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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

shruti i loved it completely...beautiful update start to end... and thank you for a long update...finally ahemji proposed...😉.

- very well planned proposal in the lift... loved all his confessions...and gopi's fear and happiness at the same time
-gopi is gopi and goki are awesome... loved the way gopi listened to koki...
-u know what ... i liked the way he talked to his mom about gopi... good that he did not keep it to himself and getting frustrated...
-so now ahem and gopi are in the same room...wonder what ahem is gonna do to her ...😳😍

p.s: the lift scene - just the stopping of lift for some time reminds me of a movie pokiri (Telugu movie)



thanks munni. i did lift the scene from pokiri. i basically did not know whether i can be done r not.
aham has propsed and gopi has accepted so it seems there is only happiness for them.
but there is lots of mystery to run with.
next part will be goham marriage proposal and raji. u seemed to forgot the obstacle called urmi.
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Posted: 13 years ago

thanks you for liking the story. i will try to update soon.

@tina_1234: thanks tina. i was stuck half way. that is why the update took long.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing! I cannot wait for Part 16. Please update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh wow you know the lift proposal was really good. He carried on talking for half an hour. Tat s enough for any gal. But you should ve written ahem s reaction as well. You left it at a high point.oh wow raji in the next update!! U made me super happy
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shruti this was just brilliant, I loved it from start to finish. I can't wait to see what he will do next. Loved it. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww tat such a lovely updated , absolutely loved his style of proposing . Omg she decided to resign and had the guts to tell him the girl who suited him ,ofcourse he is bond to get angry .I love when Ahem has tears in his eyes for Gopi 😈.Ahem and Koki scene was soo sweet he sounded like a completely lost child . Edit
I love long updates😉
Edited by sweetsugar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update...i loved the way ahem proposed...it reminded me of the scene in pokiri ...and also the proposal in greys anatomy...i love ur version of gopi...she has the same values and ideas...like how she puts others happiness before hers...but at the same time she is also confident and intelligent...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vibz88

Oh wow you know the lift proposal was really good. He carried on talking for half an hour. Tat s enough for any gal. But you should ve written ahem s reaction as well. You left it at a high point.oh wow raji in the next update!! U made me super happy


thanks vibz. since writing aham's reaction began to drag, i had to cut it short. this itself came to 8 pgs in word.
next part i will add it.


@Aish3003: thanks aish. i will try to update soon. the is power shortage here and netwrk prob. i will update tommorrow.


@sbp1971: thanks shilpa. the goham romance on screen is inspiring me to write.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsugar

Aww tat such a lovely updated , absolutely loved his style of proposing . Omg she decided to resign and had the guts to tell him the girl who suited him ,ofcourse he is bond to get angry .I love when Ahem has tears in his eyes for Gopi 😈.Ahem and Koki scene was soo sweet he sounded like a completely lost child . Edit

I love long updates😉


thanks sugar. this gopi is different from the original. it is high time, aham cries for gopi. i was worried that the update was too long and had to cut half of it. i will update tomorrow. it is the goham romance which is shown on screen, that inspires me to write.

@varshu27:
thanks varshu. i did lift the scene from pokiri's tamil version. i created this gopi long back, exactly during kinjal's marrige. i was fed up with the doormat version shown then. but half way, goham romance started to reduce and i lost intest in updating.


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Posted: 13 years ago
omg such a wonderful update...loved it
so what will ahem do now??
it was very emotional too...loved koki's and ahem's moment
so sweet really loved it shruthi

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