FF:Save the last dance updt pg 9-4/1 - Page 6

come on jake after becoming a serious writer you are leaving us hanging update the next part soon.

Oh! A Gopi who knows how to use a gadget! Your creativity is way up there Jake San😆 By the way is this where your story takes the humorous turn?

Originally posted by: shruthi2010

come on jake after becoming a serious writer you are leaving us hanging update the next part soon.

exactly my problem. Seriousness isnt my forte

Originally posted by: br2499

Oh! A Gopi who knows how to use a gadget! Your creativity is way up there Jake San😆 By the way is this where your story takes the humorous turn?Good writing and update frequently!

will update 2mrw. I am a bit lazy at times. 😉

Wow, Jakebhai, Raashi a purple beauty? Wah wah!!

And aag dono taraf lagi hai!!! Cool!! And what's Gopi's story?? Does she have an Ahem in her life?? Super cool!!

Great second chapter....now craving for the next but will wait patiently until tomorrow!! 😊

okkk... this is my 1st reaction after prologue... bhai kitne M&B ghol ke piye ho aap(how many M&Bs have you dissolved and drank) for this FF

Originally posted by: upasana.diya

okkk... this is my 1st reaction after prologue... bhai kitne M&B ghol ke piye ho aap(how many M&Bs have you dissolved and drank) for this FF

Thank you mom....
am reading the other chapters now...😉

still the deja vu....

but you have your own unique way bro... keep it up... will be waiting fro next chapter

Originally posted by: desisrock

Wow, Jakebhai, Raashi a purple beauty? Wah wah!!

And aag dono taraf lagi hai!!! Cool!! And what's Gopi's story?? Does she have an Ahem in her life?? Super cool!!

Great second chapter....now craving for the next but will wait patiently until tomorrow!! 😊

gopi's is a long story.. ROFL.. I will update later.