GOTW: Main Shayar To Nahi...Magar... - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
teen the yaa chaar, ginna hai bekaar
ginti badti jaayegi bas, par rahegi choti hi car
jaante hai woh ki, aayenge sab isme nahi
par unke aane ki, rukti nahi raftaar

Edited by upasana.diya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
hahhahhha
thats was nice.

chotti car hua toh kya..
bada truck bhi hai tayar...
par ab hum samje ki kaun hai population kla zimmedaar
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
population indeeed....🤣

zimmedaari ki baat se, hojaayegi bas takraar
truck me hum jaaye ye hume nahi sweekaar
waade karne se pehle, chaahiye tha sochna
hume batane tum tab, jab limousine ho taiyaar
Edited by upasana.diya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
Limo mein baitne ke liye takdeer hona chahiye.. Takdeer na sahi.. Kam se kam haisiyat toh chahiya.. Tere liye toh paidal jaana hi likha hai.. Mangvau ek Nike ya addidas?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Jake-neil

Limo mein baitne ke liye takdeer hona chahiye.. Takdeer na sahi.. Kam se kam haisiyat toh chahiya.. Tere liye toh paidal jaana hi likha hai.. Mangvau ek Nike ya addidas?



thats like it bhai....

just put them like poem and your lines will do the wonders....
the previous one looked like a post...

humaare takdeer ki baat kya karte ho aap
sochna tha NGO me kaam karne se pehle
apni baat se mukarna kaayaron ka kaam hai
aur sab ko nahi aate maarne, nehle-pe-dehle

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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
nehle pe dehla nahi toh dehle pe nehla hi marte hai
kuch aur naa sahi khaali bethe bethe ultti ginti hi seekh lete hai..
aaj hum peeche hai toh kya hua... agle kadam ki umeed toh ab bhi barkraar hai..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
👏

kadam se kadam milaane se hi to manjil milti hai
humsafar ke hone se hi to safar aasaan hoti hai
sikhaane ko bahut kuch sikha deti hai jindagi
khud par hasna jo seekhle, uski baat hi alag hoti hai
Edited by upasana.diya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
baat tumne jo kahi hai falsaffa zindagi kaa..
khud pe haste haste dusro ko hassa gaye..
aur kuch naa kar paye... do pal kay liye hi sahi kisis ki musaakn ka karan hum khud ko bana gaye..
Edited by sam1903 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
👏 wonderful

muskaan bikherna hi to hona chahiye jeevan ka uddeshya
samjh gaya jo is falsafe ko, hoga na use jindagi me koi klesh
jo is uddheshya ko sweekar karega, maan kar Eesh ka aadesh
uska jeevan kaal hoga, jaise kiya ho usne swarg me pravesh

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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
jannat ki chah mein insaan kya kya nahi karta
Yeh nahi sochta koyi ke khuda ne yeh dunya jannat se kam khoobsoorat nahi banaya
Yeh duniya ek jannat hi to hai
Bas logon ka dekhne ka nazarya alag hai

That was my first attempt at shayari..how was it?

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