FF:Save the last dance updt pg 9-4/1 - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: br2499

Why your Rashi is channelling the SNS Rashi? Jigar affected her so much? Poor thing! Hope she gets her equanimity back! Urmi is a revelation! I have no other words for her.liked the update! Please try and post longer updates!

i am dieting where writing is concerned. Will try.. Lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: saina01

Good going jake bhai.. Jigar won't have to unpack now since Rashi did it for him..lol
Please continue soon.. I can't wait to see Rashi and Gopi throwing more tantrums..lol

girls always throw tantrum😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: simran15

An understanding , caring mother Urmila,no mobiles too, w8ing to read what happened after the crash land.......................... hope Jigar is alright.

mobile and lappy are near the dressing table. And jigar was never better. ROFL..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: desisrock

OY, Jakebhai, those M&Bs you read have definitely come in handy......."a hand grabbed her, crushing her to hard, muscular bare chest"!!

Wow!! Great going, Jakebhai!! Me like!! LOL!!!

i did a research on "what a woman want?" and found that they definately want certain allure..The combo pack of brawn n brain. And those books gives us a knowledge on fantasy😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
Bro... really... you should not change the inherent character of the characters..
how cam Urmila be without phone n goggles...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: upasana.diya

Bro... really... you should not change the inherent character of the characters..
how cam Urmila be without phone n goggles...

ur impossible, di.. I created this urmila just for me. ROFL.. Not for you..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
This is absolutely lovely Jake. Too bad you dont write this anymore

Yuks
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
Sorry yuks, i dont even remember the story.😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
I can understand Jake.
I've ditched many fanfictions in the past.

But so far, it was very interesting

Yuks
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Posted: 14 years ago
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How did I miss this the first time? Just read the whole thing, any plans on updating this?

It is a very good story.

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