to mee.. tell me the truth.. if you do then i can speak to gopi and she can speak to nisha. But now that your saying you dont den i dnt have to speak to gopi.

ahem: Areee nahin nahin.. speak to gopi.. Haan passan hai!

Kokila and hetal bring baa with them and she congratulates gopi. Some women comes to dance and bless Gopi and the Child. Lights goes off. One headlights goes on Nisha and she dances on the song Kangna Re (movie: Paheli) The lights comes on she continue dancing and some other women dances with her. Dhawal watches her with open mouth and imagine himself dancing with her. The song finishes and every1 applauds. Nisha comes to sit and Dhawal comes back to present. He looks for nisha and she's sitting down next to gopi. He hits his forehead and goes sit down next to ahem..

Gopi feels sick and she runs to the bathroom to throw up, Ahem gets scared and worried but nisha tells him to calm down as it's just a symptom of pregnancy and thats normal. She also tells him to bring Gopi with him tomorrow at her clinic in the after, she will do a few check ups. Ahem agrees and goes to see Gopi. Gopi in the bathroom washing her hands when Ahem comes and hugs her. She tells him shes fine and its normal, he says he knows but is still worried. She hugs him back and they share a very light moment.

Every1 leaving as the party is over, Nisha goes over to Dhawal.

Nisha: I am going now, tell Gopi i will see her tomorrow

Dhawal: your going? Why?

Nisha: because it's late and i need to go work 2moro

Dhawal: oh okay. See you tomorrow

Nisha: tomorrow?

Dhawali: yeah I will come with Ahem and Gopi.. After all she is my sister.

Nisha: oh okay then see you tomorrow and tell gopi not to be late. Be there at 6 in the afternoon..

Dhawal: yes we will come in the morning if you want

Nisha: no its okay, come in the everning. It's fine. bye

Dhawal: byeeee

Precap : Ahem, tells gopi that dhawal Likes Nisha! Gopi looks happy. Then you see gopi in Nisha's clinic laying on the bed while nisha doing some check ups. Rashi is having vomiting..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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please update soon. i really like this ff. thanks

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